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  • Daeus Lamb replied to the topic New book blurb – thoughts? in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 3 months ago

    @claire-h @arindown @hannahrenner @writergirl101 @erynne @imwritehere1920 @morreafirebird

    Thank you, one and all!

    Since the new one personally geeks my little heart the most and since the consensus is slightly more behind that one, I chose that as my base but I tried to integrate more substantial descriptions of the internal conflicts and external plot from the first blurb.

    What do you think?

    You may hate me when this ends. For the crimes I committed. For crimes I couldn’t dare commit. I have seen the face of God a thousand times and buckled beneath his blows. But I made him bleed as He bled my heart.

    I am a hero. They say.

    Have you ever run in terror from your perfect past?

    Do you yearn for redemption for the time you failed your dying mother by severing the father of evil’s head?

    Are your dreams filled with damnation, or has the offer of a free wish broken your soul?

    No?

    Then let me tell you my story. Venturing with a world-weary bard, a battle-hungry ranger, and a best friend who soon doubted me, I set off to destroy the Songkiller. It is only looking back that I perceive devilry of the song that made us fools. The monsters we fought bore our faces.

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