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Cathy replied to the topic SciFi Beta Trading in the forum Sci-fi Writers 4 years, 7 months ago
*a couple google searches and skimming over three sci-fi backs late*
The more I read over it the more I like it; it’s briefer than the backs I read in sci-fi but fits with the more dramatic/mysterious summaries that are getting pretty trendy especially in thriller and mystery styles in any genre and it has an energetic three-part voice-shift w…[Read more] -
Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic HELP I Don’t Know If This Is Historical Fiction or Not in the forum Historical Fiction Writers 4 years, 7 months ago
Thank you so much, this was super helpful! I hadn’t really ever heard of the genre of ‘spy fiction’. You’re right, I have no point of divergence from real world events because even though this is an obscure part of the real world in my brain, that’s never really presented in the story. I think I’m going to call it a spy fiction…[Read more]
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Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic HELP I Don’t Know If This Is Historical Fiction or Not in the forum Historical Fiction Writers 4 years, 7 months ago
@rusted-knight Even if that historical event has nothing to do with the real world history? The events in this book and the events that trigger a change in leadership in the country are not from the real-world at all. I’m not even taking a real world event like World War II and changing it to see what would have happened if we lost. (which…[Read more]
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Taylor Clogston replied to the topic SciFi Beta Trading in the forum Sci-fi Writers 4 years, 7 months ago
After some brainstorming with a friend, I think I have a blurb now!
He has created a dark and twisted strand in the cable of human existence, one that cannot withstand my caress without breaking and becoming no longer a man. You saw it just now. It saddens me.
Two men, condemned.
The pilot, betrayed by his AI god.
The convict,…[Read more]
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Winter Rose replied to the topic SW RP/Collaborative Story in the forum Sci-fi Writers 4 years, 7 months ago
Sounds good!
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Emma Walker replied to the topic SW RP/Collaborative Story in the forum Sci-fi Writers 4 years, 7 months ago
@winter_rose That’s really good. Yea I almost forgot about this XD
she has human ears like Kanan, so she doesn’t necessarily need the coverings over them… besides that, I think she’s good.
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Taylor Clogston replied to the topic HELP I Don’t Know If This Is Historical Fiction or Not in the forum Historical Fiction Writers 4 years, 7 months ago
@anne-of-lothlorien That’s a really hard question =P
First and foremost, spy fiction is a genre. You should look into that.
The rest of your description doesn’t sound like historical fiction to me. HisFic needs to interact with the real world in some way. If the only possible way a reader could tell the story took place in an alternate version…[Read more]
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Taylor Clogston joined the group Historical Fiction Writers 4 years, 7 months ago
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Winter Rose replied to the topic SW RP/Collaborative Story in the forum Sci-fi Writers 4 years, 7 months ago
@emma-walker
Ok sorry I’m taking so long, just been busy and distracted. Here’s an outfit I came up with for your character’s older version, let me know what you want to change so I can put that in the final illustration.
Is it ok if her younger outfit does not include the armor?
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Rusted Knight replied to the topic HELP I Don’t Know If This Is Historical Fiction or Not in the forum Historical Fiction Writers 4 years, 7 months ago
@anne-of-lothlorien
This is what we call “threading the eye of the needle.” I think this is a historical fiction as long as there is a trigger event were history changed. -
Cathy replied to the topic SciFi Beta Trading in the forum Sci-fi Writers 4 years, 7 months ago
Alright!!! Thanks, lol my siblings love to be harassed about scientific stuff! I’ll take some time to think up some good beta questions and send my WIP as soon as that’s done!! I can’t wait to read your book!!!
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Anne of Lothlorien started the topic HELP I Don’t Know If This Is Historical Fiction or Not in the forum Historical Fiction Writers 4 years, 7 months ago
Hey guys! *general wave because I don’t know who all is on here*
So I have a WIP that I’m trying to pin down the genre on. It’s called The Apprentice Spy. It takes place in a fictional country that is still in our world, and the setting and time period is… vague? I’m hoping if I give some description that y’all can help me pinpoint what to call…[Read more]
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Anne of Lothlorien joined the group Historical Fiction Writers 4 years, 7 months ago
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Taylor Clogston replied to the topic SciFi Beta Trading in the forum Sci-fi Writers 4 years, 7 months ago
@this-is-not-an-alien Hi Cathy, thank you for the interest! I’d be grateful for your siblings’ insight as well as your own, if you could harass them a little on my behalf =P
I’ll definitely take you up on that offer. I’d be happy to beta for your project in return. You can send that along with whatever beta questions you have to itaylorclogston…[Read more]
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Rusted Knight replied to the topic Hello there! in the forum Historical Fiction Writers 4 years, 7 months ago
@blenkiness
Well this is very late but welcome aboard. I’m a specialist in world war two but war in general pulls my attention. Tactics, troops, equipment, you name it I know a little. -
Cathy replied to the topic SciFi Beta Trading in the forum Sci-fi Writers 4 years, 7 months ago
I have some experience beta reading and I specialize in character development, theme integration and nuances of foreshadowing, increasing tension and keeping flow in a scene. Working big-picture is one of my better skills especially in speed-reading and while I don’t have very much experience in hard SciFi I have two siblings who are huge on S…[Read more]
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Taylor Clogston started the topic SciFi Beta Trading in the forum Sci-fi Writers 4 years, 7 months ago
I should have a beta-ready draft of Encapsulation ready in two to three weeks. It’s a SciFi story with New Weird elements about a dude sent to a labor camp to excavate the remnants of a cataclysmic technological event. It’ll be between 50K and 60K words. I’m looking for big-picture, character, and internal consistency feedback. My only real…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Sci-fi short story in the forum Sci-fi Writers 4 years, 8 months ago
lol I’m so happy I liked it too 😛 And you must let be beta read morrrrrre!!!!
Lol all is good then (:
Haha tell Jake I wouldn’t trust him with a plastic water-gun within a ten mile radius. But I am fascinated by his character and really all the characters here I can’t pick a favorite they’re all so interesting!!! I’d probably love to hang ou…[Read more] -
ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Sci-fi short story in the forum Sci-fi Writers 4 years, 8 months ago
You’re welcome!
Thank you so much for your feedback! It’s really helpful for me, especially since sci-fi is an unfamiliar genre for the hopeless fantasy nut. 😊
Marian and Jake (at least for now) were in a relationship in the past, but Jake had been hiding his illegal lifestyle from her and when she found out she…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Sci-fi short story in the forum Sci-fi Writers 4 years, 8 months ago
*unsuspecting me peeks in starts reading*
*first post; critically analyzing but beginning to sink into the plot too much*
*reading very intently has forgotten to analyze*
*so involved in the story*
*have to see what happens*
*last post*
WHAT!!!!!!!!!!! WHAT!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!??! HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME!!!!!!!! YOU KILLED…[Read more]-
Thank you, Cathy! [[[[Hugs back]]]] I’ve missed you too!
Please pray for my Dad. He’s a godly man, but he is missing his sweetheart.
As a pastor, many people seek his prayerful counsel, but often people forget that he is a man grieving and struggling too.-
I will yes. My family’s been praying for all of you with me since we got the news and so the Carmelites in Mom’s formation. It’s so hard losing someone who’s been a part of you so long… and it must be so difficult for your dad with so many people coming to him for support and being so used to his strength in prayer and in God that they neve…[Read more]
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I am doing okay. Sometimes it is hard when I see or read something interesting or funny and I want to call her, but then remember she is in Heaven. It is tough being in this limited understanding awaiting for God’s perfection to overtake me in my daily journey. I rely on Him day by day. Thank you and your family for the prayers. They mean more…[Read more]
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I’m so glad I can do that much for you at least. [[squeezes back tightly]]
I can’t imagine how hard it must be for you now, even knowing she’s in a better place by leaving it still hurts so much. [[sits beside you and stares down]] Actually, a couple weeks ago my best friend and I broke ties with each other. I was just recently kinda pieci…[Read more]
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