Dashuri Halad

@elisha-starquill

I am going to switch up a couple of aspects of the fight between Racleva and Theseus so that it better matches his training. Just for future reference, do you want Racleva to be more of a redemption arc character or is she a hard-core villain? (Those are my own made up terms, if y’all know the correct ones they would be very…[Read more]

@elisha-starquill

Good job. The touch with Theseus being surprised was perfect, that was exactly how he would act as he is quite awkward around girls unless he knows them well. There are a couple of things that I realized I didn’t put in my earlier description of him that are probably important. He is incredibly independent, so after he gets over…[Read more]

@anne-the-noob14

Alright, thanks! I had envisioned the map room with a long hallway coming out of heading towards the back of the castle with doors off of both side of it. The reason I originally thought this was because I was imagining the green door as the front of the castle. I am personally fine with envisioning it either…[Read more]

Does anybody else do anything with Mystery. I have dabbled in it at times, but I struggle to find a plot that is not too cliche or stereotypical. What would ya’ll suggest?

@anne-the-noob14

Thanks for the tip! I have always struggled with punctuation in general, and your explanation has made the most sense so far. I will make sure to correct it in the future. Sorry that I got the layout wrong, I am told that I change the look of settings in my mind a lot when they are described to me. A drawing or an in-depth…[Read more]

I am going to go ahead and write Theseus in because I feel like he would have a lot of fun in this setting. Please tell me if I get any details wrong.

Theseus Robinson awoke from his slumber to the crack of thunder. As he clawed his way from the depths of sleep he realized that something was not r…[Read more]

I am going to go ahead and introduce my character. His name is Theseus Robinson and he lives in an alternate universe/the future. Theseus is a nephilim who became a Christian while living with his grandparents.  He is 17 years old, 6’3″, and well muscled. He has emerald eyes and rusty blond hair. A long scar stretches across his forehead that he…[Read more]

@ariella-newheart

Is there a limit to how many characters a single author can bring in? There are a couple of characters that I don’t have developed well enough to bring them in right now, but I do want to bring them in eventually. Can I bring one in now and some others in later?

I got 3200 words. Did I get them in in time?

@j-a-penrose

I am at a camp until the end of July. Sorry that I won’t be able to help anymore.

@j-a-penrose

I personally think that Tahir’s writing is amazing, but there are parts that I wish would have been left out. It seems as though she is trying to force romance where there shouldn’t necessarily be any. Luckily she just hints at it and doesn’t force it upon you. I would definitely recommend the books.

@elisha-starquill

I am actually on a math team, and I am lucky in that a couple of the people who go to my home-school co-op also write and enjoy math.  What part of Texas do you live in? My god-parents live in San Antonio, I have a couple of friends in Dallas, and I attend a camp around 2 hours drive east of Dallas.

@j-a-penrose

I have heard…[Read more]

@fallen-prince      @elisha-starquill

Just realized that I asked y’all tons of questions without introducing myself. Sorry!

My name is Joseph Tarrant. I am a homeschooled 15 year old who lives in Nowheresville, Indiana (actually just outside of it.)  I am a part time lawyer, part time historian, part time math-tutor who tries to fit in all of…[Read more]

@fallen-prince                        @elisha-starquill

Welcome! It is great to have y’all. Now I must ask you a series of questions:

What are y’all’s favorite: Songs?    Movies?    Books?   Quotes?

Do you have any: Pets?      Siblings?      Interesting Talents?

Can you: Speak another language? Play any sports?

Are you still in school, and if…[Read more]

I won’t be able to finish the story. My grandmother came into town unexpectedly and I only see her like twice a year. Sorry.

If one of ya’ll could finish the story that would be great. I might be able to get back for some beta-reading, but I can’t write any more of it.

Go Parimis

@steward-of-the-pen

@pursuewisdom

For the rest of the story I am thinking

He realizes that his impetuosity, lack of forethought, and loner mentality can endanger people and needs to be changed.

He realizes that he has put the rest of the Resistance in danger and tries to figure out a way to save them.

He realizes that the only way they won’t…[Read more]