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@rose-colored-fancy

Ooh, familiar feeling! I have a side character who’s trying to usurp Liorah’s position, and he’s doing a pretty good job of it. *Sighhh* And Sahar and Acyn of course XD Those two are everyone’s favorites XD They have fewer… issues than Liorah.

IKR!? And I always think that my main characters have too many issues, but I suppose that is what drives the story *shrugs*

XD! That was so much fun! I forgot Dancrow is a bit vain XD That actually makes it better. I wish Liorah could read his mind, she’d be so proud of being ‘the snarkiest, rudest, most impertinent, brattiest girl he’d ever met.’ Or would she be disappointed that he already has a bad opinion of her? I actually don’t know. Let’s find out!

LOL! And yes! Danny is a bit on the vain side of life, XD And btw, I love your post about Liorah!

There it was again. The familiar look of dislike.

Those two sentences really stood out to me, as did the part about folks not getting to know her too much before they were disappointed. Thought-provoking!

@this-is-not-an-alien

No wait that could be interesting. How would her good ending go if you were writing it?

Hmm, well, going off of what I know about her . . . I would make her forgive herself, and realize that we are all bad, and the only way we can be quote-and-quote “good” is to do our best to do right, which is only possible with God. I’d have her stop hiding her darkness and get it out. She would also live with Ehud and whatever other friends they have in a peaceful world where pink-glow-in-the-dark-unicorns light up all the rooms 😛

Lol that’s so funny I was giggling through this whole post 😀

LOL, thank you! 😛 And I loved your post as well! That part about good and bad people was really interesting and thought-provoking. Also, I could totally relate to flapping my arms with my hands still inside my pockets 😛 I love it when writers include realistic bits like that!

@joelle-stone

I just love how Riure puts everything together via foot-steps and sounds, as well as what the others say: “the one Princess Liorah described as a hunk of coal,” — Dan’s probably permanently branded as a hunk of coal now, XD