93@ImperatorPenguin

Woah folks! this got long. Sorry!

Isella

She turned toward the man; he still had his water flask.

“May I use that flask again?”

He seemed to hesitate, as if frozen by fear or some other emotion. “Give it to me,” she said gently.

He handed it to her slowly. “My name is Isella. What’s yours?”

“Daire. This is Lorcan.” He said the name as if it…[Read more]

(Lol what did Disney do?)

Kallun nodded. “I’m Kallun, that’s K’Nika,” He gestured to the girl. He gave a pointed stare at Julian, “K’Nika is my sister. We are all trying to stop that wizard fellow from destroying everything.”

Pia smiled, “Indeed.”

(xD where’s the smolder XD)

(actually it’s someone else’s foot XD It’s just temporary til I find something better since I’m mad at Disney)

“I’m sure you’re great. If anything, Julian is a the one that’s a lot to handle. I’m Lacey by the way, and that’s my older brother Finn, we’re friends of these two.” She said.

“Ah, another princess,” he then bowed down to kiss the back…[Read more]

@jared-williams

just a reminder of Ku’s personality, so you don’t end up completely hating her after this post

I think she’s actually really interesting! I like her already!

A fancy other-world lady walked up and took something off of her clothes. Just how much clothes was she wearing? Layers? Who was crazy enough to wear layers in summer? Not man…

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(just a reminder of Ku’s personality, so you don’t end up completely hating her after this post… she grew up orphaned in the slums. She is very rough around the edges and has trust issues (but adores Abirami, though she tries to hide it, even from herself sometimes) and she plays dirty… very high survival instincts and a bit…[Read more]

(Nice picture of your foot lol)

Kallun rolled his eyes, but realizing he was still slightly dripping wet. “I’m pretty okay, I think that’s what Julian means.”

K’Nika smiled, “Holpni.” Hello.

Pia smiled sweetly and took his hand. But she did curtsy, a smooth and simple gesture. “Pleased to make your acquaintance.” She was using her formal diplom…[Read more]

“Friend! We are of no harm” one of the figures yelled.

Eliana and Julian looked at each other wide eyed.

“Wait,” Julian said gesturing to the others. “Lacey?” He shouted.

“Julian?” The girl replied running forward.

A blonde girl about the same age as Ellie and a tall brunette boy came forward.

“Ellie!”the boy said scooping her in a hug.

“Who…[Read more]

Kallun stood and watched them, he could see them clearly. He put a wary hand on his sword, “Friend or foe?!” He shouted.

Pia crouched at the ready and gripped her pike.

(oh yeahhh they gotta come)

Ellie smiled.

Julian finished and stood up to find a good place to call it a night. “Hey, look over there” he said pointing over by the place Ellie had changed at. Two shadowy figures were coming towards them.

“It’s very good.” Kallun added.

K’Nika nodded.

(when do the friends show up?)

“What does everyone think of the fish?” Ellie asked.

“Good.” Julian said

“better than yours?”

“Enough.” He said with a small smile

Ookay guys here I go!

Lorcan

Lorcan was drifting in and out of darkness. Voices rose and fell, echoing painfully in his head. He could feel his laboured breaths heaving from his body, as he struggled to drag in air.

It wasn’t so much his actual wound, which was certainly quite bad, that was causing him pain. It was the feeling of sharp iron f…[Read more]

I whole-heartedly agree

sounds great!

@jared-williams

No offense taken! This article sums up what I believe of how we should use hard topics such as sex/rape in our stories as God would have us do. God gives us perfect examples in the Bible such as your example of Lot and his two daughters. God was simplistic with the details but clear enough to figure out what happened without…[Read more]

@jared-williams

No offense taken! This article sums up what I believe of how we should use hard topics such as sex/rape in our stories as God would have us do. God gives us perfect examples in the Bible such as your example of Lot and his two daughters. God was simplistic with the details but clear enough to figure out what happened without…[Read more]

@jared-williams,

AWESOME!! Lemme know when you start looking, and I’ll see if I can clear something out for you. 😀 Life has been hectic, so I can’t promise that I’ll be able to read for you, but I’d love to if I get the chance. 🙂

something else that may be worth mentioning is that there is a very big difference between descriptive and prescriptive.

I think a lot of the history in the Old Testament is a good example. Many, many stories in the Bible are descriptive – what happened, not prescriptive – what is good. And we can confuse the two very easily. For instance, the…[Read more]

@jared-williams

Thanks! I am glad it made sense. Though I did not explain it thoroughly as I should have.

Thank you for this idea! I will need to play it out and tweak it.  It would like make it more understandable to the reader if they saw the outcome and is able to pinpoint how it happened with kragvora…[Read more]

Oh, it’s a far cry from a zombie. I was just using it as an example.

I can understand Brian’s aversion to zombies, and I won’t push the point, but your creature doesn’t sound like reanimation or bringing the dead back to life, but nano-technology taking over a person, which could easily change a person’s personality, the way they think, and…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy

Have fun torturing your characters! XD

I will, don’t worry!  This is only the backstory…