@ryowildfire
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RyoWildfire replied to the topic Greetings! *bows* in the forum Introduce Yourself 7 years ago
Hello to a fellow Sonic the Hedgehog fan! I love the StH comics and am currently going through the Archie series (on issue 145 right now). It’s nice to meet you. π
I found Story Embers while researching worldbuilding for my current WIP and was thrilled to find I was on a Christian writers website.
My favorite Genre to write in is…[Read more]
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RyoWildfire replied to the topic Hello, I'm new here π in the forum Introduce Yourself 7 years ago
Tony Stark is an interesting character. Iron Man, much like Superman, suffers the “overpowered” syndrome of superheroes. Clark Kent is much more interesting than Superman is (though Superman is far from my favorite superhero). They simply don’t have enough weaknesses to make compelling stories.
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RyoWildfire posted a new activity comment 7 years ago
Thank you so much for reading it. I’m really glad you liked it. I will look over your comments later (thanks for not only reading it but for taking to the time to add comments as well).
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RyoWildfire posted an update 7 years ago
My gmail address is soulwind19@gmail.com if you want to share out the first few chapters of your WIP. π
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Oh, thanks! I just replied to your comment with my email, but I’ll go ahead and send the access links to this email. Thanks for reading it! π
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Good morning! I just wanted to follow up with you, I never received the access links to your story. Please let me know if you are still interested in having me read it.
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I’m so sorry! I am swamped right now and totally forgot. Thanks so much for reminding me! *facepalm*
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RyoWildfire posted a new activity comment 7 years ago
@ariella-newheart
Oh, I would love your honest feedback if you want to provide it! That includes the positives and the negatives. If you don’t like something or feel I could have written it better or were confused at a certain part, any of that type of feedback would be great. Also, any feedback on anything you really liked would be great, too.…[Read more]-
@ryowildfire Thanks! I’ll start reading.
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@ryowildfire Thank you so much for letting me read your story! I really liked it. π
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Thank you so much for reading it. I’m really glad you liked it. I will look over your comments later (thanks for not only reading it but for taking to the time to add comments as well).
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RyoWildfire replied to the topic Hello, I'm new here π in the forum Introduce Yourself 7 years ago
Ahh, Ok. That makes sense. I usually write in third limited. I was imagining giving all those characters page time in third limited and that seemed a bit overwhelming. I’d be willing to read what you have so far if you want. π
I agree. Google Docs is great. I’ll look for your message.
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RyoWildfire replied to the topic Hello, I'm new here π in the forum Introduce Yourself 7 years ago
Awesome. I use Google Docs pretty heavily for my writing (which is also nice for sharing so people can add comments or make suggestions on the work). What’s your email address and I can share out the story? The story is called Dragon’s Blood.
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RyoWildfire replied to the topic Hello, I'm new here π in the forum Introduce Yourself 7 years ago
Your WIP sounds pretty interesting. Do each of those main characters get a POV in your book?
I don’t have a name for my current WIP, just a place holder name. I’ll figure out that name at some point though.
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RyoWildfire replied to the topic Hello, I'm new here π in the forum Introduce Yourself 7 years ago
Correction. The story I mentioned in my last post is a Novelette, not a Novella. Sorry about that.
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RyoWildfire replied to the topic Hello, I'm new here π in the forum Introduce Yourself 7 years ago
Nice to meet you!
I am currently working on an epic fantasy novel. Here is the WIP pitch.
βWhile searching for a special kind of energy stone used as a resource for her city, a woman finds an ancient seal on a dark prison which holds an evil force.
Thinking it is a new kind of energy stone, she accidentally breaks the seal w…[Read more]
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RyoWildfire replied to the topic Hello, I'm new here π in the forum Introduce Yourself 7 years ago
Fawkes looks like it blends Historical Fiction and Fantasy elements which sounds pretty cool. I also like the fact the author puts the main character in a dilemma of choices. I may have to check it out. π
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RyoWildfire replied to the topic Hello, I'm new here π in the forum Introduce Yourself 7 years ago
I agree. Heath Ledger’s Joke is really creepy, he did such a good job. I was saddened when I heard the news of what happened to him right before that movie came out.
I don’t know if I have a favorite soundtrack for epic fantasy, but most of those you mentioned I’ve listened to and like. I usually go on youtube and find a good 1 to 3 hour…[Read more]
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RyoWildfire replied to the topic Hello, I'm new here π in the forum Introduce Yourself 7 years ago
Welcome and glad to meet you.
Fantasy is a fun genre and can have really deep storytelling. As for tips on developing magic systems… I’m not sure how much I can help at this point. That is one of my weaker points that I am still trying to figure out. However, Brandon Sanderson has some laws of magic he developed that may be…[Read more]
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RyoWildfire replied to the topic Hello, I'm new here π in the forum Introduce Yourself 7 years ago
Hello, Ari! It’s nice to meet you.
The first HTTYD movie was definitely my favorite. Honestly, at the end, when it shows Hiccup and Toothless walking out of Hiccup’s house and both Toothless’ lost tail fin and Hiccup’s lost foot are on the same side it brought tears to my eyes.
Yeah, inner critics can be brutal. It’s like your…[Read more]
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RyoWildfire replied to the topic Hello, I'm new here π in the forum Introduce Yourself 7 years ago
Nice to meet you. π
The Reckoners series (Steelheart, Firefight, and Calamity) is a really good series (honestly, I like most of Sanderson’s works). If you love fantasy, I’d highly recommend the original Mistborn Trilogy (Books 1 through 3) as a good starting point for Sanderson’s fantasy works (though The Way of Kings is a…[Read more]
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RyoWildfire replied to the topic Hello, I'm new here π in the forum Introduce Yourself 7 years ago
Nice to meet you, too!
Although he is not a Marvel superhero, Batman is my Favorite superhero, particular the Batman from the Christopher Nolan films. However, my favorite Marvel superhero would have to be Spiderman. I love the fact that he is a down-to-earth everyman character while also being a superhero. His stories are often…[Read more]
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RyoWildfire replied to the topic Hello, I'm new here π in the forum Introduce Yourself 7 years ago
Hi, Buddy! Nice to meet you.
You raise some very good questions.
My story ideas tend to come in as plot ideas and as such, I feel I am a fairly good plotter, though even here I feel like I need to improve.
I generally know what themes my books are about either before I start writing or shortly thereafter.
I think I am average on creating…[Read more]
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RyoWildfire started the topic Hello, I'm new here π in the forum Introduce Yourself 7 years ago
Hello! My name is Mark and I recently stumbled upon Story Embers while doing some research for my current WIP. I was trying to figure out how to deepen my worldbuilding when I found a post here on Story Embers (found below).
https://storyembers.org/how-to-use-worldbuilding-to-deepen-your-plot/
As I was perusing the article above, I happened to…[Read more]
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