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I’m glad you brought those things up. I think it’s a good idea to get the big things like that worked out before doing the little edits.

That’s a good idea, with the Christian lingo. There’s quite a bit out there. XD

I realized the other day, that this isn’t the first time this has happened. Where I think a story is Christian, so I reference God, then someone else says “hey, this doesn’t fit”. I’ll see what I can do to get that fixed. I may not have time until tomorrow. I plan on rewriting the whole thing tomorrow, like I did with Fish.

By the way, y’all should watch this video:

How Pixar Uses Music To Make You Cry

I tried to use this technique when writing this, except with words instead of music. If you guys think of any other ways we could incorporate this technique, or any words/phrases that would use this, be sure and suggest an edit.

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