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Hi guys!

Here’s the second part of my September critiquing piece: the first chapter of my current WIP!

What to critique for:

– Character Development: are my characters described enough? Can you get a good image of them in mind?

– Setting/Worldbuilding: How’s the setting? Even though this is early on in the WIP, can you get a fairly clear picture of where they are?

– Plot: How does the story flow?

Here it is: WIP Chapter 1

It’s set to comment-only access and will be that way until October 10, from which point on it will be set to view-only. However, I will accept critiques on this thread after that (I mean, who would deny free critiquing? XD )

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