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@brandon-miller Okay, so I know this has been up for eternity, but I had a day off and finally decided to just go for it! 🙂

I’m intrigued. Your narrator’s voice is very particular. Your formatting was a little difficult on the eyes without indents, but otherwise fine. Also, you’ve done a great job creating a tense mood and stressful atmosphere in the piece. To answer your questions:

1. I felt like Sally was maybe early, mid-thirties. She’s got a job, a family, kids in school, etc.

2. Mm, I kind of saw the stereotypical office of identical cubicles with little aisles in between all in the center of a border of glass-pained office windows, maybe a printer on the corner next to a water stand? She said she works at a waste facility, right? A shipping facility? Power companies call in, so…something to do with maybe proper disposal of something or another?

3. Her problem right now is that her bosses think an order was not addressed, an order she had no knowledge of and has now discovered has already been processed without approval and with some strange elements.

Well, I hope it’s not too late for any of this to be useful. Sorry for taking so long to get around to this! And thanks for sharing!