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Coralie replied to the topic Beta Sun in the forum Critiques 7 years, 4 months ago
@brandon-miller Awesome! Glad to hear it! ๐
Ah! I know what that’s like! I love Scrivener!!
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Coralie started the topic The Ugly Stepsister in the forum Critiques 7 years, 4 months ago
Hey, guys! So, I’m working on this Cinderella retelling and I’d love to know your thoughts on these two scenes, my tentative opening scene and a glassblowing scene. Here’s the link and thanks so much!
Working Title:ย The Ugly Stepsister
Word Count: 3,172
Critique: I’m really struggling with the glassblowing scene, especially. Is it too long? Is…[Read more]
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Coralie replied to the topic Beta Sun in the forum Critiques 7 years, 4 months ago
@brandon-miller Okay, so I know this has been up for eternity, but I had a day off and finally decided to just go for it! ๐
I’m intrigued. Your narrator’s voice is very particular. Your formatting was a little difficult on the eyes without indents, but otherwise fine. Also, you’ve done a great job creating a tense mood and stressful atmosphere…[Read more]
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Coralie replied to the topic The Writing Life in the forum Announcements 7 years, 4 months ago
@brandon-miller It appears to be fixed! Thank you so much! And thank you to Daeus, too!
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Coralie replied to the topic Superhero Unnamed Book! (January 31st) in the forum Accountability & Achievements 7 years, 4 months ago
AHAHHAAAAHHHHH! YAY! *throws confetti* Yay! Congrats, girl!!! Great job! Hey, lemme know if you need a reader ๐
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Coralie replied to the topic The Writing Life in the forum Announcements 7 years, 4 months ago
I have been absolutely obsessed with Sanctus Real’s Confidence for the last week or so. I can’t get it out of my head. It’s beautifully written and so powerful too! Well performed and very inspiring.
Excited about the article! Thanks for sharing! Very little snow so far, but it’s been bitter cold! We had snow where I live this morning (not even…[Read more]
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Coralie replied to the topic Superhero Unnamed Book! (January 31st) in the forum Accountability & Achievements 7 years, 4 months ago
Great work! Keep at it!!
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Coralie's profile was updated 7 years, 4 months ago
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Coralie replied to the topic Squirrel Problems…Also Not-Goodbye in the forum Announcements 7 years, 4 months ago
So @brandon-miller I’m not getting notifications when people tag me. Is there a way to fix this?
@scribbles Wait! WHAT?! NO!!! *balls* Rachel!! <3 Ima cry. Iย amย crying!! I don’t know what to say. </3 I love you and I am so happy for you! God will do amazing things through you. Happy belated birthday. I totally understand being overwhelmed. And, c…[Read more]
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Coralie replied to the topic For my little brother Thaddeus in the forum Prayer Requests 7 years, 5 months ago
Oh! I’m so glad to hear that! Yay!
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Coralie replied to the topic Vacation's Over in the forum Announcements 7 years, 5 months ago
@brandon-miller Ooh! Busy week then! ๐
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Coralie replied to the topic Superhero Unnamed Book! (January 31st) in the forum Accountability & Achievements 7 years, 5 months ago
How goes it? ๐ Gosh! That’s a lot of words for one month! You can do it! Wow! Ooh, love the gold letters!!
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Coralie replied to the topic For my little brother Thaddeus in the forum Prayer Requests 7 years, 5 months ago
Oh my goodness!! I will definitely keep him in my prayers!!! And you and your family, too!
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Coralie replied to the topic Vacation's Over in the forum Announcements 7 years, 5 months ago
So…how is everyone? ๐
I wrote nearly over 1100 words for my story the other night! It’s not a lot, but it’s progress! I’m excited! I got two new scenes to add to my growing collection for the story and am still working on roughing things out overall. It was cool to get something on paper.
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Coralie replied to the topic Prayer Request for my Brother in the forum Prayer Requests 7 years, 5 months ago
@rolena-hatfield Virtual hugs are awesome ๐ They keep ya goin’ sometimes! Actually, oddly enough, I wrote that in a journal as part of a challenge almost two years ago, before any of this started. At the time, it just kind of flowed out of the pen, but I “happened” across it a week or so ago and it’s been in the back of my mind ever since!
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Coralie replied to the topic MERRY CHRISTMAS! in the forum Announcements 7 years, 5 months ago
@pookiemonster That’s amazing! Okay, the doc said access denied, but it let me send a request for access?? *shrugs*
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Coralie replied to the topic PSA (Personal School Announcement) and Other Info in the forum Announcements 7 years, 5 months ago
@silverdragon Ah, I haveย The Fire Within sitting on my shelf right now. I read the original trilogy and enjoyed them very much. I haven’t read any of the newer ones he’s put out, but I did finally purchase the fourth one to check it out–still haven’t yet. Do you have any other dragony recommendations? (Besidesย Eragon, which I’ve read and own a…[Read more]
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Coralie replied to the topic PSA (Personal School Announcement) and Other Info in the forum Announcements 7 years, 5 months ago
@brandon-miller Wow! Isn’t it amazing how God works things out like that? Congratulations! I’m so glad to hear you’ve found a way to provide for yourself and surround yourself with support at the same time! He sounds like a wonderful boss. ๐ Keep us updated!!
I can’t wait to get back to the critique forums!
@scribbles I know the feeling!!! I…[Read more]
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Coralie replied to the topic MERRY TWINKLING CHRISTMAS in the forum Announcements 7 years, 5 months ago
Merry Christmas, guys! And happy new year!!! Anyone got cool plans for New Year’s Eve? What are y’alls goals for 2019?
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Coralie replied to the topic Prayer Request for my Brother in the forum Prayer Requests 7 years, 5 months ago
*giant hugs all around cause I loves hugs!*
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