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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 7 months ago
Leana watches as they disapear behind a door. Not sure what to do. She sort of wants to disappear. Go out into the apparent night, and start walking back home. But without any directions… it seemed unlikely she’d get there.
And Alessio had said he knew her father. Had acted like Dad was nearby.
She leaned against the wall, across from the…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 7 months ago
“I am unaware of how Alessio was handcuffed to me. I don’t enjoy it any more than he does.” Sir Scary said in a low, tense voice. He did not like talking to strangers, duly noted. Of course, Alessio had yet to find something Sir Scary did like but that’s just detail. “Arsene arranged a hotel room and neither of us are going to get a better op…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 7 months ago
Leana’s eyes softened, ire lessening just as quickly as it had sprung. “I’m sure there’s a way to get them off.” She glances from Alessio, to the other man again. I assume you both want them off. Frankly, the man in all the armour looked like he might know a way… “What is your name?” Leana slid to the side a bit. Wary… but willing to listen. Wh…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 7 months ago
Heheh, nor his daughter😅✌️“Wait!” Leana cried after them. “Sir. Stop it!”
Alessio first thought was literally had he done something, but he realized she was staring at Sir Scary, her eyes flashing with indignation. Oh. No wait this actually was a very suspicious set of circumstances with no good explanation available…
“Sir, who are you? Why…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 7 months ago
Cathy- You’d be right about Nithel not approving. 😄——–
The man bound to Alessio put his face in his hand, muttering, “Idiot.”
Leana’s brows lowered, eyes narrowing at that. Frankly, she didn’t know why he’d called him that. And… frankly, she didn’t much care. *many thoughts, both frustrated at NoName, and wondering pity*
But then Ale…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 7 months ago
Beside him, his would-be assassin gave a slow, suffocating-martyr sigh, and facepalmed. “Idiot.”
Alessio paused and cocked his head at Sir Scary with his biggest, most innocent wide puppy eyes.
“You have eminently superior intelligence and cleverness, I bow before your observational skills. It took you one short day to determine I’m an idiot,…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 7 months ago
“Well, if he brings the river in on us, I’m gonna kill him before the water does.” Blind Guy snaps. Good to know he’s recovered enough to yell at everybody, that was a relief. “I’ve got a genus loci to punish and I ain’t dying cause someone’s gone dig happy.”
“Dying would also be bad for group morale, so kindly refrain from it.” Nathair added…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 7 months ago
“Thank you. I…That’s…kind of you.” Leana said looking baffled and glancing at everyone crowding around her. Honestly felt like the Disney Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs but Alessio would have to break the Fourth Wall to make that observation 😉
They certainly made the most outlandish group you could think of, now that Alessio was thinking…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 7 months ago
Leana’s eyes widen when the man playfully shoves some sort of parcel into her hands. It crinkles strangely, a sound she’s never heard before… Like the crunching of locust shells? But… mixed with the song of a living locust? And it felt smooth… few things were this smooth. Maybe the flat of blades, but even that was a different smooth.
“I h…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 7 months ago
Alessio peeked up again when Arsene tumbled in carrying a strange bag.
What did you just steal?
With an unusually kind smile, he handed the bag to Leana. Alessio stared at it inquisitively. And then blinked because he wasn’t as suspicious of the contents as he should be. What just happened, why isn’t he more wary of Arsene, he’s wary of every…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 7 months ago
Blind Guy fell over in the middle of them escaping. Further he yelped like a frightened puppy.
Nathair sighed.
“Now you’re scaring the kids.” He murmured to no one in particular and went over to the Blind Guy. “Not planning on wandering off again, are you?”
Nathair crouched beside him, evaluating. No good them getting separated again he wasn’t…[Read more]
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Rusted Knight replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 7 months ago
Drip.
Drip.
Caleb listened to the rhythmic water. It helped calm him. What he had done before was stupid and cowardly. He should help others who were in the same trouble as him. He couldn’t cower at every issue he encountered. But what could he do now.
Drip.
Drip.
Drip.
Water. Caleb still had his canteen. He had his axe and revolver. He had…[Read more]
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calidris replied to the topic Share Your Newsletter here!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 7 months ago
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 7 months ago
*Whoops! I posted before refreshing the page and I missed your post @ethan-leonard 😅✌️
”How can I help?” The Armor Guy had asked. Alessio eyed him suspiciously, but he didn’t do anything bad so…
Maybe Alessio could help…
Just back off you’re making her uncomfortable!
He bit his lip, suppressing the urge to bite his knuckles. But everything…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 7 months ago
“Excuse me,” he said, “Sorry for listening in on all that’s going on, but your father it sounds like needs help?”
Are you offering? I assume he does. Our whole country does. Leana nods slowly, despising the tears that roll down her cheeks. But also glad she’s able to cry.
”How can I help?” His voice was so kind. The corners of his eyes crinkled…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 7 months ago
“Don’t mention it,” Miles said “But that is a good question. The answer? Because, it’s just who I am. If I see someone in danger, I will help them, no matter what. It’s just who I am.”
Sounds like a fatal flaw.
“Now for that…thing. How do we kill that? And what can we even kill it with? I only have my sword, shield, and several knifes. What abou…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 7 months ago
“He’s alive,” The man stammered, “We were both lost…wherever here is…”
Alive. Leana closed her eyes and her whole body sagged in relief. He’s alive… My father’s alive!
“I don’t know where he is now. But I’m looking for him too–“
She smiled back at him, eyes sparkling. That is still more than she’d heard for a year. Nithel was alive. Or at…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 7 months ago
The other guy whipped around toward him, brandishing a hilt. A hilt with no blade. I’m so intimidated. Alessio thought blankly, his hand instinctively sliding to his knife. But the Armer Guy seemed to rethink and removed his helmet.
He did look a little less intimidating when they could see his face. A little less.
But Alessio was busy staring a…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 7 months ago
@ethan-leonard
(Ooh. Cool! Thanks.)Leana jumped again when Con jerked something from his belt, but… it just looked like the pummel of a sword. It could be dangerous. But when swords were a mite scarce…
Con’s lensed gaze seemed to be surveying Leana and the small clump of others. She felt miniscule, but noticed.
He removed his helmet, then…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 7 months ago
Before Nathair could think, the other one burst in – that king fellow, yanking him to his feet very heroically. They made a mad dash for the tunnels and somehow made it out alive. Miles instantly set to bandaging the Blind Guy – yeesh were they ever going to get his name?
“Thanks for that,” Nathair said, breathlessly after the run, and eyed th…[Read more]
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