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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 11 months ago
Ophelia
“So, Ophelia, what do you think this dance should be? I think…I’d like it to be a dance of birds. Imitating them, ya know?” Jade said, gesturing with her arms as though they were wings.
I continued with my improvised barre warm-ups but nodded.
I forced my smile back.
“That sounds nice! The ballet we’re w…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 11 months ago
I saw on your newsletter that you wrote Aydin’s last POV chapter, and I KNOW that feeling. So sad, so satisfying, yet so…sad! Congrats on getting this far, and I’m so happy for you and Aydin–I am personally grateful that you gave him a happy ending.
Thank you! It’s delightful but I find myself so sad to leave them 😭 OF COURSE…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 11 months ago
This seems like an incredible and wonderful dynamic! Lots of great character development potential there! Just reading that small bit, I want to know what happens next between Malcolm and Ophelia! Hey, feel free to bring Malcolm into the castle too! That would be awesome if he came in and joined the performance! Perhaps replace…
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 11 months ago
XDDDD what a great turn of phrase. lol
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E. N. Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 11 months ago
@jared-williams Making Isaias dance is a great idea! 😂
What the stupid flopping fish was that?! Jade closed her eyes and reminded herself that these people could be from anywhere. Who knew what was normal in their worlds?
”Let’s go through the five basic foot positions,” said Jade. “Watch. First position, plié. Second, plié. Third, plié…[Read more]
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Brian Stansell replied to the topic The Importance of Being Human in the forum Sci-fi Writers 3 years, 11 months ago
Thank you, Jess! (@toljamedia)
That is very encouraging. I am becoming increasingly alarmed by the serious attention given to the “transhumanism” movement that is taking over our youth cultures who are abandoning faith and moral and foundational traditions that have stabilized communities. These “self-defined progressives” are instead becoming…[Read more]
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E. N. Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 11 months ago
😂 that worm thing was so funny, and it would totally freak Jade out because she’s only been around normal humans.
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 11 months ago
“After me punks! Never bet against a ranger when death is on the line!” He whooped and dove into the mirror with- Accept your greed and selfishness.
Nithel’s chest tightened, but he jumped up, (snatching the cloth if blind man left it), and dove through after him.
All had to enter now, and the walls were literally closing in. No time to thi…[Read more]
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Neasa replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 11 months ago
omigosh your emo description was hilarious😂 and accurate!
Lorcan: *shoots me filthy looks from the corner*
It is perfect for Lorcan, thanks for giving him some purpose here!😅😄
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 11 months ago
Abirami’s turn… (cheesy grin with slanted eyes)
Abirami
The door, if you could call it that anymore, was all but shredded as I pushed it open and entered the room that had previously been infested with Ku’s hive.
I marveled at the destruction that mere bugs could do. Just a few months ago, Ku’s hive had successfully committed what amounted to…[Read more]
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 11 months ago
….. and yes. That IS Abirami standing next to her… just as a size reference here. lol. -
Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 11 months ago
(Ami is Ku’Aya’s nickname for Abirami)
Ku’Aya
“Whoa! Cool green skin!” the boy called out!
My ears tingled. So… cute!
He had a baby face with blazing blond hair. His bangs stuck out half-hazardly about, and I had to wonder how he got his hair to stay that way… like an organized mess that actually looked really good.
My hair was the wor…[Read more]
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calidris replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 11 months ago
@emily-waldorf oh that makes a lot more sense now! I think Kit is going to be rather impressed by Avin’s outfit XD
Also, that’s some very interesting background on the Colondites! It makes me sad for Avin though. Poor guy’s been through so much 🙁
Kit:
“I’m from Vegada. You haven’t heard of it.” I shake my head. Nope.
“And your name is…?”…[Read more]
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 11 months ago

and he’s usually not so serious, but at the time, he is training to try to help Abirami break a war general (and old friend of his dad’s) from the castle dungeons. And Setti is using his dad’s weapon of choice…
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 11 months ago
Oh, and this is Setti… in case I ever bring him into the castle…. (bad rendition of him, but best I could come up with from the website I use… the ears and hair are all wrong… but it gives the gist of it.)
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 11 months ago
Warning… some of this is me rambling, so skim over if you want… =)
This is SO AWESOME! lol. Funny how it’s possible to geek out over a character castle. hehe.
This seems like an incredible and wonderful dynamic! Lots of great character development potential there! Just reading that small bit, I want to know what…[Read more]
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Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 11 months ago
Anika & Natalya
Darkness fell suddenly, as if the sunlight had been cut off by a storm. Anika gasped and stopped in her tracks. Natalya came up beside her, her heavy breathing sounding in Anika’s ear. “What happened?”
“How should I know?” Anika started forward again, groping ahead of her in the gloom.
“We’ll get a tanning if we’re…[Read more]
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Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 11 months ago
If it gets to be too crowded in here, I’ll pull Avin.
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Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 11 months ago
INTRODUCING…
Name: Anika Litvak
Age: 19 or 20
Appearance: 5’4″; 162 cm, slender-featured. Blonde-brown hair and hazel eyes. Slim, straight nose. thin gray dress and faded apron. Barefooted or in ragged slippers.
Personality: High-spirited and firm, with a strong sense of justice, yet an undeveloped (uneducated) moral compass. Circumstances…[Read more]
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Catholic Creed replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 11 months ago
I am implementing a new rule in the character castle!
“If in doubt about what direction the team wants to take, do what your character would do.”
So, when writing Burn, I will do as Burn does!
(Congratulations! I have unlocked level JERK.)
“Ya’know what. I’m just gonna go with the one nearest me. Once I fix my foot.”
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“Can you wrap…[Read more]
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