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Samantha Farrar started the topic Freedom Dues – My Knewest Short Story in the forum Critiques 6 years, 11 months ago
Okay so here is a first rough draft of that story I was telling you all about… I would love any feedback and suggestions the only thing I would ask is if you could make sure you are on suggestion vs editing mode if you want to type in the story. Other than that pls feel free to comment, suggest, let me know what you think of the characters any parts that confuse you, etc…
Thank you all very much for your help.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1s5H25hxlZJJr_H4noEtH0_GBOTdRUJ_QyQR8ZYqty3M/edit
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