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Miller replied to the topic Poetry critique page in the forum Poets 4 years, 3 months ago
Hi…!
So poems are very new to me. I have this poem that isn’t sitting right with me word wise. It doesn’t sound like a poem to me. Now I know nothing about poems, so any advice you could give would be oh so helpful.
Thank you for your time.
The Scar
A lush forest is blemished by this coulee
A imprudent child is at the bottom of it
That…[Read more]
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Miller posted an update in the group Poets 4 years, 3 months ago
Hi poets! I have a poem and would like to know your thoughts on it. I’m very new to poetry. I’d like to show this to a mentor of mine who sparked the idea.
The Scar
A lush forest is blemished by this coulee
A imprudent child is at the bottom of it
That child cowering in the coulee
Too petrified to call for aid
Like a worried mother, You came
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Rose replied to the topic This is totally about poetry in the forum Poets 4 years, 3 months ago
Ah, yes, guilty as charged. I used to love my stick-men battles way back in the day.
Oh, absolutely. Mine were of the rectangle horse varietyXD
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Noah Cochran replied to the topic This is totally about poetry in the forum Poets 4 years, 3 months ago
All little kids draw themselves doing cool things, and in his case that was being a mighty warrior
Ah, yes, guilty as charged. I used to love my stick-men battles way back in the day.
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Rose replied to the topic This is totally about poetry in the forum Poets 4 years, 3 months ago
Nice. Seeing first hand sources of writing and archaeology is always fascinating.
Exactly! This was originally written on birch bark, not parchment, so it’s amazing it was preserved that well.
Elucidation required.
All little kids draw themselves doing cool things, and in his case that was being a mighty warrior XD
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Noah Cochran replied to the topic This is totally about poetry in the forum Poets 4 years, 3 months ago
It’s one of the many doodles made by a seven-year-old boy named Onfim who lived in Novgorod (now Russia) around 700 years ago.
Nice. Seeing first hand sources of writing and archaeology is always fascinating.
As you do.
Elucidation required. 😂
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Rose replied to the topic This is totally about poetry in the forum Poets 4 years, 3 months ago
Happy Holidays, I hope you had a great Christmas 🙂
I’m getting a zillion character ideas just thinking about it.
Absolutely! I think one of the interesting things about it is that family dynamics function completely differently from most others and that even in the same circumstances, it could work completely differently. Endless p…[Read more]
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Noah Cochran replied to the topic This is totally about poetry in the forum Poets 4 years, 3 months ago
Sibling dynamics are my absolute favorite thing to write, and parent-child dynamics are up there too. That’s actually what most of my first book is centered around and it was really fun to write!
I’m getting a zillion character ideas just thinking about it.
It’s an official Croatian letter that was written in 1445.
I love tha…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic This is totally about poetry in the forum Poets 4 years, 3 months ago
I really like the family dynamic of a son or daughter working with their parents, especially in a medieval/fantasy setting.
Exactly! It’s a bit harder work to justify everything but it’s so worth it! I love writing family dynamics in general, and I think all of my main characters have some family.
Sibling dynamics are my absolute…[Read more]
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Noah Cochran replied to the topic This is totally about poetry in the forum Poets 4 years, 3 months ago
I can really see why so many people choose to make their main characters orphans just to get the parents out of the way of adventuring things XD It makes sense from a plot perspective, even though it isn’t any fun for the character.
I agree. However, though I write mostly adult characters (19-20+ in age), who are out of the h…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic This is totally about poetry in the forum Poets 4 years, 3 months ago
Oh wow, nice. That’s a lot more than I do, all I have when I go into a chapter is several bullet points under that chapter.
I used to do that too, but I found that even though it takes a bit longer, it makes it much easier to write since I’m very prone to get lost in the middle of a conversation like “Where was I going with this? I k…[Read more]
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Noah Cochran replied to the topic This is totally about poetry in the forum Poets 4 years, 3 months ago
That same cat had a habit of jumping on people’s backs while they were bending over. That happened multiple times, but the crowning glory was the time my mom was painting something on a step-ladder and bent down to get something and that extremely large cat decided jumping onto her back was the best possible way to demand attention. Nothing went w…
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Noah Cochran replied to the topic This is totally about poetry in the forum Poets 4 years, 3 months ago
And then before I write it I write an outline for the chapter with as much detail as I think of and a rough idea of the dialogue.
Oh wow, nice. That’s a lot more than I do, all I have when I go into a chapter is several bullet points under that chapter.
On that note, thinking of external justifications for why characters are…
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Rose replied to the topic This is totally about poetry in the forum Poets 4 years, 3 months ago
Do you use chapter by chapter outlines or list of chronological events outlines?
Both! I start with the fifteen beats, then I fill in anything I can think of to get from one to the other and then split that up into chapters. And then before I write it I write an outline for the chapter with as much detail as I think of and a rough…[Read more]
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Noah Cochran replied to the topic This is totally about poetry in the forum Poets 4 years, 3 months ago
I have the opposite issue, my main plot ideas need a lot of time but I often didn’t have enough sub-plots to fill up the middle. I do think I’ve gotten better at that though.
Do you use chapter by chapter outlines or list of chronological events outlines?
I was absently thinking of that time our gremlin cat jumped on the tab…
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Rose replied to the topic This is totally about poetry in the forum Poets 4 years, 3 months ago
Yeah, I do need to get Scrivener sometime.
It’s awesome, I couldn’t do without it anymore. Absolutely recommend.
Oh, then I definitely agree. My mind just works in long, epic proportions I guess, so I write long stuff despite the ‘I wanna stop and burn this’ issue.
That is an entire mood. I think that at least once a week, or even…[Read more]
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Noah Cochran replied to the topic This is totally about poetry in the forum Poets 4 years, 3 months ago
If you’re still considering Scrivener, it has this lovely feature where you can write in whatever font and size you like and it will format it for you, make a title page, and number and label all your pages and you can export it in all kinds of formats.
Yeah, I do need to get Scrivener sometime.
I really like reading long b…
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Rose replied to the topic This is totally about poetry in the forum Poets 4 years, 3 months ago
I had no idea about the 12pt, double space formatting thing. But I looked it up and one is supposed to have 12pt size, indented paragraphs, Times New Roman, Double Space, and no extra space between paragraphs (just one enter after each). I had none of that before, so the amount of pages in TTD is small.
If you’re still co…[Read more]
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