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AHHHAHAAH! Word War! YAS! Aw man, it’s Friday. Dang man, I wish I had known sooner! I’ll have to count my words so far and see how many more I can add this weekend!

Wait! There’s a war?! What kind of war!?? *please let it be a word war!!!*

Ah! Yay! I will try not to forget! Today’s a full day, but hopefully this weekend I can look!

Oh, neat!

@missfaeriekaiti Oh no! I hope you’re feeling better!!

@quinn-ofallon Ooh, Lynn makes a good point with that last line. I personally loved it cause it was exciting and drew me in, but perhaps you might consider something more open-ended that still has the same strong sway? Maybe like “But when everyone you trust is a liar, how can you find the…[Read more]

@missfaeriekaiti @graceabounds2129 and @happyholly_c Thanks for the congrats, guys! XD MY SISTER AND I GOT OUR BRIDESMAIDS DRESSES THIS WEEK! They came like a whole month early! So that’s super awesome!

Haha, I was supposed to post in the critique folder and totally forgot! I’ll see if I can scrounge something up this weekend! But, please, y’all…[Read more]

@quinn-ofallon Great suggestions! I kind of rotate between the sub-verb; clause, sub-verb; sub-verb, clause. Your suggested beginnings are all great! I use a lot of those, too. Thanks so much for sharing them!

@missfaeriekaiti Wow! What great examples! I struggle with the deep first/third perspectives, so these really help!! Starting sentences…[Read more]

Yay! That’s super exciting!! And I’m glad it helped a little 🙂

So, it isn’t an excerpt? Is it just like flash fiction?

Okay, wow! First impression is when can I read this sucker?! It sounds fantastic! I’m intrigued by the storyline. The first line was a big hook, for sure. I loved that opening line and even the last line. It tied everything together really well. So, overall, it looks and sounds professional. I like it a lot!

I didn’t get a sci-fi, fantasy, or…[Read more]

What different forms do you use? Can you give a few examples? I’m looking to expand my repertoire XD

Oh! I’ve read this! Didn’t you bring this up to brainstorm for a prompt war? Cool!

I like it. I like the idea. It does need expanding a little, I think. I’d kind of like to know what happened to get him in this place and he definitely should have said something to his girl! Truthfully, I’d love the background on their relationship. This feels so…[Read more]

So! I went to my first conference this year! I think I’ve already told some of you, but this is the conference space, so….*confetti* Yay! XD

Also, I am definitely going to find a way to attend Realm Makers next year because I have heard so many incredible things about it from so many people and on Instagram, too! They even had super cute…[Read more]

@graceabounds2129 Congrats to your sister! I actually totally understand. My brother is getting married in October and his sweet fiance asked my sister and I to be bridesmaids. She’s doing the planning, but it’s still been crazy on our end. I can’t imagine what all she’s doing!!

@missfaeriekaiti Oh, cool! I’ll look them up here in a minute and…[Read more]

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Ooh, I haven’t heard of those. I’ll have to check them out. Good reading is time well spent! Hah, “monster-length” sounds right up my alley! XD

Boop. Anyone here? I miss y’all. I even made new Rillumen logos cause I missed y’all so much! What have y’all been up to?

@rolena-hatfield, @brandon-miller, @nuetrobolt, @graceabounds2129, @missfaeriekaiti, @pookiemonster, @happyholly_c, and @kayla-joy

Sorry, guys, I’ve been travelling a lot and I’m packing for a move in a few weeks, so I’m a little scattered at the moment! Keep tagging me though and I’ll jump in wherever I can whenever I can until I get moved and settled back down and can contribute more steadily!

@nuetrobolt It is amazing that you got 22 in a month! That’s half of NaNo and NaNo is crazy! XD

And, thanks! I’m trying really hard to keep it up. It’s a struggle!