WarrenLuther04

WarrenLuther04 replied to the topic Part 1: September Critique! in the forum Critiques 7 years, 8 months ago

@devastate-lasting

Thank you! 😀

Yes! *fist bumps self* Thank you so much!

XD I get that it’s short; the prologue itself was only like two pages. 🙂
WarrenLuther04 replied to the topic October 2018 Accountability in the forum Accountability & Achievements 7 years, 8 months ago

Since I don’t always have time to write every week, is it okay if I put my monthly goals?

My October Writing Goals:

– Write Chapter 2 of my WIP

– Write Post-Climax 1 of my WIP

– Chapter 3 of my WIP (maybe)

– Revise Prologue/Chapter 1 according to SE critiques

– Chapter 4 of WIP (maybe)

I’m starting out OK on these. *shrugs*
WarrenLuther04 replied to the topic Prayer Requests #1 in the forum Prayer Requests 7 years, 8 months ago

Thank you so much for your prayers!
WarrenLuther04 replied to the topic Prayer Requests #1 in the forum Prayer Requests 7 years, 8 months ago

@allison-grace She’s better! She was allowed back to pageantry a few days ago, and yesterday was the homecoming football game in which pageantry performs and she did great! Praise God! 😀
WarrenLuther04 posted a new activity comment 7 years, 8 months ago

@jenwriter17 Thank you so much! It was kinda scary.

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WarrenLuther04 posted an update 7 years, 9 months ago

Hi guys,

I have a prayer request. Yesterday, one of my friends at school was at pageantry practice and, long story short, she hit her head really hard with one of the props. Today when I was talking to her, she was having fairly severe memory lapses and ended up having to go to the emergency room because the doctors were afraid she had a minor…[Read more]
- Jenna Terese replied 7 years, 9 months ago
  
  @warrenluther04 Ah, I’m sorry to hear that! I’ll definitely be praying; head injuries can be a scary.
  - WarrenLuther04 replied 7 years, 8 months ago
    
    @jenwriter17 Thank you so much! It was kinda scary.
WarrenLuther04 replied to the topic Prayer Requests #1 in the forum Prayer Requests 7 years, 9 months ago

Hi guys,

I have a prayer request. Yesterday, one of my friends at school was at pageantry practice and, long story short, she hit her head really hard with one of the props. Today when I was talking to her, she was having fairly severe memory lapses and ended up having to go to the emergency room because the doctors were afraid she had a minor…[Read more]
WarrenLuther04 posted a new activity comment 7 years, 9 months ago

Okay. Can’t wait!

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WarrenLuther04 posted a new activity comment 7 years, 9 months ago

By the way, you’re new series sounds really cool! Will you post it for beta-reading on SE?

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- Linyang Zhang replied 7 years, 9 months ago
  
  Ah, it’s still the same old series. XD. It’s supposed to be composed of a lot of different series, but I would very much like to post it for critique, yes.
- WarrenLuther04 replied 7 years, 9 months ago
  
  Okay. Can’t wait!
WarrenLuther04 posted a new activity comment 7 years, 9 months ago

Ok. 😅 I should probably know more about him if I listen to him… XD

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WarrenLuther04 replied to the topic Part 1: September Critique! in the forum Critiques 7 years, 9 months ago

@devastate-lasting No problem! Homework is the bane of writing…. XD
WarrenLuther04 posted a new activity comment 7 years, 9 months ago

@morreafirebird Thank you! 🙂 I’m definitely planning to be active in the guilds, but yes, I’ve been busy of late. I’ll try to be much more active during breaks XD. Thanks again!

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WarrenLuther04 replied to the topic Part 1: September Critique! in the forum Critiques 7 years, 9 months ago

@lydia-writes Still, thanks again! 😀

If you want to you can, but I think I get where you were referencing. 🙂
WarrenLuther04 started the topic Part 2: September Critiques in the forum Critiques 7 years, 9 months ago

Hi guys!

Here’s the second part of my September critiquing piece: the first chapter of my current WIP!

What to critique for:

– Character Development: are my characters described enough? Can you get a good image of them in mind?

– Setting/Worldbuilding: How’s the setting? Even though this is early on in the WIP, can you get a fairly clear…[Read more]
WarrenLuther04 replied to the topic My WIP: *Cascade* in the forum Erekdale Writing Discussions 7 years, 9 months ago

@allison-grace XD Thanks.

😀 Then you’re better than me. (I’ve just started Spanish 1 at school) XD I usually just use Google Translate or some other translator online.
WarrenLuther04 replied to the topic Part 1: September Critique! in the forum Critiques 7 years, 9 months ago

@lydia-writes

Thank you so much! I’ll definitely work on the parts you suggested changes in. Thanks again! 😀 😀 😀
WarrenLuther04 replied to the topic Part 1: September Critique! in the forum Critiques 7 years, 9 months ago

@sarah-narnathron (?)
WarrenLuther04 replied to the topic Part 1: September Critique! in the forum Critiques 7 years, 9 months ago

Whoops

@allison-grace @theinvizibleman @lydia-writes @filewriter @devastate-lasting @sageinthemeadow @kara-lynn @sarah-narnathon
WarrenLuther04 replied to the topic Part 1: September Critique! in the forum Critiques 7 years, 9 months ago

I just wanted to let everyone know that the link’s access will change to “view only” as of October 10. You can still comment on it here (why would I turn down advice XD) but you won’t be able to comment directly on the draft. 🙂

@morreafirebird @bekks2017 @allison-grace @theinvizibleman @lydia-writes @filewriter @devastate-lasting @sageinthemeadow…[Read more]
WarrenLuther04 replied to the topic "Bloody Hands" in the forum Critiques 7 years, 9 months ago

@allison-grace I’ve read some of it; I’m liking it so far! It’s intriguing…. :} 😀
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