Ava Murbarger

@calidris

yep, and it’s always the same character, too.  You know how there’s that one character that you feel sorry for, and you have to give them trauma and you just feel so sad seeing them all hurt and alone?  But then it’s all the more satisfying to heal them and watch as they grow and develop and finally reach their happy ending?  I feel lik…

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Pia didn’t say anything or look up at Kallun. He squeezed her hand, knowing it would take a few minutes for her mood to shift.

@inkhorn

As for Khalon’s backstory, well it is woefully underdeveloped. All I know is that it’s not tragic, all of his family is alive, he’s an only child, and his parents are great. I might change some of those though.

Oh, glory be, we have one character who isn’t miserable!! *happy dance*

That’ll be fun to give or take powers. It’ll put Khalo…

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Well, YEAH!!!!

I liked Acyn!!! I might put him before Sahar, even. Though they make such a good team… I’d like to read them in canon (hint hint, lol)

Eliana turned her head to see what he was doing. “Hm.”

@caladris

XD I was in a bored spell when I began reading the character castle. As for Khalon’s backstory, well it is woefully underdeveloped. All I know is that it’s not tragic, all of his family is alive, he’s an only child, and his parents are great. I might change some of those though.

@denali-christianson

Here goes!

KHALON

A girl walke…[Read more]

Liorah

“I’m a doctor,” Niarok said quietly. “I didn’t mean to stare. I’m sorry. Although if you ever want to tell me how you got them, I’d be happy to hear the story.”

It wasn’t what I’d expected him to say. He was literally the first person in this entire place who had decent manners.

I shrugged and grinned, easily.

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@calidris

I second this: Acyn is one of your best characters and there is nothing anyone can say to convince me otherwise!  He’s genuinely annoying but in the most oblivious, hilarious way and I love him for it lol

I’m so glad you like him too! 😀 My biggest issue for him is that I don’t have anything for him to do in the later books! He ju…[Read more]

@denali-christianson yep, and it’s always the same character, too.  You know how there’s that one character that you feel sorry for, and you have to give them trauma and you just feel so sad seeing them all hurt and alone?  But then it’s all the more satisfying to heal them and watch as they grow and develop and finally reach their happy e…[Read more]

@calidris

Ok, semi-weird question, but have you ever cried over your story?

Too many times to count. I usually have a crying spell every time a character dies or comes back to life or has a friendship or gets injured or moves. Or breathes. Breathing especially. And this makes me realize that I have forgotten once again that Yila has asthma. Excuse…[Read more]

@denali-christianson ahh yes

Ok, semi-weird question, but have you ever cried over your story?

@calidris

sooo basically tears?

Precisely. The really watery kind that flood houses, oftentimes accompanied by blood. And villains.

@denalichristianson sooo basically tears?

@calidris

@denalichristianson you know, I never realized it, but that’s another common feature in this castle –  literally just about everyone in here either fits into the category of assassin, warrior/soldier, or both lol

A bunch of walking war machines with childhood trauma.  Welcome to Character Castle 2.0

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@denalichristianson you know, I never realized it, but that’s another common feature in this castle –  literally just about everyone in here either fits into the category of assassin, warrior/soldier, or both lol

A bunch of walking war machines with childhood trauma.  Welcome to Character Castle 2.0 😀

@rose-colored-fancy I second this: Acyn is one of your best characters and there is nothing anyone can say to convince me otherwise!  He’s genuinely annoying but in the most oblivious, hilarious way and I love him for it lol

Also, Basil was isolated in a lab for all of his life.  Skia was stuck in a lab too but at least she had other subjects t…[Read more]

@inkhorn

I’M LAUGHING SOOOO HARD RIGHT NOW LOL

Also I love how Khalon is identifying everyone as “soldier, dangerous, soldier, soldier, don’t get on their bad side… Niarok.” XD Literally everyone in this castle is a walking war machine and then there’s Niarok, who’s also a walking war machine except that he refuses to make war soooo…

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KHALON

Khalon studied the people around him. Asses the situation. Okay so, dramatic girl was dangerous; don’t try to annoy her. Then there was that guy she was giggling at. He also looked dangerous. Maybe it was the mask or maybe it was that song he was singing, either way do not get on his bad side.

Khalon sighed. Two dangerous people in one r…[Read more]

Kallun nodded and slowed his paced to match Pia’s, gently taking hold of her hand.

(hahahahaha)