@revolutionizedtheories
Active 4 years, 8 months ago-
RevolutionizedTheories replied to the topic Calling All Artists! in the forum Art Discussions 4 years, 8 months ago
Is this art thread totally gone, because I can draw all of the things you asked about.
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RevolutionizedTheories replied to the topic Psalm Illustration Thread in the forum Art Discussions 4 years, 8 months ago
If you go on my account I have it in the activity.
Hawk Leaftons father is kidnapped so Hawk leaves his home to save his father and stop the evil king.
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RevolutionizedTheories replied to the topic Psalm Illustration Thread in the forum Art Discussions 4 years, 9 months ago
Thanks, I like your quote.
What kind of story do you to tell?
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RevolutionizedTheories replied to the topic Psalm Illustration Thread in the forum Art Discussions 4 years, 9 months ago
That’s really cool @evelyn
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RevolutionizedTheories replied to the topic Psalm Illustration Thread in the forum Art Discussions 4 years, 9 months ago
Thanks.
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RevolutionizedTheories replied to the topic These are a few of my favourite books… in the forum Apprentice Island Writing Discussions 4 years, 9 months ago
My fav books? Let me just grab my 300 page volume of my favorite books.
For sure the Rangers Apprentice series: John Flanagan. Little Women: Louisa May Alcott. Hank the Cowdog: John R. Erikson. Now that’s a family favorite.
I’m not picky about what genre’s I read. I heavily lean toward fiction and fantasy, and anything staged in the medieval…[Read more]
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RevolutionizedTheories replied to the topic Psalm Illustration Thread in the forum Art Discussions 4 years, 9 months ago
O Lord my God, in thee do I put my trust: save me from all them that persecute me, and deliver me:
Lest he tear my soul like a lion, rending it in pieces, while there is none to deliver.Psalms 7: 1-2
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RevolutionizedTheories posted a new activity comment 4 years, 9 months ago
Thanks will do.
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RevolutionizedTheories posted a new activity comment 4 years, 9 months ago
I have most of the first chapter of a story I’m calling Antioch. I’m looking for feedback on anything I should change or am doing wrong, so I can fix it from the start and end any bad writing habits before they begin.
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RevolutionizedTheories posted an update 4 years, 9 months ago
@taylorclogston
I’m new to this world, but my brother told me you directly proofread stories and could do it for me. Could you?-
Sorry for taking so long to get back to you! I don’t so much do proofreading (checking for mechanical errors and stuff) but I’d be happy to give feedback on higher-level stuff like structure, theme, voice, and characters. What do you have, and what specifically are you looking for?
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I have most of the first chapter of a story I’m calling Antioch. I’m looking for feedback on anything I should change or am doing wrong, so I can fix it from the start and end any bad writing habits before they begin.
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I’d be happy to! Send me a link here or to itaylorclogston@gmail.com
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Thanks will do.
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Hey again! There was little enough of this here that I did proofreading rather than the higher-level stuff I usually do.
Did you take IEW as a writing curriculum? It teaches a writing method that leads to the sorts of sentence structures I’m seeing in your story.
In general, I don’t think there’s enough here for me to critique high level stuff.…[Read more]
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RevolutionizedTheories's profile was updated 4 years, 9 months ago
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RevolutionizedTheories posted an update 4 years, 9 months ago
I completely changed the story I am writing. The first plot I wrote was too boring, the second too cheery, but this plot I just finished today is the cats cradle.
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RevolutionizedTheories replied to the topic Said: Dead or Alive in the forum Apprentice Island Writing Discussions 4 years, 10 months ago
I’m on the side that claims said is mostly dead, so said is a zombie. I will use it, but avoid it when I can.
I believe when you use it to an unnecessary extent, you can portray yourself as an amateur.
The other side of the debate are the people who don’t write, read, or care.
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RevolutionizedTheories replied to the topic Psalm Illustration Thread in the forum Art Discussions 4 years, 10 months ago
Psalms 55:21 The words of his mouth were smoother than butter, but war was in his heart: his words were softer than oil, yet were they drawn swords.
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RevolutionizedTheories replied to the topic Psalm Illustration Thread in the forum Art Discussions 4 years, 10 months ago
Thanks.
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RevolutionizedTheories replied to the topic Psalm Illustration Thread in the forum Art Discussions 4 years, 10 months ago
How do I join these kind of things?
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