93@ImperatorPenguin

It’s ok, he wasn’t offended, this wasn’t the first time he died.

Nathair awoke in another room much like the room for the first mirror, not a drop of blood on him, and that was a first. Well, it wasn’t a first it was just very rare. Especially when he blacked out.

Dying was awkward, dying was never not awkward. It required a lot more explana…[Read more]

@everyone

I’m going to pull Enydd out. She’s grown a lot here, and I don’t think I’ll uncover more about here. (Not to mention that she’d probably have a nervous breakdown at the beginning of the fight. XD)

@calidris

I feel for this new character of yours. XD

Your Character: Where exactly am-

Castle: Deepest regret! Go!

@jared-williams

I’ve done mine🙂

Is Lorcan still in the castle? I forget who is writer is…

Thanks a bunch for the advice! It really helped me to know that other writers have worked through the same problem I’m having! (And that it worked for you when you shifted the perspectives of your MC) Payton is the first get-under-your-skin, can-be-kind-of-annoying-at-times character that I’ve written – I think that’s why I like him XD He does get…[Read more]

*Peeks up from coffee* Oh, right! Yeah I’ll get Ehud, I think he’s the last one! XDD

@calidris

Sounds great!

And I think that Ehud hasn’t gone yet, has he?

@jared-williams @e-n-leonard I have one more character to do (this is going to double as his re-introduction to the castle), but after that I’m ready to move on!

I’m going to try to finish his tonight!

@jared-williams

I’m done with my characters’ regrets. After they’ve finished any interaction with Avin, I’m going to pull them out during the beginning of Saevus’s battle and plop Mara into the middle of it (she’ll love that).

You’re welcome!

@emily-waldorf

@irishcelticredflowercrown

@e-n-leonard

@calidris

@this-is-not-an-alien

@inkhorn

@ethan-leonard

@lady-grace

Anyone else want to participate in the regret sequence? Last call, I think…. ? We can draw it to a close soon…. if there isn’t any objections? … So we can move onto Saevus attacking the castle. (hehe…. and…[Read more]

Hello!  I actually had a similar experience in the last few months – I made a side character who stole the spotlight, and I ended up refocusing the entire story and making him and his love interest the new MCs.  It was honestly a great decision, and it really helped to simplify the story and make it more personal (I’ve had similar experiences as t…[Read more]

Np! Yeah see I have the advantage here coz half the castle’s writers are my siblings so I can just ask them lol XDD

*Me, who just read Saevus’ worst regret in the other Castle.*

Oooooh

I wrote this way too late, so it’s not quite as detailed as I wanted towards the end 🙁

As far as content, nothing is mentioned, but it is kind of a continuation for Kit’s first regret, so do keep that in mind 🙂

Valencia:

I’m back at the party, squeezed in a semi circle of people, tuning out the drone of conversation welling around me.  It’s…[Read more]

Saevus looked around quietly. So far, all was good. The castle seemed to be forcing everyone to reveal their greatest regret…information he needed. People like Abirami, he noted…they hated the castle. He could sense it from their thoughts. And with the information being forced out of them by the castle, he could use it…to use them.

That, combi…[Read more]

@this-is-not-an-alien

Ok thanks lol! Yeah I was kinda confused there lol.
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Miles started opening the door. Just as it was barely opened, some force slammed back into it and shut it. Startled, Miles leaped back. Inside he heard a voice say “Take as long as you need, no h…[Read more]

Of course!  I’m so glad I could help 🙂

So this isn’t really a theological question, but I have a writing related discussion for you guys involving modesty.

1 Peter 3:3-4

3 Your beauty should not come from outward adornment, such as elaborate hairstyles and the wearing of gold jewelry or fine clothes.

4 Rather, it should be that of your inner self, the unfading beauty of a gentle a…[Read more]

👍 tremendously helpful! some times we are our worst critics…. other times we are our biggest blind spots. 😄 thanks for holding the mirror up for me (so to speak)

@jared-williams

So… Okay. it’s hard to think of debatable topics cause many of us agree to so much. lol…

Haha, yeah

When a Christian dies, the common platitude is that he/she is with Jesus in heaven now. However, besides when Jesus said to the thief “Today, you will be with me in paradise…”, I do not recollect any other specific verse that…

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