Joelle Stone

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OH YEAH BEKAH’S STILL HERE TOO!!

I think @kylie-wingfeather and @jasmine are still here, but other than that, yeah.

OOH A CONFERENCE WOULD BE FUN!!!! Especially if we could do it over here so I don’t go broke trying to pay to get there XD

<p style=”text-align: left;”>@crazywriter,</p>
Sure thing! Heh, I do that SO MUCH XDDD

@denali-christianson,

SHE LIVES!!!! (No problem. ;))

@denali-christianson,

Have you fallen off the face of the planet or are you just taking a vacation to Mars?

@crazywriter,

*rubs hands* Ok, let’s get the rest of this puppy critiqued!!

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It was with baited breath that the council anticipated Abner’s decision. The young king stood, cleared his throat, and spoke.

“Lords of the Council, in response to the unexpected messenger, I have come to a decision.” Abner swallowed, mulling the weight of his f…[Read more]

Sure thing, Rose!! (Hehe, ’tis pretty accurate. :P)

Mm, good question, Rose! The only advice I can offer is to check out Abbie Emmons and Kingdom Pen and Story Embers and all their advice on mysteries. If you’re trying to plot, try reverse plotting (yes yes, I know you’ve heard me rant about it before XD) or going for a three-act story structure – or check out the SE resource library!! You never…[Read more]

Um, no I don’t think so. Here’s a link: https://sistersthree3.wixsite.com/writers-vision It’s a pretty small site, but worth the time. 🙂

@crazywriter,

Hehe, no problem!! If you want a more consistent group of critics, you should check out Writer’s Vision – it’s free, run by peeps I know, and is just a group of young writers helping each other out. 🙂

@crazywriter,

The war council was nothing as exciting or nerve-wracking as Abner had expected. Mostly, it was bureaucrats arguing about the levying of taxes, the raising of militia, none of which concerned Abner. Hm, you might want to draw this out a bit. With all the sweating beforehand, you had the perfect set-up for a healthy dose of…[Read more]

@crazywriter,

TWO SNOW DAYS?!?! Lucky. XD Most days the high over here has been in the 30 degree range, with no snow and freezing winds. #desertwinter XD

@crazywriter,

Nope, not dead, but still busy. XD I’m thinking I’m going to have to split up edits for your chapter again… *growls at Life*

@kylie-wingfeather,

*fistbump* Join the club! What’s Mock Trial?

Oof, sry I haven’t been active. #life XD

@denali-christianson

@crazywriter,

Ok, let’s get this ball rolling! I’m trying to do this in a Google Docs like format by striking through things I think should be removed and putting my suggestions in bold and comments in italics. Let me know if it didn’t make sense, and feel free to reject any and all suggestions. 😉

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The next day, Abner woke to find the mornin…[Read more]

@denali-christianson,

Alrighty, February is around the corner!! Would doing a trial period from Feb. 13-27th work for you? Also, here’s an email you can contact me by to talk this out in a more private setting. 😉 joellestoneauthor@gmail.com