Trallion

@ethan-leonard

Bring him on! We have a good number of characters in here, but the castle certainly isn’t full 😉  right now, there is about three to four separate groups off conversating or doing their own thing and quite a few characters that are not doing much at the moment and are free to interact with… as well as free to interact with…[Read more]

@ethan-leonard

haha. thank you for your interest. It is nothing like the steamy love stories of modern ilk… if that’s what you are asking. It is a love story only in that this is a story of how the parents of my main character for a book series I am writing met… yeah, not confusing, eh… It was meant to be a short story of how my MC’s…[Read more]

@inkhorn

@mamaauthoress

@merieshenanigans

@emily-waldorf

@calidris

@rose-colored-fancy

Hello all!
If there is room, I’d like to drop in two of my characters.

Finnegan Bruinsdale (usually called Finn for short)
White-blond hair, blue eyes, 16 years old, and about 5’ 9”.
He’s the protagonist of my trilogy. Compassionate, feels complet…[Read more]

Is anyone still using this room? Because I have a villain I would like to drop in…

Hey Everyone!

Im new here, but would it be ok if I dropped a villain of mine in here? I’ve been working on this book and the main character is…eh, but the villain needs work…
If the room is full at the moment that’s ok, just asking.

Ethan L

And one more question: are you going to divide the book up into chapters?

Here are my thoughts concerning Aefflaed’s Weakness:

*Spoiler alert!*

Thank you for putting the pronunciation guide at the front!

It was very easy for me to slip into Aefflaed’s skin in the beginning. The prose there quickly made that connection. This connection continued throughout most of the book, and it was very easy for me to relate to h…[Read more]

Hello There!

I’d be more than happy to check it out, but…is it like the romance novels of today’s world? Or is it toned down…a lot…?

(yes, first sentence was typed in Obi Wan accent XD)

@jared-williams

I’m going to put my beta reading feedback in here so it’s not in the Character Castle.

@everyone

I’m dropping in another character who was in the Character Castle 2.0. To those who were in that castle, he has gone through such a personality/pretty much everything change so that he is unrecognizable. XD

Conroy Flinston

Age: around 8-10 (I know, I know, he was in his twenties before, but plans change, drastically in this case…[Read more]

*rushes in and is relieved to find that things haven’t changed much*

@calidris

I think I’m going too drop Basil in again sometime. He’s changed a lot since he was last in here – I’ve finally nailed his backstory and motivations, so that’s changed, but he’s no less of an annoying brat XD

I’d love to see Basil again (never mind that I saw very li…[Read more]

“I’ll open the safe.” Arsene said finally, no witty remark or scheme this time…Alessio wasn’t sure how to respond to that…Carefully, the robber set the lady down as gently as if she were a queen. What was Arsene? He just couldn’t gauge him, just how dangerous or amoral was he? He…seemed to care, but not about his own life or – Alessio shook off…[Read more]

So.

It was quiet.

Not a real quiet, only the façade of silence loud with insecurities, and with torturous anticipation.

A numb sort of quiet because it was coming again. If the silence were a color it would be grey – not pure white or wicked black, not a single color really. The kind of grey that blocks out all the other colors and just fa…[Read more]

Lol no problem man! This is the week of my finals!!! If I live I shall try to update monday XDDDDDD

Ku is so adorable, I love her.

haha. Well, thank you! @calidris

Will Ku find romantic love… I’m sad to say I don’t know yet. I can’t really say yet…

Ku is very close with her adopted family. But… you know, she’s a teenager. lol. Especially with her background, teenage years is where she really seeks to find her place outside her family and has those pesky questions…[Read more]

@jared-williams awww I feel so sad for Ku :'(

I know this is probably a spoiler, but will Ku find romantic love?  Or, a close lifelong friend?

I’m sorry but I’ve wholeheartedly adopted her now XD

Ku’Aya

My heart was in the pit of my stomach, my ears were burning, and my stomach was caught up in my throat. What was wrong with me? I can’t believe I actually asked him to marry me! I’d have squealed in embarrassment if it wouldn’t have made it worse.

“I can’t file houses!” Ehud hollered stiffly. From the jagged hair line, across from ear t…[Read more]

A few ideas for you….

– spooked guards and rumors spread about seeing things in the night while your mc overhears

– bring the ghost in stages… perhaps your ghost is just figuring out how to interact, so that’s where the stages come in; for example, perhaps at first your mc gets flashes of cold randomly. of course the mc would think nothing…[Read more]