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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
That’s an awesome start! Just one comment that might make it easier 🙂
Because this rp is meant to develop characters, we tend to write more in the form of fragmented fiction (Just write as if you’re writing a novel, but cut off at a tension point, like when something big happened or your character asked a question.) So, it tends…[Read more]
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Laura K. Abeid replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
(all right, I’m back)
“Please,” Rúan panted, trying hard not to cry out in pain as his mangled leg throbbed. “Water …”
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Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Talk room in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
@denali-christianson Yay! some people think I’m a bit strange for adding Beregond in my top 7 favorite characters. Also, refresh my memory: who’s Haldir? I know I’ll have an “aha” moment when you say it, but I can’t place him.
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Denali Christianson replied to the topic Talk room in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
HOW DID I FORGET BEREGOND???????????? I LOVE HIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And I’m like halfway through chapter three rn, although I’m reading a lot today so I’ll probably get way further through it by tonight!
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Laura K. Abeid replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
(Ahhhh sorry guys! I had to go AFK for a bit — next time I’ll let you know)
Rúan sucked in a breath through his teeth, falling against someone unknown.
“Water …” he mumbled, trying to blink away the fuzz collecting around his vision.
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Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Talk room in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
And I find Denethor fascinating, but “like” is too strong of a word. I divide my time between pitying him and shouting at him.
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Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Talk room in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
My favorites (the first three all struggle for first place soooo…no order among those): Legolas, Aragorn, Faramir, then Sam, Merry/Pippin, Beregond. But Eomer and Gandalf and Boromir…aggghh
I like Imrahil, but you don’t get enough of him to make him a favorite.
@denali-christianson where are you in Return of the King?
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Denali Christianson replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Niarok (part 2)
Niarok took a sip of water from his canteen, relieved to feel it was still about halfway full. The little river of water had frozen, and there was no way he would be getting any other fresh water anytime soon.
Ayden still hadn’t returned from the shadows, Yila was staring distantly into the fire like she wanted nothing more than…[Read more]
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Denali Christianson replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
LOVE IT!!!!! Getting started the hard way… XD
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Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
that made perfect sense and was close to how I was saying it anyway. 🙂
That was perfect, but…but…DON’T LEAVE US THERE!!!!!!!!! (Jk, Jk, that was an awesome way to start.)
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Denali Christianson replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Niarok (part 1)
Niarok stood before the fire, cloak wrapped tightly around his shoulders and his hand stretched over the flames.
It was somehow, against all odds, getting colder.
That was not good.
Qatar was glaring straight into the fire, Lorcan was standing off to the side, within reach of the flames.
Leytera and Quin were perched on a rock…[Read more]
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Laura K. Abeid replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Goodness, however you like. So far, I’ve had my characters in by a. Letting them stumble into a cave/tunnel b. They found a portal, named it Hector, and wandered in the void for a while. (I think they insulted the void too a couple times but that’s neither here nor there) and I dropped Aydin in by giving him a nightmare and jus…
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Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Ruan [annnd, SE doesn’t let me make the stress mark like Microsoft Word does…arrrgghh] sounds so cool! I’m excited to meet him. Did you make up the name or is it real, and could you give me a phonetic pronunciation? (If it’s Irish I’m sunk…IDK what makes that language tick, lol)
Lots of people want to hug Quin…except his…[Read more]
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Denali Christianson replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
HEY A NEW PERSON!!!!!! *bowls you over with massive hug* WELCOME!!!!!!!!!!! Ooooh, your character sounds so cool I can’t wait to meet him!!!!!!
Yeah, Niarok will have a mighty fun time trying to keep Ruan from being scared of him. XD I mean, I’m also scared of doctors and kind of hate them, but I would do anything to live…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Mmm Rúan’s probably going to be a little scared of him. He’s uneasy of doctors (though he doesn’t like to admit it), and is overwhelmed when someone singles out his feelings.
That’ll be cool! Though even Aydin hasn’t managed to be scared of Niarok longer than a few minutes. Niarok is really empathetic, I bet you’ll like him 🙂
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Laura K. Abeid replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Your character sounds awesome! I hope he gets along with the others XD (Some conflict is fun though!)
Ah yes, let’s hope Rúan behaves himself. 😆
We have no less than three edgy assassins or ex-assassins, a supersoldier, a ninja, a sci-fi girl, a literal biblical angel, two brothers who are total opposites, a guy who rides a…
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Your character sounds awesome! I hope he gets along with the others XD (Some conflict is fun though!)
I’m going to steal @denali-christianson ‘s summary because it was good and we have like a million characters in here XD
We have no less than three edgy assassins or ex-assassins, a supersoldier, a ninja, a sci-fi girl, a literal…[Read more]
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Laura K. Abeid replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Yep! As much or as little detail as you want, but we at least need name, age, appearance, and something about their personality.
Sounds good!
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NAME: Rúan Pyrestone
WIP: Upon the Throne of Embers
AGE WHEN INTRODUCED IN WIP: 19
EYES: sea-green
HAIR: Flaming red, like blood or fire
SKIN: pale and freckled
FRAME: hardy frame; 6’3”; br…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Okay, thank you so much!
Do I post a character profile here?
Yep! As much or as little detail as you want, but we at least need name, age, appearance, and something about their personality.
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Laura K. Abeid replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
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