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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago
Okay, the castle told them they have to wound one other person (doesn’t matter who) or face some kind of consequence. (you can pick)
Evie wounded Niarok, Niarok refused, Yila almost did but hasn’t (yet) Aydin wouldn’t but might, Quin did, Qatar wouldn’t and the castle killed him off. Klein and Rúan haven’t so far but…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago
Okay, put yourself in my position. It’s first thing in the morning. I’m catching up with the posts as I do every morning. There are a lot, and I somehow miss the first ten in my emails.
So, I missed @emily-waldorf ‘s first post. I only read the reactions and I can’t adequately describe the sheer chaos of trying to figure out who had died, who…[Read more]
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Denali Christianson replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago
Sorry for the dead silence after your post… I was um *coughs* mourning Qatar’s death. *cough cough*
Anyways, I will totally be praying about your situation and I hope it gets better. I can definitely understand the feelings of stress and pain and general misery… Please remember that we’re always here for…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago
The rumbling had, in fact, terrified Alessio. But he was very, very stubborn and he had “a plan”.
He’d done this before, or at least something like it. Devils, he was comparing the Castle more and more to the wizard. It was like, having it happen all over again. The same helplessness, same kind of control-freak and the same immortal dread. Only…[Read more] -
Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago
I’m so sorry! Will be praying. You take care of you and don’t worry about us. God is good, even when it doesn’t feel like it. Hope your life gets less stressful soon. <3 <3 Virtual hugs aren’t the same but it’s the best I can give. :'(
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Denali Christianson replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago
OOOOOH MY GOSH I WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT!!!!
Oh my…
I frankly have no clue how she’s going to respond…
I was eavesdropping, but as long as I wasn’t caught it was just listening without being noticed.
This nearly killed me. 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
Dahahaha, I forgot Locran. @denali-christianson you shouldn’t have trust…
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Kimmi replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago
“Alright,” Alessio said, and most looked his directions. “Most of you each come from different worlds with different powers or capabilities, one of the only constants is that you all have secrets.”
*Nithel has no clue what his ‘power’/’capability’ was*
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The Lord Castle, could feel the emotions of the young one rising. Flamed…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago
Nithel’s eyes shone just a little and he nodded to Alessio.
“I will do as you say.” He said. Alessio wasn’t sure how to respond to that. Shouldn’t it be the other way around? Alessio didn’t really count himself as a leader but everyone else seemed to…
“Um…right.” Arguing would waste valuable time…
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Kimmi replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago
Nithel smiled inside at Alessio’s laughter. Then when the laughter didn’t stop, Nithel’s eyes got a hesitant twinkle. He had made the youth laugh. (Albeit unintentionally.) *thoughts/sweet memories of home*
Nithel gave Alessio a small bow with his head. I’m glad you laughed.
Alessio coughed a few times, then after a moment, he answered.…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago
“Don’t give up now.” Alessio whispered, his voice husky.
Nithel cleared his throat silently, feeling the pressure of Alessio’s hand on his shoulder. Like a friend. Were they friends?
Nithel trembled inside. How he wanted his wife in his arms again. To weep with her. For her to caress him, and tell him that though things would change, she would…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago
“I have two daughters, a son, and the last time I saw my wife, we were expecting another.” Nithel said. Four children…how long had he been married? Alessio was trying to do the math because it was easier to process than his feelings. “My elder daughter is about your age.”
Mathematical gesticulations froze his mind.
Nithel said it like Alessio…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago
Oh, goodness, Liorah would pick up on the Lorcan/Yila chemistry so fast XD She’d probably look Yila dead in the eye and say “Honey… you can do better than that.” XD I keep coming up with all the wild things Liorah would do and it keeps getting better XD
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Kimmi replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago
Nithel could see the struggle in Alessio and was sorry. *wants to explain, very badly… if he could… *
Nithel then nods, and a smile touches his lips. A sadness filled his eyes as well. “I have two daughters, a son, and the last time I saw my wife, we were expecting another.” I have not met them yet. “My elder daughter is about your…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago
I agree with your less evil plan to instate the evil plan later. XD
It’s inevitable 😈
And oh my. I’ve never met Liorah, but she sounds… terrifying. It might be really interesting to see how Niarok reacts to her, though, so if you ever bring her in again… XD
LOL, the funny thing is that she isn’t actually terrifying XD She’s…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago
Okay people. Halt everything.
WE MADE IT TO 100 PAGES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHOOO HOOOOO
YAYYY!!! WE DID IT!!! I think that’s one of the first topics to hit 100 pages…
I know right??? I love him tooooooo I’m also loving his chemistry with Ayden. So amazing…
Their chemistry is awesome I love it!!
I’m this c…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago
Nithel can see the pain and rushing in Alessio’s eyes struggling. Staring at the strap around his neck. Abni, I do remember you. Not much, but- Images flash through the back of his mind. But mostly, he remembers the emotions he had when with the youth.
Alessio blurts out, his eyes begging likely more than he wished, “Do you remember where you g…[Read more]
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Denali Christianson replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago
YESSSS I WAS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Man I’ve been waiting for you to get back on SE so I could say hi! How have you been???
I think we might technically be at the limit, but I bet we can deal with some characters. I’ll tag the others so they can add their thoughts.
@rose-colored-fancy, @calidris, @irishcelticredflowercrown, @emily-wa…[Read more]
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Denali Christianson replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago
I love it too, I like how Niarok just kinda adopted Aydin for… no particular reason XD It’s really sweet.
YESSS!!!! I originally created Niarok to be kind of a distant character. But then he just got a mind of his own and he’s sooo sweet and I love him and agghhhhh!!!!! And he and Yila are such perfect opposites and I love the…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago
your idea is great! My mind is already on a helter skelter from all the possibilities that could ensue
Thanks! I love a bit of drama now and then XD LOL @this-is-not-an-alien do you remember when we did that dramatic sacrifice and almost-death scene with all the characters??? XD I destinctly remember almost crying XD…[Read more]
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calidris replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 6 months ago
Basil:
“I’m not sick anymore, but that’s not going away soon,” the man said sarcastically. “I’ll try not to inconvenience you in future.” Basil looked at him skeptically.
“So you’re not contagious?” He clicked his tongue. “I mean, it’s not just me you’re inconveniencing. When you cough all over the place like that you’re spraying your dise…[Read more]
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