Ethan Leonard

<p style=”text-align: left;”>@calidris</p>
the action of firing a revolver is actually pretty simple. Take a fully loaded revolver, aim it at the target, and pull the trigger. Don’t pull the hammer back afterwards, or you’ll have skipped a round. Just pull the trigger again.

(stops self from writing 500k word essay about revolvers)

😂I bet. You can see why I’m trying to develop his character so that he is not just boom town everyday

@jared-williams

You did a good job, but two things (1), he doesn’t really control the elements, it’s more that he uses witchcraft, and (2) he doesn’t take his helmet off. Uses it for intimidation purposes. Also his powers…he is so strong th…[Read more]

@this-is-not-an-alien

bwahahaha new victim 😂😂😂  I love it

Hhrrrrrmmmm…I’ll pick him up and drop him into group 2. Unannounced. No warning. See how they react to a king wearing maybe 250lbs of armor suddenly dropping into their midst.

@jared-williams

Saevus stared at the wolf-thing which had just sprayed him with ice. Roaring out “I will make you my pet, beast!” He charged forward, swinging his sword. Abirami jumped out of the way, and Saevus’ sword swooshed over head and blasted into the wall, creating a huge explosion of rock and dust. One wave of his hand, and dust clear…[Read more]

And then I realize that Abirami is a wolf, not a human at the moment…

@jared-williams

@calidris

Lol YES Totally within character, though maybe something more like “I shall make you my slave forever, scum!”

Saevus stared down at the fool who had dared start an argument with him. “I will make you my slave forever, scum!” He roared. He charged past Kit and swung his sword at Abirami. He dodged, and the sword s…[Read more]

@jared-williams

Yeah…I know…I’m wondering if I can get it to the point where Saevus learns that the castle basically has its own powers, and he’ll end up challenging the castle itself lol

@calidris

Saevus looked at this youngster long and hard. The fact that he looked back and didn’t look down because he couldn’t take anymore was shockin…[Read more]

Alrighty thanks!

King Miles Regulus:

Looks: Tall, young adult, robust, dark-blond hair, blue eyes, a rough beard growing on his chin, and a very noble look.

Character: Noble hearted, brave, loves a laugh, defensive of others (like, will give his life to save someone he just met), and deeply cares about his friends and family.

will post…[Read more]

@calidris

Thanks! Yes, I did kinda base Saevus loosely off of Sauron from lotr. Yes I have seen those movie I love them lol. Also note Saevus is Latin for cruel.

Saevus entered the room, brushing past a young man. “Hey, watch it mister!” he called out.

Saevus stopped and turned to him. Looking down at him he scrutinized the young ups…[Read more]

I’ll start. I’ll set the stage, and then you bring in Kit. And we’ll see what happens.

Saevus proceeded down the hall. The hallway was long and narrow, with torches mounted at regular intervals on the walls. With every step Saevus took, his plate and mail armor jingled and echoed off of the walls, announcing the newcomer long before anyon…[Read more]

@calidris

Sure why not? Let Saevus’ first action to not be trying to dominate the castle lol. Yes, he is from a fantasy novel, ‘dark lord’ kinda type guy, but as for the WIP I don’t even have a name for it yet but its about this guy named Miles Regulus who is trying to take back the throne that Saevus stole from him years ago.

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Howdy yall!

Im new here, but would it be ok if I dropped a character of mine in here? I’ve been wanting to kinda develop him more for my WIP.

<p style=”text-align: left;”>Alright thanks, I’ll check it out</p>