Rolena Hatfield

@corkybookworm  I will be praying. I’m sorry to hear he’s going through a rough season. Have you gotten to talk with him much?

@graceabounds2129  Yeah I’d love to do another one too! I’m not really in “the loop” enough to know if there’s one coming up, but we could ask @brandon-miller to appeal to other guild masters for another war. 🙂

@wordsmith @graceabounds2129

Way to go guys!!! Thanks for putting Rillumen in the race and may I say, NICE JOB!  You guys rock.

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Haha! No not at all! I briefly looked over them (thanks for the help by the way!) and haven’t have a chance yet to come back and really work through them. Plus I was out of town for five days 🙂 At a writers conference. Which was epic. And if you’ve never gone to one, you need to go.

Thanks again, though! I really appreciate the feedback!

@wordsmith

Cool beans. I love improvement! It should be fixed now so you can comment and suggest. If not, lemme know and I’ll try again 🙂

This is from the first couple pages of one of my favorite books, The Traitor’s Game.

“The truth about the Lava Fields was that very few people knew my whereabouts, making it the first place I’d ever felt truly free. Free to explore the knifelike maze of sharp, black rocks. Free to sit in the stone cottage near Unknown Lake and eat at the rickety…[Read more]

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Aren’t they though?! They’re so creative and intelligent! I’m excited to see where this prompt goes. 🙂

@pookiemonster @scribbles @wordsmith

(hey, Wordsmith, sorry I never replied! I’ve been out of town a lot this month 🙂 I couldn’t seem to find your feedback. 🙁 I so appreciate your willingness to help this writer out!)

Hey guys!

Taking your thoughts and feedback from my critique partner I’ve rewritten chapter one.

If you’re interested in…[Read more]

@wordsmith

Same 🙂 As long as I can tell when I’m getting too carried away then having a competitive nature is a grand thing; highly motivational. 😉

Thanks, you too! My inspiration comes from the 6 year old boy I’ve nannied since he was 4 🙂 I’ll be telling him about this project and he will be more than happy to supply me with more inside thoughts XD

@wordsmith  Yes! A fellow competitive spirit!

I added some points! Who’s next???

@brandon-miller That or just bring it with you and then you can read a SIGNED copy of Peddler.  😀

Is Evaporation short for The Evaporation of Sofi Snow? I need to finish reading that.

@star,  @graceabounds2129  @wordsmith I’m a little late to the party, but welcome to Rillumen!! Hopefully you’re getting settled into the swing of things around here. I’m excited to get to interact with ya’ll more 🙂

As for this video…. excellent. I was sitting in an airport while I watched this and it was fun when it was finished to look up a…[Read more]

@scribbles It’s soooo worth the time. 🙂 Can’t wait till you read it!!!

@brandon-miller You’re friend has excellent taste in good reading. 😛 I’m planning on tracking Lindsay Franklin down at RM hoping she’ll sign my copy. (pretty sure I’m gonna faint with delight if that happens) Ha! Pretty much doesn’t matter what I’m reading at the time, as…[Read more]

Whoo! Nice work Rillumenites! An honorable mention is a glorious thing.

@scribbles

Aww thanks so much for reading this. 🙂 Also, it’s probably not just you, I’ve been given some ideas how to introduce things in the beginning better so I don’t loose readers. 🙂 Also this reminds me of a quote by you “It’s this weird thing where I have to be distracted to focus.” – Scribbles XD

Ah, Kallie and Ki. *rubs hands together*…[Read more]

@pookiemonster

Sorry for the delay in reply! I’ve been out of town. 🙂 Thanks so much for giving this a read!

The characters do fall into those age rages so good job 🙂

Haha! I was thinking of renaming the island so this is great motivation to do so. Apparently I like names that start with K 🙂

I’ll be working on tiding up the beginning. I…[Read more]

@corkybookworm Not at all! I’ll probably be hopping in this weekend. 🙂

But I’ll start with a list here 🙂

1) laughing through tears

2) crushing a flower between her fingers

3) arms wrapped around herself

4) massaging her temples

5) reaching out to loved one only to pull back when they tense

After Death

1) returning every week to keep the…[Read more]

@kayla-joy Yep! It’s due the 18th! Just a little under a week!

@scribbles

Oh my cuteness. Marvin McNutt! I adore this so much!  I seriously sighed a happy sigh at the end of this. What could be better than a squirrel story? Thanks for sharing! It’s so creative. 😀