Story Embers | Ariel Ashira | Activity https://storyembers.org/members/ashira/activity/ Activity feed for Ariel Ashira. Mon, 27 Apr 2026 01:55:38 -0400 https://buddypress.org/?v= en 30 hourly 2 124f69d74a9dc5bb3597be438039f3ab Ariel Ashira changed their profile picture https://storyembers.org/activity/p/78190/ Mon, 04 May 2020 01:45:29 -0400 0 d029e0952f2ac875bb5e41e8842c8c66 Ariel Ashira's profile was updated https://storyembers.org/activity/p/78189/ Mon, 04 May 2020 01:13:49 -0400 0 9207b8da8e9bc6965acb2f09114b1448 Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Introducing...The Dhilorwis Saga!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/activity/p/67675/ Tue, 29 Oct 2019 20:16:39 -0400 @cassie-hartfinh Ok, cool map!  Also, life has been hectic but I will try to get this done by the end of the year.

]]> 0 b248d2e24247d6017d1a0e20ce86df4d Ariel Ashira replied to the topic A Street Team? Is that what they're called? in the forum General Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/activity/p/67593/ Mon, 28 Oct 2019 02:42:48 -0400 @wordsmith  Thats pretty cool you run a martial arts school!  I get life getting in the way of writing – I have been on here very little lately.  Thanks for keeping us updated.

You character sounds cool.  What is the name of the story?

]]> 0 4e453c57ca36223ac55115323a8533ca Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Anyone Need a Beta Reader? in the forum General Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/activity/p/66826/ Sat, 12 Oct 2019 19:34:46 -0400 @jenwriter17 I dont need a beta…yet.

BTW your profile pic is so totally adorable!

]]> 0 586fdd752b00c94ae822089cf2d2b1c8 Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Anyone doing Inktober? in the forum Art Discussions https://storyembers.org/activity/p/66709/ Thu, 10 Oct 2019 23:32:39 -0400 @deeprun

1) Very good advise! 😀

2) I luuuuv your picture.  Makes me wonder what that guy getting hung upside down did!

]]> 0 847e09323314fa1772cd9fca893acffa Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Anyone doing Inktober? in the forum Art Discussions https://storyembers.org/activity/p/66621/ Wed, 09 Oct 2019 03:27:37 -0400 @catwing Oh, niiice!   That Freeze one so hit home I saved it to Pinterest. 😀

]]> 0 9fd2b1240756c9aaa9e8423105bb6587 Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Anyone doing Inktober? in the forum Art Discussions https://storyembers.org/activity/p/66338/ Sat, 05 Oct 2019 21:32:24 -0400 *stalks*

]]> 0 0766604f7ca2e0e448656290e416bec2 Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Hi there! in the forum Introduce Yourself https://storyembers.org/activity/p/66336/ Sat, 05 Oct 2019 21:28:59 -0400 @bree-dawn Is your name from Narnia?  That talking horse who is like the best character ever?

]]> 0 e29e70e2697cce6fc77a4b690f3e5d0c Ariel Ashira replied to the topic A Street Team? Is that what they're called? in the forum General Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/activity/p/65865/ Sat, 28 Sep 2019 14:36:58 -0400 @wordsmith I love reading and seeing anything you do…not sure if FB is gonna work though.

Cool conversation you guys have going.

]]> 0 92b468003ec403451117fceebe7276b6 Ariel Ashira replied to the topic RAIDERS OF THE LOST ARC II: THE LEGEND OF THE FORBIDDEN BURIAL GROUNDS in the forum General Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/activity/p/65859/ Sat, 28 Sep 2019 14:18:46 -0400

Nebraska covered his face. “I always knew I was going to die getting fired!”

Martin patted Nebraska’s shoulder. “You’ll have a warm departure.”

OMIGOODNESS.  This was for sure one of my favorite parts yet!  I will never get over the image in my head of Shortbeard on an exercise ball. XD The games were just hilarious!

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]]> 0 c1991c2c7c34c637a44276f505967cbb Ariel Ashira posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/never-enough/comment-page-1/#comment-3882 Thu, 26 Sep 2019 17:32:20 -0400 Oh, wow. Those first two verses were so relatable tears came to my eyes. Nice poem.

In reply to - Daeus Lamb wrote a new post Never enough. Never enough. I am glory and disgrace. I’m tripping up at the end of the race. I’m a misspelled card, a hung-up phone. I’m always knowing and never known. I’m always […] ]]> 67f268936be54fdc30fe1b12821c4e07 Ariel Ashira posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/dear-extrovert/comment-page-1/#comment-3881 Thu, 26 Sep 2019 17:24:50 -0400 Oh, man. This is so awesome and beautiful I could read it a hundred times and still cry. Thanks so much for appreciating the extroverts.

In reply to - Cindy Green wrote a new post Poetry is written for the quiet ones,the soulful ones,the ones who let thoughts tangle in their throatsbefore they ever get tangled in their hair.Poetry is written for the soft ones,the […] ]]> a5d59b61c42e66651ef6d0af41df333c Ariel Ashira posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/activity/p/64171/#acomment-64644 Fri, 06 Sep 2019 06:09:03 -0400 Yeah, he is! I read his book, “Lone Survivor” and right now Im reading his other one called “Service” and they are both crazy good! If you have problems reading swearing Id be careful, though. My sister and I just mark out the swear words as we read it so our younger siblings can read it too 😀

In reply to - A.N. Parker posted an update @ashira I love your profile picture and signature! 😀 That wolf is so prettyyy! ]]> 1df8dd166949281a28fb49d7a1c87175 Ariel Ashira replied to the topic I HAVE A POETIC CHALLENGE! in the forum Poetry Discussions https://storyembers.org/activity/p/64579/ Thu, 05 Sep 2019 16:18:59 -0400 @k-a-grey @w-o-holmes Ok, thanks.  That sounds cool.

]]> 0 49b7557114591d8cc3fbebdf245d8898 Ariel Ashira replied to the topic I HAVE A POETIC CHALLENGE! in the forum Poetry Discussions https://storyembers.org/activity/p/64426/ Wed, 04 Sep 2019 15:19:41 -0400 Whats a couplet??

]]> 0 f61e61f724cc08115c68afea59901b59 Ariel Ashira replied to the topic PROMPT GUILD WAR - Clash of the Cultures in the forum Announcements https://storyembers.org/activity/p/64423/ Wed, 04 Sep 2019 15:01:45 -0400 @jane-maree Oh, wow, I thought we’d flunk last on this one!  Good job Jane!! *high five*

]]> 0 46eba337b7b40c62ee0003b1e8a754f4 Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Caffeine, Cat Mugs, and How The TTF Ruined Me in the forum General Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/activity/p/64187/ Sun, 01 Sep 2019 15:41:13 -0400 @wordsmith

Drama gets people to quote you, and make mugs after your quotes.

That is brilliant.  Just love the way you think.

@ericawordsmith Your new profile pic is perfect XD

]]> 0 c29d9d1be4a8847145cb7ddf6461e563 Ariel Ashira posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/activity/p/64171/#acomment-64186 Sun, 01 Sep 2019 15:33:20 -0400 Oh, thanks! the quote in my signature is by Marcus Luttrell. Do you know who he is?

In reply to - A.N. Parker posted an update @ashira I love your profile picture and signature! 😀 That wolf is so prettyyy! ]]> bce18e85db6bc26eeb8261847d918a25 Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Psalm Illustration Thread in the forum Art Discussions https://storyembers.org/activity/p/64014/ Fri, 30 Aug 2019 00:41:27 -0400 @the-fledgling-artist Woah, I love that!  How did you pick the verse?

]]> 0 9dddd264ebde7943032da706166bf3d4 Ariel Ashira posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/monster/comment-page-1/#comment-3715 Thu, 29 Aug 2019 03:21:49 -0400 WOAH, and I mean seriously WOAH THIS IS ONE OF MY FAV POEMS EVER. The truth of it really hit me in the chest, and the imagery is just incredible. *high five so hard you fall over*

In reply to - Cindy Green wrote a new post If you’ve ever met a demon, you’ve known leashes, locks, and ties, you’ve known every filthy fingerprint that’s lined you with its lies. If you’ve ever met a demon, you’ve let pretty […] ]]> ea899293ac41dba66cc0a4164e6d864f Ariel Ashira replied to the topic PROMPT GUILD WAR - Clash of the Cultures in the forum Announcements https://storyembers.org/activity/p/63964/ Thu, 29 Aug 2019 03:11:44 -0400 @e-b-raulands I think this one would be better if it was not comedy, but since I dont have time to devote to this right now, I’ll leave the final decision up to the ones who can do it.

]]> 0 3ab6ea9f6453aff8b31b1300f01deb29 Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art Discussions https://storyembers.org/activity/p/63887/ Tue, 27 Aug 2019 19:55:16 -0400 @the-fledgling-artist Ooh, girl, I luv that!  And your profile pic is totally cute too.

]]> 0 6c06477486bf0968bdb3e1d98f9d46f3 Ariel Ashira replied to the topic PROMPT GUILD WAR - Clash of the Cultures in the forum Announcements https://storyembers.org/activity/p/63886/ Tue, 27 Aug 2019 19:50:34 -0400 @jane-maree

ARGH, our Aunt from California was here for a few days and I totally forgot about this!

*major facepalming*

@esther-sears OOH, that sounds reeeaaaaly cool.

]]> 0 f23298b64293c6ea8396f8f320186587 Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Hello from somewere few can imagine in the forum Introduce Yourself https://storyembers.org/activity/p/63699/ Sat, 24 Aug 2019 01:34:36 -0400 @candide Hey, welcome!  There is actually a couple people around that speak English as a second language, but they have better grammar than some of us Americans. 😛 So give it a shot!  Where do live right now?

]]> 0 aa5e41c03c800f16f6f48846e3b6a440 Ariel Ashira replied to the topic PROMPT GUILD WAR - Clash of the Cultures in the forum Announcements https://storyembers.org/activity/p/63698/ Sat, 24 Aug 2019 01:11:08 -0400 @jane-maree who is our judge?

]]> 0 d753d5e2b0f040c8b76ce8ea3f71a041 Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Psalm Illustration Thread in the forum Art Discussions https://storyembers.org/activity/p/63614/ Thu, 22 Aug 2019 17:27:34 -0400 @banana-peacock-warrior

I so agree with you. Someone who draws rarely but really enjoys seeing all the art here. 🙂

@seekjustice

Hey! How are you doing? I think you should start it up again. XD

]]> 0 e76e4eef309c3e2f244561912817516f Ariel Ashira replied to the topic *drumroll* Introducing a friend!! in the forum Introduce Yourself https://storyembers.org/activity/p/63610/ Thu, 22 Aug 2019 16:34:54 -0400 @sophia-partridge Well, look who showed up!  *tacklehugs* …and in case you are wondering Im Esther – Ariel is my internet/pen name ish thing.

]]> 0 f9d5674ffbd3556cce17dff20add2ab2 Ariel Ashira replied to the topic PROMPT GUILD WAR - Clash of the Cultures in the forum Announcements https://storyembers.org/activity/p/63544/ Wed, 21 Aug 2019 17:12:27 -0400 @jane-maree OOH, this OnE iS GoOd!  I really hope I have time to help with it because I LOVE cultures clashing.  I have it in my his-fic a ton.  Selah and I will do our best to come up with some ideas.

 

]]> 0 423c9032df2cacbefe374e30a1d5b43b Ariel Ashira replied to the topic What's Up In Your Life? in the forum Accountability & Achievements https://storyembers.org/activity/p/63413/ Fri, 16 Aug 2019 21:20:05 -0400 @jane-maree We’ve been calling her Ash or Ashley or Ashy or something like that. 😀  I like calling her Fero or Ashfero…cause it wont bother me if she acts a little savage. XD

]]> 0 10c684ab95e93ad21227c57817f45391 Ariel Ashira replied to the topic What's Up In Your Life? in the forum Accountability & Achievements https://storyembers.org/activity/p/63387/ Thu, 15 Aug 2019 18:55:35 -0400 @jane-maree Ooh, cool topic.  Umm…writing has been painfully slow.

A really neat thing is our family got a border collie puppy two days ago.  I love dogs!

And I was on a trip in Wahsington down by the Oregon border and saw the river where the Snake flows into the Columbia.  That was really cool because one of my his-fic books has characters th…[Read more]

]]> 0 9192ce7c546125c8d00ce2cb84e8757e Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Read and Weep (normal) in the forum General Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/activity/p/63141/ Sat, 10 Aug 2019 02:19:00 -0400 @anne-of-lothlorien Ooh, I love that!

]]> 0 2c0887ec4fd70fb1e5525d457c73254f Ariel Ashira replied to the topic For All The Historical Fictioners in the forum General Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/activity/p/62718/ Thu, 01 Aug 2019 18:10:27 -0400 @seek-justice Ah, slow lately.  Lotsa stuff happening and having to put most time into school and such.

]]> 0 2831f8808a56c8c593cf9353cd5974db Ariel Ashira replied to the topic RAIDERS OF THE LOST ARC II: THE LEGEND OF THE FORBIDDEN BURIAL GROUNDS in the forum General Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/activity/p/62717/ Thu, 01 Aug 2019 18:06:43 -0400

“I told you that cliffhangers would kill us!”

Hundreds of Indians dotted the site, bending over papers and scribbling while other Indians watched and angrily pointed at the pages and smeared red tribal paint on them

“I know a little. It sounds like they plan to turn the girls into beta-reading slaves, and the men…”

Man, every time I am sick I sh…[Read more]

]]> 0 a68ad08de229ed1616a827875c8f0e03 Ariel Ashira replied to the topic PROMPT WAR - Mystery in the forum Announcements https://storyembers.org/activity/p/62578/ Tue, 30 Jul 2019 19:30:41 -0400 @jane-maree Woah!  Your new profile picture!  Cool!

]]> 0 cf702efc9814b76775528ffb7d6c16b0 Ariel Ashira replied to the topic {The Writing Life - Week 15/I'mVeryBehind, Meee} It's okay to not JUST be a writer in the forum Weekly Theme Discussion https://storyembers.org/activity/p/62211/ Tue, 23 Jul 2019 17:21:48 -0400 @jane-maree Aw, thats great!

]]> 0 aa630543b879e4e7e85239b7108ac93c Ariel Ashira replied to the topic {The Writing Life - Week 15/I'mVeryBehind, Meee} It's okay to not JUST be a writer in the forum Weekly Theme Discussion https://storyembers.org/activity/p/62175/ Tue, 23 Jul 2019 01:12:09 -0400 @jane-maree I COULDNT AGREE MORE!  I have lotsa interests besides writing.  One being that I do a lot of art.  But Id like to be an actress, dancer, singer…yah I have lotsa dreams.

]]> 0 e76ea3f1fc1bcd6e29d7de3e5e0afc83 Ariel Ashira replied to the topic For All The Historical Fictioners in the forum General Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/activity/p/62174/ Tue, 23 Jul 2019 01:09:44 -0400 *stares at @selah-chelyah* Yes, and I usually end up with some slave characters to, dont I? XD

well…your ahead of me in other research 😉

]]> 0 46883a4f736ee801c802b2f8cb478207 Ariel Ashira replied to the topic For All The Historical Fictioners in the forum General Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/activity/p/62150/ Mon, 22 Jul 2019 19:45:45 -0400 @emberynus-the-dragonslayer Ooh, thats cool!  I have several WIPs set in different Roman times.  Its fun to research.

]]> 0 3618c945bedd9be565d003e9325aa81e Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Abortion Poetry in the forum Poetry Discussions https://storyembers.org/activity/p/62100/ Sun, 21 Jul 2019 23:46:23 -0400 @banana-peacock-warrior Ooh, those are so touching and sweeping!  There is often little parts where it feels forced a little, but overall they are very nice.  I love the message!

I wrote a couple abortion poems when I was younger…

]]> 0 0afb0bd5a17a15a2f1272275ec4a5345 Ariel Ashira replied to the topic For All The Historical Fictioners in the forum General Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/activity/p/62098/ Sun, 21 Jul 2019 23:32:56 -0400 @emberynus-the-dragonslayer Of course!  What eras do you write in?  Do you have some favorite his-fic authors?

]]> 0 e9a7af56c7f72f31ed19f87c2e178187 Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Controversial Topics in Poetry in the forum Guidelines & FAQ https://storyembers.org/activity/p/61710/ Fri, 12 Jul 2019 21:49:47 -0400 @banana-peacock-warrior  Ehh…just do it and if its bad then you will get told and maybe @daeus-lamb will kick you off XD…

(Daeus isnt actually as mean as we like to make him sound..)

]]> 0 2768bb76aa035ac31731df89270666ed Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Hi! New girl here! in the forum Introduce Yourself https://storyembers.org/activity/p/61709/ Fri, 12 Jul 2019 21:48:01 -0400 @banana-peacock-warrior Hi!  Im Selah Chelyah’s younger sister, and write mostly his-fic too.  Im sixteen, will be 17 in October.

XD Your name is sooo funny!   What kind of dance do you do?

]]> 0 a0cbf8c6710b69b63db11d57b847b838 Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Introductions! Pizza! Best Buddies! in the forum Announcements https://storyembers.org/activity/p/61706/ Fri, 12 Jul 2019 21:40:58 -0400 @sam-m Hi!  How old are you?  How long have you been writing?

]]> 0 996fdafd69cb0ce79d38fd9df73db7d6 Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Opinions on Guild Changes in the forum Announcements https://storyembers.org/activity/p/61705/ Fri, 12 Jul 2019 21:40:21 -0400 @jane-maree I kind of agree with everyone so far…the wars have been great and I have learned a lot with them even though I feel bad I have not been able to participate more in them.  I have not even been writing much at all for months cause life has been crazy, so being active on here sadly couldnt be a big priority.

I dont really like the…[Read more]

]]> 0 2204bcf3ffd7136f6425c424920a0414 Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Fanart in the forum Art Critique https://storyembers.org/activity/p/61610/ Thu, 11 Jul 2019 21:08:01 -0400 @evelyn Ooh, I LOVE THAT!  what is it from??

]]> 0 bb811697cac91ab90de1a403b42ab198 Ariel Ashira replied to the topic PROMPT GUILD WAR – A Beautiful Ordinary in the forum Announcements https://storyembers.org/activity/p/60957/ Mon, 01 Jul 2019 16:16:00 -0400 @j-a-penrose Thanks for trying.  I think we all did.  Good job anyway, guys!  No shame in being busy sometimes.

]]> 0 3d893bd02357c2e42eab39d665059915 Ariel Ashira replied to the topic RAIDERS OF THE LOST ARC II: THE LEGEND OF THE FORBIDDEN BURIAL GROUNDS in the forum General Writing Discussions https://storyembers.org/activity/p/60717/ Fri, 28 Jun 2019 21:34:45 -0400 @mariposa XD Unbelievable.  You manage to kill me every time…

]]> 0 472d24094ee9d3b143186d9f48b009d0 Ariel Ashira posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/how-to-cultivate-powerful-moments-of-wonder-in-storytelling-part-1/comment-page-1/#comment-3347 Wed, 26 Jun 2019 16:21:04 -0400 Ooh, so good! Thank you!

In reply to - Martin Detwiler wrote a new post How to Cultivate Powerful Moments of Wonder in Storytelling, Part 1 As I stared at the blank page beneath the title of this article, my mind revisited all the stories that have […] ]]> 92898b3fe98a53954107bae79b1b407d Ariel Ashira replied to the topic {The Writing Life - Week 13, ME, Daeus, + Faith} Self Publishing vs Traditional Publishing in the forum Weekly Theme Discussion https://storyembers.org/activity/p/60572/ Wed, 26 Jun 2019 16:16:45 -0400 @jane-maree This was cool.

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