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Gracie replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years ago
@everyone
Re-write of the last thing. Sorry.
“Who are you?” A man’s voice asked.
Teagen almost lifted his hands above his head, as he had every other time when facing a gun. But he would have to drop his weapon. He wasn’t willing to do that. Then there was Libby…
He glanced to the girl’s face, and mouthed, ‘Run.’
Then the barrel faced her head, “Don’t move.”
Teagen straightened his chest. “I’m Teagen Jath, this, this is, well, that doesn’t matter.” Teagen shook his head, tempted to lift his poker and take another jab at the man, but even for him that would be foolish. “Who are you sir?” His tone was mocking. “Where are we? I doubt you own this place, why destroy your own wall? But, who do you think we are that you would destroy a perfectly good wall to get to us?” Teagen’s nose flared, He was doing this terribly wrong… He licked his lips. How to remedy this?
“If you just back off, we’ll leave you be.”












