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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
Bored out of his mind. That was eXaCtLy how Alessio was feeling…
He couldn’t afford to slow down.
Get somewhere marginally safe. Find Arsene. Where was that idiot now? Alessio wasn’t sure whether he was more miffed that Arsene wasn’t there, or that he was really scared for him. Because it was a stupid idea to catch feelings for a bankrob…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
Calliope
Anika slipped on my boots and laced them up. Thankfully, I had rather big feet for my height, so they’d fit her alright.
I loved those boots. I’d had them for years, and they were well worn and scuffed by now.
Without the thick soles, I felt even smaller than usual. I crossed my arms and drew myself up to what my height would…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
And another one!

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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
I KNOW! When I get done with a story I’m usually sad. (okay, I finish things so seldom I can’t say ‘usually’). I feel like I’m saying goodbye to old friends. I mean, it’s not goodbye goodbye, but I’ve been intimately aquainted with them for months (or years) and now our relationship has to change. 🙁 sniff.
Exactly 😭 The GB trilog…[Read more]
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Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
Haha, I knew it! XD You see, I’m used to writing in omniscient, so to try and write in the character castle gets me into trouble when I try to use others’ characters without knowing them, lol. Do you write in first person all the time, or just here?
That’s a great story for Kit and Valencia! I’m really glad they work it out. It seems…[Read more]
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calidris replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
I never thought of it like that, but that is honestly such a perfect way of describing Kit XD
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calidris replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
Oh trust me you definitely are, but idk which tree either? Because there’s a LOT XD
Oh well, looks like we’ll find out soon enough
Kit:
“Only a brother-in-law.”
“So you’re married?”
It’s just another reminder that Avin’s an adult, unlike me.
I mean I guess I technically am as well, but I don’t really feel like it and besides, this guy is …[Read more]
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calidris replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
Basil is nothing if not * b i z a r r e *
Aww I’m glad! They have such a fun and interesting dynamic, and in my humble opinion I believe they might just be my most shippable couple yet. Thankfully, they are going too end up working it out, but not without some sustained effort on both sides (ok lets be real, mostly on Kit’s side because h…[Read more]
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Ragnarok replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
Sherlock had no time to think, as he dove into the mirror of greed and selfishness. As one would expect, it was a dark stone hall, with walls decorated with gold and silver. Although it was a dimly lit area, the blind idiot started smoking.
Didn’t he know that would ruin his lungs?
“So, what do you think is up ahead?”
“Who…[Read more]
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Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
@rose-colored-fancy I KNOW! When I get done with a story I’m usually sad. (okay, I finish things so seldom I can’t say ‘usually’). I feel like I’m saying goodbye to old friends. I mean, it’s not goodbye goodbye, but I’ve been intimately aquainted with them for months (or years) and now our relationship has to change. 🙁 sniff.
I loved Cal’s…[Read more]
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Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
@calidris Okay, sounds good! I didn’t think Valencia was actually afraid afraid, just “afraid” he was going to come talk to her when she wanted to be alone. Just to clarify 🙂 You’re is better because you’re the author (obviously!! lol)
Avin
Mmm what do I do in Spire?” The boy grinned a little nervously.
Wrong question.
“I suppose it’…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
Ophelia
“So, Ophelia, what do you think this dance should be? I think…I’d like it to be a dance of birds. Imitating them, ya know?” Jade said, gesturing with her arms as though they were wings.
I continued with my improvised barre warm-ups but nodded.
I forced my smile back.
“That sounds nice! The ballet we’re w…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
I saw on your newsletter that you wrote Aydin’s last POV chapter, and I KNOW that feeling. So sad, so satisfying, yet so…sad! Congrats on getting this far, and I’m so happy for you and Aydin–I am personally grateful that you gave him a happy ending.
Thank you! It’s delightful but I find myself so sad to leave them 😭 OF COURSE…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
This seems like an incredible and wonderful dynamic! Lots of great character development potential there! Just reading that small bit, I want to know what happens next between Malcolm and Ophelia! Hey, feel free to bring Malcolm into the castle too! That would be awesome if he came in and joined the performance! Perhaps replace…
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
XDDDD what a great turn of phrase. lol
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E. N. Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
@jared-williams Making Isaias dance is a great idea! 😂
What the stupid flopping fish was that?! Jade closed her eyes and reminded herself that these people could be from anywhere. Who knew what was normal in their worlds?
”Let’s go through the five basic foot positions,” said Jade. “Watch. First position, plié. Second, plié. Third, plié…[Read more]
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E. N. Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
😂 that worm thing was so funny, and it would totally freak Jade out because she’s only been around normal humans.
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
“After me punks! Never bet against a ranger when death is on the line!” He whooped and dove into the mirror with- Accept your greed and selfishness.
Nithel’s chest tightened, but he jumped up, (snatching the cloth if blind man left it), and dove through after him.
All had to enter now, and the walls were literally closing in. No time to thi…[Read more]
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Neasa replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
omigosh your emo description was hilarious😂 and accurate!
Lorcan: *shoots me filthy looks from the corner*
It is perfect for Lorcan, thanks for giving him some purpose here!😅😄
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
Abirami’s turn… (cheesy grin with slanted eyes)
Abirami
The door, if you could call it that anymore, was all but shredded as I pushed it open and entered the room that had previously been infested with Ku’s hive.
I marveled at the destruction that mere bugs could do. Just a few months ago, Ku’s hive had successfully committed what amounted to…[Read more]
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