Brooke

@this-is-not-an-alien

AHH MATER! I love him! “Like tuh-mater but without the tuh” Have you seen Cars 2? In that one he gets tangled in with a buncha spies it’s awesome!

Heheh *–awkward pause–*

YES! I love that movie!!!!

Oh you poor thing! I once dyed pudding green so, lol, no matter how many stupid things you do someone will always have done some…

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DANCROW CART 

“I’m fine,” she said. Her voice was slightly tense, and I deducted that she was either just wary or didn’t like the idea of my help. Personally, I didn’t exactly feel comfortable setting an arm anyway. Then she changed the subject.

“Where are you from?”

I ran a hand through my hair. “Well, I’m from Karodvia (say: Kah-road-vee…[Read more]

Ok, so I wasn’t the only one who couldn’t log in on here! Phew!

@joelle-stone

Ha ha, yeah. What with all the forest fires last summer, I learned not to take the security of the mountains for granted. We had so much smoke that my favorite mountains (and the ones closest to us) completely disappeared, leaving… flatness. It was honestly pretty s…

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*plops down onto bed, sighs, then picks up computer and begins to write. . . .*

So, after a busy day, I sit down to type on the forum. I went to the orthodontist this morning, and had my guitar lesson in the afternoon . . . then this evening I spilled honey-mustard on

a. the floor

b. the wall

c. the refrigerator

d. myself, including inside my…[Read more]

AHSOKA TANO

I smiled so wide that I thought my face would burst when he put his huge, callused hand in mine and shook.

“Rupert Greeves, Avengel and Keeper of the Order of Brendan, at your service.”

I nod in acknowledgement and then turn and glance back down the hall. Looking back up at him, my face grows serious. “Sir, there’s something you sho…[Read more]

AHSOKA TANO

He slipped his guns back into his holsters and watched me with sharp, dark eyes. “I have never heard that name before, no.”

I nod and slowly clip my lightsabers back onto my belt. I still can’t discern any evil in him, and so far as I can tell, he is trustworthy; but just like all the others, I’m still keeping an eye on him. “Well .…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy

Ooh, this gives me the perfect opportunity to infodump! This was actually a deliberate choice on my part, not an accident. Liorah didn’t scream when she saw the beasts because she had some warning (growling) and she knew what to do. All she had to do was smack them with her sword, so she felt in control of that situation. A…

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@kylie-wingfeather  @rebekah12   @winter_rose

Took me long enough, huh? Well, here I am!!! 😀 And, Kylie, where’d you learn ‘confuzzled?’ It’s awesome! 😉

AHSOKA TANO

His fingers are brushing the triggers, but his face is calm and composed as he keeps the guns trained on my chest. “I could ask you the same thing.”

I narrow my eyes, but be…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy

I totally forgot to respond to you!! So sorry! *face-palm*

LOL! Dancrow’s reaction is hilarious! And really realistic too XD Liorah and Gavril were just like “Huh. Cool.”

Aw, thank you so much!!! I don’t know about Liorah and Gavril, but Dan comes from a world with zero magic, so this is going to be especially wild for him 😛
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@jasmine

Liorah hadn’t even screamed when the mirror was broken and the monsters had come. How could something possibly be worse then those nightmarish beasts?

Ha! I didn’t even think about that! Good eye!

DANCROW CART

Everything happened so fast. The words had hardly left my mouth when a great clamor broke out behind the wall where we had e…[Read more]

DANCROW CART

When I heard the voice, I thought it was the girl who had the dog speaking. Of course, it wasn’t, because as soon as the glowing orb was thrust up to the ceiling, I was able to see. I jumped back and went into a defensive stance: one foot back, hand on gun, other arm held in front of my body protectively. When I realized that it w…[Read more]

@joelle-stone

I forgot about Cara!! She’s pretty awesome!

I know, right!? She always has a bit of humor at the ready, a sad backstory what with Alderaan and all, and she’s an amazing martial artist!

And I found Solo… disappointing. The person playing Solo kept trying to do the mouth thing that’s Han’s trademark, and failing. And there was a lot o…

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@this-is-not-an-alien

Yeah, that about sums it up except the unicorns lol 😛 but if I hurry the process it’ll just be too unrealistic and bland like immediately having Ehud and Rosario finally kiss instead of dangling it around like a treat you can’t quite reach yet.

Totally! You’ve gotta savor it, LOL Gotta make the readers ache and drool for it…[Read more]

@jasmine

Oh yeah!!! If all my characters were to act like me in real life, the plot would go absolutely nowhere. I would probably be the one flinging myself in front of the wardrobe leading to Narnia and screaming at my sibs that its a terrible idea and “you know what happens when foolish kids do this!!! SO NOOOO!!!!”

Oh, and I like how Gwen…[Read more]

P.S

I’ll try to post soon!

@rose-colored-fancy

Ooh, familiar feeling! I have a side character who’s trying to usurp Liorah’s position, and he’s doing a pretty good job of it. *Sighhh* And Sahar and Acyn of course XD Those two are everyone’s favorites XD They have fewer… issues than Liorah.

IKR!? And I always think that my main characters have too many issues, but I suppose…[Read more]

@jasmine

Hmmm, I saw your post, but then it disappeared! I’m sorry!

@rose-colored-fancy

Thank you! Yeah, Gavril is a lot more careful and considerate XD I find it kind of funny that he’s much closer to the stereotypical ‘hero’ character, but Liorah’s the main character. She’s just more… interesting? XD

Its best to have the most interesting characters as the main ones, though, otherwise your side characters…[Read more]

@jasmine

*throws forum door open and bursts into room* “I’m back! I made i–” *Stops talking realizing everyone is staring at me like I’m crazy* “uh…sorry to interrupt. I was..um. Hi. I’m back.”  *waves awkwardly*

*runs over and hugs you “yay!!! I’m not the only one who is really super awkward in these situations!!!! Like I’m being right now!!!…[Read more]

@rebekah12

You’re totally welcome! And Rupert sounds awesome!! I think he’ll get along very well with Rex — they both fight with two guns, they are both cool and calm (from what I’ve seen so far), and both are in charge of others’ lives 😀

I haven’t read The Ashtown Burials yet, but they are now in my mental book list 😉 I looked them up, and oo…[Read more]