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  • Neasa replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago

    Lorcan

    The girl smiled and drew the knife, clutching it in her hand. He admired it silently, the sleek curve if it, the sharpened edges. He knew a good quality weapon when he saw one. “I’m Yila. That’s my brother Niarok.”

    Yila. It sounded soft and poetic to his ears.

    She leaned towards him, scrutinising his face carefully. He raised an eyebrow.…[Read more]

  • Heeeey everyoneee!!!!!!!!

    I’m baaaaacckkkk!!!!

    Also I convinced my friend to join SE. She will appear shortly. Her name is Bella King. 🙂

    Okayyyy now that I’m done embarrassing me friends, I will get down to business.

    @rose-colored-fancy

    Okay, I think we’re actually near the limit, and I really appreciate your offer to wait, but I’m not pla…

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  • *invariable late. again.*

    YAY THE EDWARDIAN PIRATE VS SPY ONE!!!!!!!!
    This should be awesome, can’t wait to meet him!!!

    Lol yes!!!

    mm, I can’t decide between Cire and Fausto looking at the meanings they’re so good…😂 idk!

     

    Sloane was not most girls.
    In fact she wouldn’t always call herself a girl at all. But today it was nice, she lig…[Read more]

  • Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago

    Sahar

    Realizing that I’d already said too much, I turned away and leaned back against the wall, then fished in my sash until I found the small tube of kohl I usually carried with me. I hesitated, realizing I didn’t have a mirror.

    I grinned, realizing I had something just as shiny. I lifted the edge of my skirt and pulled out the knife I wore…[Read more]

  • Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago

    *Appears in a cloud of pink glitter*

    I’m back!! I’ve kicked the word count’s rear and I have returned victorious!

    Acyn

    I turned the rock over, puzzling over it in extreme confusion.

    Quin knelt some distance off. He seemed to be having trouble, but remembering his reaction earlier, I didn’t offer to help. I didn’t want to embarrass him.

    I…[Read more]

  • Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago

    @denali-christianson

    BRING HIM IN BRING HIM IN BRING HIM IN!!!!! I’m sure Niarok wouldn’t mind having one more person with sense, and Yila won’t care since she’s too busy chatting with a rather cute guy named Lorcan….

    Awesome! Glad y’all are happy with the idea!

    And I actually love that idea! Although I would kindly suggest we wait until Yila can…

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  • Heeeey everyone!!!! I’m going to have a longer post this morning cuz time is actually available to my life…

    To satisfy everyone’s curiosity, I’m currently in the state of Kentucky touring these two awesome museums called the Creation Museum and the Ark Encounter. They’re like these awesome places talking about how science and stuff doesn’t have…[Read more]

  • Klein watched as the group entered a cave. Slipping in behind them, he turned and swept the treeline. No contacts. Satisfied, he followed the torch. A few yards in, the group stopped. Everyone was tired. Back to back encounters had pushed them hard. Klein stood out because of that.

    His own endurance had been improved by harsh training. He still…[Read more]

  • OK, now I’ll do Qatar quick, b/c I’m bored.

    Qatar

    He raised his eyebrows. Whatever stuff the man in the coat had given Yila seemed to work. She was flirting with him again. He rolled his eyes and stood up. He glanced across the room for Quin. Their eyes met. Quin looked away.

    He strode across the dark places and  leaned against the shadows of…[Read more]

  • Quin

    Now he had made Niarok feel bad, too. From somewhere behind him he heard Sahar bound up and start babbling to Niarok. Something about Acyn and the reason for his sour disposition. Quin found himself listening.

    So he has family problems, too.

    He turned around slowly. Niarok was talking to a wall and Sahar had retreated to her seat,…[Read more]

  • Noah Cochran replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago

    @this-is-not-an-alien

    No you idiot, babies are born with this pet called blue. It’s an alien with purple horns and it eats obnoxious guys who ask dumb questions.

    You, Cathy, have one forward and imaginative tongue on you, though I believe I might have mentioned that already once or twice.  😉 That was fun to read. 🤗😄

    it’s a Yankee turn of phra…

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  • @rose-colored-fancy

    Sure, bring him on in! I’m sure we’d all love to interact with him! (The very worst thing that could happen is we all give up and go away because he’s too secretive, and you (or he) end up bored, lol.) It’d be interesting to see how Quin would react. He’s never met anyone else with a disability.

  • Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago

    @this-is-not-an-alien

    AWW!!! That’s so cute!!! That was the most adorable and satisfying ending possible!!!! 😀 😀 I LOVED IT SO MUCH!!!

    Lol really? *tilts head comparing Chantara and Rosario* huh. But Rosy isn’t dreaming and philosophical…like at all…huh…LOL that’s neat!

    Yep, you’re totally right there. I think that if I tried her personali…[Read more]

  • Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago

    *blink*
    🤣Bwahahahaha!🤣
    No you idiot, babies are born with this pet called blue. It’s an alien with purple horns and it eats obnoxious guys who ask dumb questions.
    (:
    LOL it’s a Yankee turn of phrase for a pale blue that was worn on baby boys dipers a lot XD. *squints a little not quite sure whether you’re being smarty or that’s actually just an…[Read more]

  • @denali-christianson

    that’s A-OK! I wouldn’t suggest you change it unless I actually meant for you to change it. :))) I didn’t like that part either–didn’t know how to get from here to there. BWHAHAHAHAH! QUIN IS BREAKING SOMEBODY’S HEART! (Sorry. I realize that was a creepy, author-thing to do.) Have fun on your vacation, even if it is tiring!…[Read more]

  • *Squeals so loud the windows shatter*

    y’all are wrecking me inside!!!!!!!!! Quin is just soooo heart-wrenching and Sahar and ugggghhh!!!!!!!!! Y’ALL ARE KILLING ME!!!!! XD

    @rose-colored-fancy

    I LOVE YOUR NEW PROFILE PIC!!!!!!

    @emily-waldorf

    Just this once I’m going to take you up on your offer and change Niarok’s reply. He’s not the…[Read more]

  • Quin

    He walked away from Niarok, into the darkness of the cave, and stood, staring vacantly into the shadows. Memories flooded his brain, and for once he didn’t try to shove them away. It hurt too much to even protest, so he let the pain slide down across the few short months since It happened, through the memories.

    <The horse’s scream>–he…[Read more]

  • Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago

    Sahar

    The girl’s brother knelt beside the stream, washing the blood out of his clothes and off his skin.

    I only hoped he wouldn’t try to drink it. Hopefully, he knew enough. I wasn’t about to warn him until I was sure he was about to drink it. I didn’t want to come across as a know-it-all.

    He tasted the water, but carefully, like he knew what…[Read more]

  • @this-is-not-an-alien

    OK, it makes sense now! Thanks for telling me about the crossed out sentences. That was sweet, and I don’t even know these characters as well as others who have been here longer. 🙂  You employed lots of vivid colors to aid your descriptions–good move!!

    @noah-cochran

    it would be scary if anybody did live in an area of…[Read more]

  • Noah Cochran replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago

    @this-is-not-an-alien

    baby blue

    Do people have blue babies where you live? That can’t be a good thing…xD

    🙂 I’m assuming you are using that adjective to mean the sky is young.

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