AshleaAdams

@irishcelticredflowercrown

I can never remember hair and eye color. I don’t make pictures of my characters or others’ (generally) in my head, especially not what their face looks like, so I’m really bad at this kind of thing, lol. I also tend to *ahem* skip the introductary posts, b/c I read/type so slow I want the time online for reading the…[Read more]

@jared-williams

Oohh, I like this idea! I have a deep love for analogies and use them constantly!

She took a few more steps back, looking as if a wild beast had just stood on its hind legs and asked her to dance.

LOL, that one made me laugh!

Let me see… a few I recall particularly are:

[Describing a forest]:

She’d said there were trees as t…[Read more]

@jared-williams

your  character’s cynicism is great! I don’t think I’ve ever laughed at dry negativism before. Quite excellently written. lol.

Aww, thank you, I really appreciate that! I’m really finding out about her on the go XD

Is it okay to borrow other characters when it comes to conversations? I’m wondering if I should respond, since th…

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Yay! it did make me nervous…writing someone else’s characters… felt like messing with someone else’s masterpiece… but this is a lot of fun. I needed something like this. I still consider myself a novice when it comes to writing… and this is the first time I’ve really engaged in any form of creative writing activity.

@jared-williams

Your take on Enydd was pretty accurate. Most people see her as as a happy-go-lucky, naïve person because of her constant laughing/smiling and awe for the world.

Also, thank you! You have revealed to me a quirk of Enydd’s! She rambles when she’s in shock. XD

I’ll post her POV tomorrow.

(wow… okay. What in the world? I posted the whole thing in sections and it worked, but when I tried to post the whole thing, it blocked me… what’s up with that?)

“Hey, Conan the barbarian, mind putting on some clothes?” The man in the strange metallic get-up  called from afar. He had been watching me from a distance, but this was the first time hearing his voice.

I looked down at my gaaban. If they were from another world, they probably knew nothing about aygiffs, meaning they knew nothing of gaabans.…[Read more]

Enydd rocked back and forth on her heels. “So, are you an elf? Oh, I’ve always wanted to meet an elf, but I just thought they were fairy tales. Please tell me you’re real, or are your ears just fake?”

“Um…” What are elves? “I… they’re real. I’m an aygiff.”

“An aygiff?” She tilted her head to the side. The blond lady looked just as puzzled, w…[Read more]

(Continued)

Perhaps she was from the desert region, or perhaps the far corners of the Kemet. Trying the formal greeting of the desert, I held my hands at the waist a shoulder-length apart, bent my wrists down, fingers spread, palms up, then brought them up till they were parallel with the top of my shoulders.

“Forgive me.”

She took a few more…[Read more]

I don’t know what it is censoring… so, forgive the annoyance, but I’ll try posting it in sections…

Abirami

Turning around, I stood to find a well-endowed, young, blond faehin standing before me. Her right eyebrow was slightly raised, and her lips were as straight as a whip. Her expression reminded me of Yaxkin’s resting face… the…[Read more]

Somethings wrong. It keeps blocking me when I try to post it… something about WordPress?

@jared-williams

Figure one short one might be okay here? … Hope I can borrow Enydd for this scene… Can you borrow other people’s characters for conversations? hope I do her character justice… please let me know if I do something wrong.

You’re welcome to borrow Enydd! I’d love to see your take on her!

Hahaha.

@rose-colored-fancy

your  character’s cynicism is great! I don’t think I’ve ever laughed at dry negativism before. Quite excellently written. lol.

Is it okay to borrow other characters when it comes to conversations? I’m wondering if I should respond, since the scene’s halted with us facing each other…. or wait for others to join in?…[Read more]

Mejt

The girl didn’t reply, but she seemed to be trying to say something.

“Not–my–name. My–name–is–Isella–Christine–Aumardel.”

I scowled. With a name like that, she was definitely nobility. Why had she told me?

Suddenly, the realization dawned on me and I snorted a laugh.

“I didn’t mean– Delya means–” I fumbled for a synonym in the sa…[Read more]

@emily-waldorf

@jared-williams

@calidris ‘ other character is called Saskia! She’s also a genetically enhanced supersoldier, though not as much altered as Basil. Skia is 5’3″, with brown skin and chin-length curly black hair, and dark eyes.

Also, one correction, Basil isn’t germophobic, though he came across that way at the beginning XD He’s…[Read more]

K’Nika nodded. “Plenty.”

(lol well Pias was more like a leather pouch on her belt XD)

“Hey, cool!” Julian smiled

“K’Nika, is there any fish in this river?” He asked

(Fair enough XD it’s awesome that these bags that suddenly appeared just so happened to have everything we need in them when we need it)

@emily-waldorf

ooh you were so close XD so Lorcan actually has short wavyish black hair heehee, and its sort of an undercut style. He also has gorgeous dark eyes that reminds you of a starry night when you look at them😊 I think i posted a drawing of him somewhere, ill see if I can find it XD

As for Daire, he has ginger hair tied in a very short…[Read more]

@obrian-of-the-surface-world

Thanks Brian! Your encouragement means a lot.  It honestly has been painfully slow as I have slowly worked up to the 3rd chapter of my 1st book! It has been honestly been depressing trying to keep at it above exhaustion from work. But I working at being more passionate and consistent with my writing.

I am honestly…[Read more]