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				<title>Brianna Storm Hilvety posted a new activity comment</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/how-to-delicately-yet-meaningfully-write-a-suicide-scene/comment-page-1/#comment-12063</link>
				<pubDate>Mon, 20 Mar 2023 18:12:57 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank you for your honesty, Malissa. But I think you may have misunderstood the intent of the article. Sophia mentions that “a suicide victim is guilty and forfeits the opportunity to repent.” She means that the person can’t <em>seek</em> forgiveness prior to death, <em>not</em> that they’re incapable of <em>receiving</em> forgiveness. As you pointed out, that part is up to God.</p>
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Last August, a young man in my church killed himself. He came from a large family, and our community loved him. I decided to chronicle the impact of his death, [&hellip;]			]]></content:encoded>
				
				
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				<pubDate>Fri, 27 Jan 2023 05:09:48 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Haha! Our entire team was begging me not to cut that nickname during the editing stage, but I would have kept it without being coerced. &#x1f609;</p>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 27 Jan 2023 05:04:32 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for the suggestion! But we’ve already experimented with a similar idea (our podcast host used to read our articles aloud years ago) and it wasn’t popular enough to be worth our time and resources to continue.</p>
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				<title>Brianna Storm Hilvety posted a new activity comment</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/3-tips-for-writing-your-first-historical-fiction-novel/comment-page-1/#comment-11868</link>
				<pubDate>Thu, 01 Sep 2022 21:47:52 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>You might find these articles about character voices helpful:</p>
<p><a href="https://storyembers.org/how-to-write-realistic-character-dialects-without-overdoing-it/" rel="nofollow ugc">https://storyembers.org/how-to-write-realistic-character-dialects-without-overdoing-it/</a></p>
<p><a href="https://storyembers.org/how-to-develop-unmistakable-speaking-styles-for-your-character/" rel="nofollow ugc">https://storyembers.org/how-to-develop-unmistakable-speaking-styles-for-your-character/</a></p>
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				<a href="https://storyembers.org/members/lorizscott/" rel="nofollow ugc">Lori Z. Scott</a> wrote a new post Have you ever come across an incident from the past so packed with intrigue that your mind kept returning to it? Do you approach parts of history—the Oregon Trail, Egyptian p [&hellip;]			]]></content:encoded>
				
				
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				<title>Brianna Storm Hilvety posted a new activity comment</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/the-secret-to-writing-depressed-but-not-hopeless-characters/comment-page-1/#comment-11781</link>
				<pubDate>Thu, 21 Jul 2022 20:40:52 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>And here are the links to the series Josiah mentioned if you’re interested in reading them: </p>
<blockquote class="wp-embedded-content" data-secret="JsVvqbVoma"><p><a href="https://storyembers.org/tricky-subjects-series/" rel="nofollow ugc">Tricky Subjects Series</a></p></blockquote>
<p><iframe loading="lazy" class="wp-embedded-content" sandbox="allow-scripts" security="restricted"title="&#8220;Tricky Subjects Series&#8221; &#8212; Story Embers" src="https://storyembers.org/tricky-subjects-series/embed/#?secret=GS8a2Qdoxy#?secret=JsVvqbVoma" data-secret="JsVvqbVoma" width="600" height="338" frameborder="0" marginwidth="0" marginheight="0" scrolling="no"></iframe></p>
<blockquote class="wp-embedded-content" data-secret="wEF9Bl0k5x"><p><a href="https://storyembers.org/beyond-the-brokenness-series/" rel="nofollow ugc">Beyond the Brokenness Series</a></p></blockquote>
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				<a href="https://storyembers.org/members/josiah/" rel="nofollow ugc">Josiah DeGraaf</a> wrote a new post Editor’s Note: This is the second part of our series exploring the merits of Coral by Sara Ella. You can read the first installment here. Beware that this article and its co [&hellip;]			]]></content:encoded>
				
				
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				<title>Brianna Storm Hilvety posted a new activity comment</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 24 Jun 2022 22:03:36 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Yes, you’re allowed to get feedback from other writers on our forum. &#x1f642;</p>
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				<a href="https://storyembers.org/members/kingdomfire7/" rel="nofollow ugc">KingdomFire7</a> posted an update Soooo&#8230; I&#8217;m thinking of submitting a story to the contest, but I&#8217;m not sure if it&#8217;s quite good enough. Would it be okay to post it here for critiques?
( <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/daeus-lamb/' rel="nofollow ugc">@daeus-lamb</a>, <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/briannastorm/' rel="nofollow ugc">@briannastorm</a> [just [&hellip;]			]]></content:encoded>
				
				
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				<title>Brianna Storm Hilvety changed their profile picture</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 30 May 2022 00:50:44 -0400</pubDate>

				
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				<title>Brianna Storm Hilvety&#039;s profile was updated</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 14 Dec 2021 19:23:29 -0400</pubDate>

				
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				<link>https://storyembers.org/announcing-the-winners-of-our-third-annual-poetry-contest/comment-page-1/#comment-9102</link>
				<pubDate>Fri, 29 Oct 2021 20:04:51 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Aww, I’m glad that the honorable mention brightened your day! And yes, you’re free to post your poem anywhere you like since we didn’t acquire it for publication. &#x1f642;</p>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 28 Oct 2021 13:00:04 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks to everyone who courageously shared their work with us! We received entries that were whimsical as well as touching, in a wide range of styles and lengths. After many hours of reading and rating each poem, [&hellip;] <img loading="lazy" src="https://storyembers.org/wp-content/uploads/2019/12/Poetry_Winners.jpg" /></p>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 29 Jul 2021 18:35:03 -0400</pubDate>

				
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				<link>https://storyembers.org/how-to-improve-your-writing-every-second-of-the-day/comment-page-1/#comment-7244</link>
				<pubDate>Mon, 24 May 2021 14:22:14 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>“Blame my editor for teaching me this.” I feel very called out. &#x1f602;</p>
<p>By the way, I used to do the cloud exercise a lot back when I wrote stories. &#x1f609;</p>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 19 Nov 2020 14:00:20 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks to everyone who courageously shared their work with us! We received entries that were whimsical as well as touching, in a wide range of styles and lengths. After many hours of reading and rating each poem, [&hellip;] <img loading="lazy" src="https://storyembers.org/wp-content/uploads/2019/12/Poetry_Winners.jpg" /></p>
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				<title>Brianna Storm Hilvety replied to the topic Are There Topics Christians Should Not Write About? in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/are-there-topics-christians-should-not-write-about/#post-118312</link>
				<pubDate>Mon, 17 Aug 2020 23:34:34 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/zee/' rel="nofollow ugc">@zee</a> We published an article series a couple years ago that might help you wrestle through this question. &#x1f642; You can read the first installment here: <a href="https://storyembers.org/dear-christian-novelists-cleanness-is-not-next-to-godliness/" rel="nofollow ugc">https://storyembers.org/dear-christian-novelists-cleanness-is-not-next-to-godliness/</a></p>
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				<title>Brianna Storm Hilvety replied to the topic Story Embers T-shirt? in the forum Guidelines &#038; FAQ</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/story-embers-t-shirt/#post-117190</link>
				<pubDate>Thu, 30 Jul 2020 23:33:00 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/arindown/' rel="nofollow ugc">@arindown</a> As Josiah explained, we don’t have any current plans to branch into merchandise, but if we ever do, either I (as graphics director) or Mariposa (as the graphic designer under me) would likely create the items. Thanks for the offer, though.</p>
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				<title>Brianna Storm Hilvety replied to the topic Story Embers Contest in the forum Announcements</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/story-embers-contest/#post-116723</link>
				<pubDate>Sun, 26 Jul 2020 01:07:01 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/bama-rose/' rel="nofollow ugc">@bama-rose</a> Daeus is correct. &#x1f642; Josiah and I are still in the process of reviewing the entries.</p>
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				<title>Brianna Storm Hilvety posted a new activity comment</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/three-truths-you-may-not-realize-about-professional-editing/comment-page-1/#comment-5133</link>
				<pubDate>Thu, 28 May 2020 16:46:57 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Editorial services do vary both in scope and in price, so you don’t need to hire the most expensive editor on the market, but you shouldn’t put your trust in any person with rates that are much lower than the industry standard (which can be found here: <a href="https://www.the-efa.org/rates/" rel="nofollow ugc">https://www.the-efa.org/rates/</a>). Cheap rates (such as only a few hundred dollars for content or&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-79851"><a href="https://storyembers.org/three-truths-you-may-not-realize-about-professional-editing/comment-page-1/#comment-5133" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<a href="https://storyembers.org/members/josiah/" rel="nofollow ugc">Josiah DeGraaf</a> wrote a new post “Do I need an editor?”

 

I’ve seen this question countless times on blogs, forums, and Facebook posts. Authors considering self-publishing often wonder whether a profes [&hellip;]			]]></content:encoded>
				
				
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				<pubDate>Fri, 06 Mar 2020 06:52:28 -0400</pubDate>

				
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				<title>Brianna Storm Hilvety replied to the topic Forum Application in the forum Guidelines &#038; FAQ</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/forum-application/#post-103207</link>
				<pubDate>Thu, 26 Dec 2019 22:10:20 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/overcomer/' rel="nofollow ugc">@overcomer</a></p>
<p>I’ll tag <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/daeus-lamb/' rel="nofollow ugc">@daeus-lamb</a> for the forum application question.</p>
<p>Regarding the blog, the mobile version does have a search bar. You just have to scroll down to the bottom (it’s right under the Older Entries button). &#x1f642; You’ll find article categories down there too (as well as in the menu at the top).</p>
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				<title>Brianna Storm Hilvety replied to the topic To propose or not to propose, but HOW is the question... in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/to-propose-or-not-to-propose-but-how-is-the-question/#post-102906</link>
				<pubDate>Thu, 19 Dec 2019 16:18:32 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/cassie-hartfinh/' rel="nofollow ugc">@cassie-hartfinh</a></p>
<p>I haven’t worked much with book proposals myself, but I found a good article by Jerry B. Jenkins on the subject (which does mention formatting): <a href="https://jerryjenkins.com/how-to-write-a-book-proposal/" rel="nofollow ugc">https://jerryjenkins.com/how-to-write-a-book-proposal/</a></p>
<p>And if you’d like a visual example, here is a proposal Jill Williamson created for one of her books: <a href="http://jillwilliamson.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/07/Captives_Proposal_Example.pdf" rel="nofollow ugc"></a><a href="http://jillwilliamson.com/wp-c&#038;hellip" rel="nofollow ugc">http://jillwilliamson.com/wp-c&#038;hellip</a>;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-70859"><a href="https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/to-propose-or-not-to-propose-but-how-is-the-question/#post-102906" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Brianna Storm Hilvety wrote a new post</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 05 Dec 2019 14:00:38 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks to everyone who courageously shared their work with us! We received entries that were whimsical as well as touching, in a wide range of styles and lengths. After many hours of reading and rating each poem, [&hellip;] <img loading="lazy" src="https://storyembers.org/wp-content/uploads/2019/12/Poetry_Winners.jpg" /></p>
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				<title>Brianna Storm Hilvety posted a new activity comment</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/what-hand-copying-the-book-thief-taught-me-about-strong-prose/comment-page-1/#comment-4384</link>
				<pubDate>Thu, 05 Dec 2019 06:32:13 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>As an editor who specializes in style, I thought I’d jump into this conversation. You’re right that these kind of descriptions would bog a story down if they <em>fill every page</em> or are inserted <em>only</em> for embellishment. But I think you may have overlooked this sentence in the introduction of the article: “You must pay careful attention to the impre&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-70335"><a href="https://storyembers.org/what-hand-copying-the-book-thief-taught-me-about-strong-prose/comment-page-1/#comment-4384" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<a href="https://storyembers.org/members/daeus-lamb/" rel="nofollow ugc">Daeus Lamb</a> wrote a new post On my first read of The Book Thief, the peerless prose stunned me. I wanted to achieve Zusak’s skill, but I didn’t know how. So I began a nightly experiment to see if any techniques wou [&hellip;]			]]></content:encoded>
				
				
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				<title>Brianna Storm Hilvety changed their profile picture</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 02 Dec 2019 01:48:47 -0400</pubDate>

				
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				<title>Brianna Storm Hilvety replied to the topic Writing Life : Getting a Professional Edit in the forum Announcements</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/writing-life-getting-a-professional-edit/#post-89363</link>
				<pubDate>Mon, 13 May 2019 06:31:14 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/taylorclogston/' rel="nofollow ugc">@taylorclogston</a></p>
<p>I’m going to invade Jess’s guild for a minute because I’m very sorry to hear that you’ve had a bad experience with editors. From what you’ve said, it sounds like whoever you worked with wasn’t qualified, which I’m afraid is the case with many alleged “professional” editors. A line editor should do much more for your prose than c&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-57798"><a href="https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/writing-life-getting-a-professional-edit/#post-89363" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Brianna Storm Hilvety replied to the topic Tone... dictionary... something?? in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/tone-dictionary-something/#post-88645</link>
				<pubDate>Sun, 05 May 2019 20:36:08 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><em><a href="https://www.amazon.com/Emotion-Thesaurus-Writers-Character-Expression-ebook/dp/B07MTQ7W6Q/ref=sr_1_4?crid=148BO6NKDWUKC&amp;keywords=emotion+thesaurus&amp;qid=1557087193&amp;s=gateway&amp;sprefix=Emotion+thesa%2Caps%2C163&amp;sr=8-4" rel="nofollow ugc">The Emotion Thesaurus</a></em> by Angela Ackerman &amp; Becca Puglisi might be helpful to you. It doesn’t cover tone, but it gives suggestions for how to effectively convey emotions through a character’s body language. I’m wondering if the problem is that you’re not infusing enough emotions into the scene and that’s why it feels sterile. These posts from&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-57137"><a href="https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/tone-dictionary-something/#post-88645" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Brianna Storm Hilvety replied to the topic RAIDERS OF THE LOST ARC II: THE LEGEND OF THE FORBIDDEN BURIAL GROUNDS in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/raiders-of-the-lost-arc-ii-the-legend-of-the-forbidden-burial-grounds/#post-85139</link>
				<pubDate>Wed, 03 Apr 2019 16:12:44 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I love how I knew where Josiah hid the clue and am leading the writing team on this quest. &#x1f602;&#x1f44d;&#x1f3fb;&#x1f44d;&#x1f3fb; (That’s actually a fairly accurate representation of how I interact with our publishing personnel&#8230;which is probably information I should not be disclosing to the public. &#x1f61b; So shhhh.)</p>
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				<title>Brianna Storm Hilvety posted a new activity comment</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 28 Mar 2019 04:30:28 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>If you click the Pinterest button at the bottom of the post, the graphic with the title should appear as an option. &#x1f642;</p>
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				<title>Brianna Storm Hilvety replied to the topic Hi! in the forum Introduce Yourself</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/hi-9/#post-81774</link>
				<pubDate>Tue, 12 Mar 2019 01:19:40 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/briannajean/' rel="nofollow ugc">@briannajean</a> I noticed that we share the same first name (and spelling!), so I had to pop in to say hello! &#x1f609; I’m glad your friend steered you our way, and I hope that you find our content to be edifying.</p>
<p>Sounds like you lead a busy life and have several fun projects in the works! I’m a homeschool grad, and many others around here come from tha&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-50648"><a href="https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/hi-9/#post-81774" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Brianna Storm Hilvety replied to the topic Christian Publishers/Agents in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/christian-publishers-agents/#post-72766</link>
				<pubDate>Sat, 19 Jan 2019 22:14:38 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/bekah/' rel="nofollow ugc">@bekah</a> <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/evelyn/' rel="nofollow ugc">@evelyn</a> <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/taylorclogston/' rel="nofollow ugc">@taylorclogston</a> Christian Manuscript Submissions is a legitimate business, so it’s not a scam, but also probably not worthwhile except as a last resort if you haven’t been able to get an agent/publisher on your own. This post gives some helpful advice about manuscript submission ser&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-41937"><a href="https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/christian-publishers-agents/#post-72766" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Brianna Storm Hilvety changed their profile picture</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 11 Dec 2018 00:27:38 -0400</pubDate>

				
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				<title>Brianna Storm Hilvety replied to the topic What&#039;s a good word count? in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/whats-a-good-word-count/#post-58897</link>
				<pubDate>Sat, 10 Nov 2018 15:51:17 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Here’s a post from <em>Writer’s Digest</em> that answers this question rather straightforwardly: <a href="http://www.writersdigest.com/online-editor/long-novel-chapters" rel="nofollow ugc">http://www.writersdigest.com/online-editor/long-novel-chapters</a></p>
<p>And here’s an article that covers the issue in more depth: <a href="https://wordcounter.net/blog/2017/02/15/102944_how-many-words-chapter.html" rel="nofollow ugc">https://wordcounter.net/blog/2017/02/15/102944_how-many-words-chapter.html</a></p>
<p>Basically, you want to let your content&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-28089"><a href="https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/whats-a-good-word-count/#post-58897" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Brianna Storm Hilvety posted a new activity comment</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/moonlit-poetry/comment-page-1/#comment-1681</link>
				<pubDate>Wed, 07 Nov 2018 16:28:44 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>After reading this poem, I’ve decided that the moon is an introvert—and probably an INFJ. &#x1f609; This sounds like what I’d imagine an extrovert thinking when they look at an introvert. You’ve captured life’s beauty yet again, Cindy! &#x1f49c;</p>
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Are you shy?
You glow too brightly for that.
You look lonely.
You also look whole.
How do you manage that?
I want to understand you,
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				<title>Brianna Storm Hilvety replied to the topic Finishing a book in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/finishing-a-book/#post-56746</link>
				<pubDate>Tue, 30 Oct 2018 20:07:24 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/nuetrobolt/' rel="nofollow ugc">@nuetrobolt</a> Hope nailed it, but I will add that the more revisions you perform, the better your chances of success (either at getting traditionally published or gaining an audience of readers who respect, value, and enjoy your books). Writing multiple drafts, recruiting beta readers, and then hiring a professional editor to help you with your&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-25997"><a href="https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/finishing-a-book/#post-56746" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Brianna Storm Hilvety posted a new activity comment</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/how-should-christian-authors-depict-darkness/comment-page-1/#comment-1456</link>
				<pubDate>Mon, 22 Oct 2018 17:48:44 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Yeah, I agree that how deeply you can go depends upon the type of villain and whether he/she has a redemption arc. I’m currently reading a series that jumps into the villain’s POV a few times, but the focus is more on what’s happening around him than his dark thoughts, so it’s not off-putting. I’ve read other stories, however, where the villain’s&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-23582"><a href="https://storyembers.org/how-should-christian-authors-depict-darkness/comment-page-1/#comment-1456" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Brianna Storm Hilvety replied to the topic Nice to meet me (hopefully) in the forum Introduce Yourself</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/nice-to-meet-me-hopefully/#post-54069</link>
				<pubDate>Sun, 21 Oct 2018 05:19:47 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/ellen-blanc/' rel="nofollow ugc">@ellen-blanc</a> <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/scribbles/' rel="nofollow ugc">@scribbles</a> *Peeks out of my hermitage* Did I hear someone mention introversion, purple, and sarcasm? Do I have a clone? &#x1f609;</p>
<p>Welcome to Story Embers, Ellen! I love the poem you shared! &#x1f49c; You’re the only person here who has introduced herself with a poem, so kudos for being creative. &#x1f44d;&#x1f3fb;</p>
<p>Since no one has asked you the pivotal question ye&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-23430"><a href="https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/nice-to-meet-me-hopefully/#post-54069" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Brianna Storm Hilvety replied to the topic How do I put this? in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/how-do-i-put-this/page/2/#post-48683</link>
				<pubDate>Fri, 21 Sep 2018 21:16:35 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/wordsmith/' rel="nofollow ugc">@wordsmith</a> The definition of <i>proficient</i> is “well advanced in an art, occupation, or branch of knowledge.” This doesn’t mean a writer is perfect or that they have no more room to grow, but that they have a solid grasp on fundamental writing principles and techniques, as well as a fair amount of experience (by getting published at various places&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-18437"><a href="https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/how-do-i-put-this/page/2/#post-48683" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Brianna Storm Hilvety replied to the topic Greetings! in the forum Introduce Yourself</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/greetings-they/#post-44650</link>
				<pubDate>Sat, 25 Aug 2018 18:22:51 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/scarletimmortalized/' rel="nofollow ugc">@scarletimmortalized</a> Welcome to Story Embers!</p>
<p>If you hang around here very long, someone will start talking about MBTI, so I’ll go ahead and ask you the pivotal question: what is your personality type? I’m an INFJ who frequently tests as an INTJ, but that can’t be accurate because I’m too emotional. &#x1f61c; So I like to tell people I can switch between&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-14681"><a href="https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/greetings-they/#post-44650" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Brianna Storm Hilvety replied to the topic Writing for money alone? in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/writing-for-money-alone/#post-44647</link>
				<pubDate>Sat, 25 Aug 2018 17:55:52 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/karthmin/' rel="nofollow ugc">@karthmin</a> Thank you for the clarification. &#x1f642; And no worries—I’m a night owl myself, so I’ve written some things in the wee hours of the morning that I’ve had to disentangle the next day because my point got misplaced. &#x1f609;</p>
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				<title>Brianna Storm Hilvety replied to the topic Writing for money alone? in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/writing-for-money-alone/#post-44643</link>
				<pubDate>Sat, 25 Aug 2018 17:43:31 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/hope-ann/' rel="nofollow ugc">@hope-ann</a> I would classify proofreading as a technical skill since it only involves correcting errors, but other levels of editing are not. No two editors will revise a book <em>exactly</em> the same way. They may flag several of the same issues, but they may not suggest the same solutions. Editing is a creative endeavor, and editors have unique areas of&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-14672"><a href="https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/writing-for-money-alone/#post-44643" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Brianna Storm Hilvety replied to the topic Writing for money alone? in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/writing-for-money-alone/#post-44623</link>
				<pubDate>Sat, 25 Aug 2018 16:35:16 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>I don’t think you caught the distinction I was drawing in my post. There’s a difference between entering a creativity-oriented profession solely for the money vs. accepting a single, short-term job because you need the income. Freelance writers and editors aren’t tied to one employer. Over the course of a year, a freelancer will (typi&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-14651"><a href="https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/writing-for-money-alone/#post-44623" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Brianna Storm Hilvety replied to the topic Writing for money alone? in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/writing-for-money-alone/#post-44383</link>
				<pubDate>Fri, 24 Aug 2018 15:27:33 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I’m going to jump into this discussion even though I wasn’t invited, because I’ve wrestled with this question as an editor. &#x1f609;</p>
<p>I don’t see anything morally wrong with doing a certain job for the sake of supporting yourself/your family or to supplement the income from endeavors you’re passionate about but aren’t as lucrative. My association&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-14399"><a href="https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/writing-for-money-alone/#post-44383" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Brianna Storm Hilvety replied to the topic Guild Submission in the forum Guidelines &#038; FAQ</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/guild-submission/#post-42450</link>
				<pubDate>Mon, 30 Jul 2018 00:05:29 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I shall summon <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/daeus-lamb/' rel="nofollow ugc">@daeus-lamb</a>, our community manager, to come to your assistance. &#x1f642;</p>
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				<title>Brianna Storm Hilvety replied to the topic Traditional Publishing Anyone? in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/traditional-publishing-anyone/#post-41226</link>
				<pubDate>Wed, 11 Jul 2018 23:40:30 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/bigideaskc/' rel="nofollow ugc">@bigideaskc</a> <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/evelyn/' rel="nofollow ugc">@evelyn</a></p>
<p>Here’s an article with thorough descriptions of the different types of publishers and an especially detailed list of reasons to be wary of vanity publishers:</p>
<p><a href="http://www.sfwa.org/other-resources/for-authors/writer-beware/vanity/" rel="nofollow ugc">http://www.sfwa.org/other-resources/for-authors/writer-beware/vanity/</a></p>
<p>Hope that helps! &#x1f642;</p>
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				<title>Brianna Storm Hilvety replied to the topic Traditional Publishing Anyone? in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/traditional-publishing-anyone/#post-41223</link>
				<pubDate>Wed, 11 Jul 2018 22:46:09 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/bigideaskc/' rel="nofollow ugc">@bigideaskc</a> <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/evelyn/' rel="nofollow ugc">@evelyn</a></p>
<blockquote><p>By the way, it’s MUCH more expensive to traditionally publish a book than to self-publish it.</p></blockquote>
<p>Traditional publishing doesn’t cost a cent. If your publisher has asked you for money, it’s not a traditional publishing deal but likely a vanity publisher. A traditional publisher will pay <em>you</em> rather than the other way around.</p>
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				<title>Brianna Storm Hilvety replied to the topic I AM FINISHED. Like, actually finished. in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 04 Jul 2018 06:25:10 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/snapper/' rel="nofollow ugc">@snapper</a> No celebration is complete without truckloads of confetti and ice cream, so here you go:  &#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;&#x1f389;</p>
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<p>I hope you’re rewarding yourself with a <em>real</em> treat (and not just virtual ones), be&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-10556"><a href="https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/i-am-finished-like-actually-finished/#post-40545" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Brianna Storm Hilvety replied to the topic Looking for laptop recommendations in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/looking-for-laptop-recommendations/#post-40133</link>
				<pubDate>Fri, 29 Jun 2018 05:03:20 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/kate/' rel="nofollow ugc">@kate</a> I much prefer tablets over laptops, and I do 90% of my work (Story Embers, editing projects, graphic design, email, etc.) on a 10.5” iPad Pro. I love its portability and versatility. However, I do own an HP Pavilion laptop that I bought five years ago. It has served me well, aside from overheating once (which was my own fault since I was u&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-10128"><a href="https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/looking-for-laptop-recommendations/#post-40133" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Brianna Storm Hilvety replied to the topic Contests and Literary Magazines? in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/contests-and-literary-magazines/#post-39450</link>
				<pubDate>Wed, 20 Jun 2018 20:09:09 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/mnvalentine/' rel="nofollow ugc">@mnvalentine</a> Awesome! Can’t wait to read it! &#x1f60a;</p>
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				<title>Brianna Storm Hilvety replied to the topic Contests and Literary Magazines? in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/contests-and-literary-magazines/#post-39440</link>
				<pubDate>Wed, 20 Jun 2018 19:49:47 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/mnvalentine/' rel="nofollow ugc">@mnvalentine</a> In case you haven’t seen the post, we’re currently running our first story contest, and we accept any genre. &#x1f609; The deadline (June 30th) is fast approaching. Details are here: <a href="https://storyembers.org/enter-our-inaugural-short-story-contest/" rel="nofollow ugc">https://storyembers.org/enter-our-inaugural-short-story-contest/</a></p>
<p>Splickety occasionally hosts contests: <a href="http://splickety.com/contests/" rel="nofollow ugc">http://splickety.com/contests/</a></p>
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				<title>Brianna Storm Hilvety&#039;s profile was updated</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/6034/</link>
				<pubDate>Thu, 24 May 2018 22:48:31 -0400</pubDate>

				
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