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Ethan Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 9 months ago
I’ll start. I’ll set the stage, and then you bring in Kit. And we’ll see what happens.
Saevus proceeded down the hall. The hallway was long and narrow, with torches mounted at regular intervals on the walls. With every step Saevus took, his plate and mail armor jingled and echoed off of the walls, announcing the newcomer long before anyone could see the source.
As he walked, he kept his eyes peeled for anyone hiding in this hall. No one appeared though, even when he reached the end of the hall.
Here, the hall ended in a door. A big double door with gold doorknobs, intricate carvings, and even steel plated with silver and set with gems for the hinges. Saevus examined the beautiful doors. The top of the door stood about level with his eyes.
Stepping back, Saevus swung his sword and blasted it through the doors. A shower of splinters and flames erupted. A second blow, and the door way was clear. He stepped through, standing up to his full height as he entered whatever lay behind.
And now you would bring in Kit










