Beth Darlene

@ashley-tegart Sorry for the late post engagement. You certainly don’t need to finish Mistborn to read any of Sanderson’s other works. Stormlight is much more grand and epic in terms of scale and character than Mistborn, I highly recommend checking out at least The Way of Kings. Plus there are giant swords and giant crabs. What else could you wa…[Read more]

Kallun shot him a look, stepping over to where the roof ended. He held his sword out of the cover and watched the rain land on it. After a few seconds, he pulled the blade back under and gingerly ran a hand along the wet and fiery blade.

@noah-cochran

I like it. (for a minute there I was worried, thinking you had split your book into third and first person or something xD)

Yikes XD

Oh, they’re just glorious.

Right? I’ve been having a few too many XD

So you actually know exactly what you want to change about every individual chapter before you start revision? I was just going to g…

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“Ha. You know acting like you’re in some dramatic play isn’t going to help anything” Julian spoketh with a sarcastic laugh

@everyone

In case anybody’s interested I’ve started a blog and portfolio showcasing some of my art 🙂 here’s the link for my first post, its a college essay I did that I’m particularly proud of. It is about – surprise surprise – Irish mythology…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy

Exactly. I have… three chapters total, I think. For one, Liorah is absent but there’s important information, for the other she’s there but I needed it told through another character’s perspective.

I like it. (for a minute there I was worried, thinking you had split your book into third and first person or something xD)
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He sighed. “Well…” Thoughts flew,  he looked down at his sword and are fully pulled it from its sheath.

@rose-colored-fancy

YASSSSS CANT WAIT FOR LORCAN TO SEE LIORAH AGAIN!!!! This is going to be glorious *evil cackle*

@calidris

I think it’s time…

LET THE CHAOS BEGIN!

May the odds be in everyone’s favor XD

@everyone

I’m going to take a few posts to fix up Aydin and kind of get him to a point where he can participate again and then I’m going to drop in Liorah, so that should give everyone enough time to finish the rest of the challenge. (If y’all need more tim…[Read more]

“Hmm… Julian you mentioned finding clues in each place he stops?”

“Sorta. There’s a rumor around that he is leaving them since one of his servants always stays behind and sneaks around. I don’t know how that will help tho”

“I don’t know…” He stood, towering over both of them. “As I said, I’m not very used to rain.”

“I suppose so… Water and fire are both elements so I guess. Wht do you have in mind Kallun?” Ellie asked while Julian stared at the floor pretending not to listen

(Lol Yeah)

Kallun eyed him for a moment, then looked out at the sky. “I have never seen such magic. For where I come from, there is no rain.” He paused, then continued, “But my people are users of the elemental magic, and I think rain would fit there, yes?”

@calidris

oh I see.  Of course!   It’s really fun getting familiar with everyone else’s stories here!

It is loads of fun, I love all your characters and I’m really loving this little community of people I have to say XD

(OH BURN)

“Ok smart guy, what’s your plan?” Julian snarked. Ellie nudged him.

(You know Julian used to be my favorite character of my fantasy, but I don’t think I like him jealous lol sure is fun to write tho)

Kallun smirked, “Not enough rocks here for that.” He set his squished rock down and frowned, thinking. “There must be some way to stop the rain.”

Julian looked at him with a frown “you are stuck here. I was on my way out when you decided to shoot an arrow at me”

“A-actually that was me.” Ellie said shyly

“You can’t shoot an arrow”

“I can”

“I’ve known you your entire life and I’ve never known you to shoot anything.”

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I didn’t add this part because it would break up the flow, but…

Basil frowned.

But I thought only I could call her that…

@everyone just a heads up, these events are visible to everyone in the Castle 🙂

Basil:

“I think he would if given a proper incentive.  I’m sure you have something he’s been desperately searching for. What was it again? The Core? Was that it? Is that you, Basil? Because it would be a shame for your pesky friend’s search to come to such a swift…[Read more]

You can say that again, lol. Poor guys. I really need to finish their story so that they can be friends.

:'( I know. I’m glad it’s hitting you in the feels though. (honestly as his author I’m getting tired…I’m like “dude, come on. Get over it.” So I’m glad.)