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Fehrmaiden

  • Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years ago

    “It basically means hero. I’ve been told that it means sacrificer. Why are you guys so afraid of a spider and what is with the kids running around.”

    Nithel’s brows popped up on his forehead, and he glanced toward Leana just a moment, before looking back at Alixer.

    “I’m 16 btw.” Alixer went on. “Not a kid or adult. In fact, at 10 you’re conside…[Read more]

  • Ragnarok replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years ago

    “Uh, hi. I’m Alixer.” The dark-haired person with…circular glass balanced over his eyes said.

    “Uhh…” Alessio gaped up at the strange man.

    “We-You-“ Nithel stammered, tossing Ohel’s legs off of him as he sat up. With – probably a fairly tired sigh – he continued, awkwardly. “I am Nithel son of Father. And…what does your name mean? A substance…[Read more]

  • Sarafini replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years ago

    <p style=”text-align: left;”>@hannahrenner @this-is-not-an-alien, @ragnarok @kimlikesart</p>
    Alixer 

    “It basically means hero. I’ve been told that it means sacrificer. Why are you guys so afraid of a spider and what is with the kids running around. I’m 16 btw. Not a kid or adult. In fact, at 10 you’re considered independent in my country. But…[Read more]

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    I watch Grimme nearly puke as Alessio lets the spider. Crawl. On. His. Hand.

    What the Abyss is this kid made of?

    I hold out the jar.

    Except.

    He.

    Drops.

    It.

    “I’m sorry!” He backs into … ya’know what? That’s Nithel. And everybody here is getting a tiny trinket. This is rid…[Read more]

  • Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years ago

    “It’s alright…” Nithel attempted.

    “But he-!”

    “Get up!” Ohel yelled, leaving Alessio flushing with fury.

    “I don’t know if I can?”

    “You looked buff enough, back in the other place. Like you could carry my adult-self. So move.” He growled dangling on top of Nithel. (Alessio was kind’ve jealous, he kind’ve wanted a piggyback ride now…) But he w…[Read more]

  • Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years ago

    “Get off of him right now,” Alessio threatened, drawing himself to his full…four foot height? “and apologize to Nithel. Now.”

    Nithel chuckled nervously, still struggling not to fall off the couch. “It’s alright…” Not that I’d let my children talk to me this way…

    Ohel snorted, in reply to Alessio, glowering down at Nithel. “Get up!”

    “I d…[Read more]

  • Sarafini replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years ago

    Alec
    <p style=”text-align: left;”>I fell out of what seemed to be the sky but this was nothing like his world. There appeared to be no sun and what looked like a device of some kind. Was that… a phone? He cringed, Oh, great! I went back in time to the dark ages, eh (that’s what they call the 2000’s since it’s the 3000s where he live)? He…[Read more]

  • Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years ago

    Behold, it is our characters. 😌👌

  • Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years ago

    *sheepish grin* Absolutely! 💞 *hugss*

     

    Fair fair! 😅

    If you pick one you can drop them in whenever you want, or keep asking questions/reading until you’ve got a better overview of everything that’s going on! ❤️

  • Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years ago

    Nithel started when Alessio backed into him, causing Alessio to start too!

    And then someone howls with terror, and boy grasps at the short, thin sword-hilt at his side (As if he’d ever been in a real fight at this point! Of course, he had – in the future – but that…that was just weird and hurt his brain!) It’s just the spider, but Ohel was freak…[Read more]

  • Sarafini replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years ago

    @kimlikesart

    I may but there are too many and very underdeveloped rn. I would like to eventually. I just have to figure them out. Lol

  • Ragnarok replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years ago

    “What is it?” Another boy, who appeared to be around his age, blurted “What’s it eat? Can I hold it?”

    Looks were often deceiving though. He seemed to be a human.

    “It’s a wolf spider.” Sage answered, “And it eats other bugs, typically hunting things like crickets or ants. Do you want to hold it?”

    “No. And it doesn’t matter!” Another boy squ…[Read more]

  • Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years ago

    Hi @sarafini ! Your characters sound amazing!
    Will you be bringing all of them in? Or just a few?

    @this-is-not-an-alien Thanks for taking the time to send all those!

  • Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years ago

    Nathair only seemed angrier, at Leana’s words, and her shoulders slouched.

    “Stupid princess,” he murmured. And… it honestly hurt worse than her hand.

    You don’t… have to remain a snake… Leana pressed her eyes shut, and sucked in a long breath. But do you want to? Really? She’d never considered there were those… who truly wanted to be…[Read more]

  • Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years ago

    “Don’t…princesses have to be rich?” Tiny Leana asked, cradling her hand, and babbled onward. “I’ve never met one. Have you? Our country doesn’t have them or kings. Just ‘ambassadors’. And they change. One stopped by our house, from our city, once! His horse had hurt itself, and he stayed with us for a week, while Mama and Papa helped it.”

    Nath…[Read more]

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    “He didn’t do anything!” the child chases after Oscar. “Uh, he, uhhh…” “

    Does he think Oscar is going to hurt Burn? I mean. No but … no. Oscar would never…

    “Oh! We got lost and Burn’s going to help us …until we…get back home…”

    Would he?

    I chew my lip and …

    Wait.

    Why are there so many children?

    “It’s a pleasure to me…[Read more]

  • Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years ago

    So those are the characters. Right now they’re in @hannahrenner‘s world and half of them have been turned into children, and they’ve found a regenerative spider in a huge fancy home of Burn’s adopted dad Oscar. (You’ll probably have the gist of everything if you read the last page or two on the Character Castle 2.5)

    The characters that are still…[Read more]

  • Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years ago

  • Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years ago

    Aaaaaand my characters:

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