Esmeralda Gramilton

That’s a good idea. Any volunteers?

If not, we could create an OC or I can introduce one of the adults from my story just for the purpose of getting captured (i wish that were the first time I’d done that ;))

Also, I have to leave in five minutes

@kari-karast, It’s good!

I’m working on my other story right now, but I do have an idea for how my Part 5 if someone wouldn’t mind getting the meeting started. . . ?

Everyone did wonderfully on their chapters, as usual. I’m absolutely loving every character, especially (no offense to everyone else’s characters) Pasha, Kenma, and Rhioe.

Yay!!!

Somehow, this is all helping roll itself right into my parts, and filling what otherwise would’ve been gaps. Exceelent teamwork, everyone!

🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

okay, I want to mention the facts that have recently become true due to character and story development:

a) More of them have last names now

b) they have more 3-D personalities

c) there’s even more of them, including:

Wesley Kossa (but call him Wes or he will kill you and it will not be my fault because I warned you)

Callia…[Read more]

I love writing cliffhangers, too!

But. . . I don’t know if mine are cliche. Also, how do you insert an ‘e’ with a mark over it? I haven’t figured it out yet.

@mayacat, I’m sorry, but honestly, your cliffhangers tend to be very short cliffs. No offense. But otherwise, your writing is great!

Um. . . how do you make a cliffhanger non-cliche? The…[Read more]

I wish I had Pinterest or something. The best I have is some photos of my backyard.

This was the sky around 7:00 this morning. idk if it’s any good

Sandrye followed Amin down the cold streets of the city. Fall was ending quickly now, and even more people would need help from the government to get things like food. The city was that poor.

He hadn’t meant to share his dreams with anyone, but he had to know if the government had found the real Knot House, and more importantly, if they’d fou…[Read more]

Okay, Part 4 is DONE! 🙂

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer That chocolate was the best. Thank you. Hopefully I never run out. And nice job with your Cade chapter, btw.

@mayacat Nice job!

@naiya-dyani Ha, I was reading through this again and realized you asked me a question on page 1! Sorry!

Yes, those are the main character good guys in my one story (which doesn’t have a good name yet).

I’d do the bad guys, but they’re the bad guys, so they’ve done a lot of crimes without getting caught yet. Also, not all of them are true bad…[Read more]

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer

THAT WAS SOOOOOOOOO GOOD. Really excellent job with that part. It made me sad. But it really helps move the story along and help everyone realize just how bad things were in so many places.

*starts crying silently, munching on Hyri’s chocolate stash*

Nice job, everyone!

Note to self: Figure out if I know who the Writing Gremlin is.

Note to self: Whether you think you do or not, figure it out

Note to Amin: Get into the closet now ~Esmeralda

*crying even HARDER*

AWWWWWWWW!!! @urwen-starial that was beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I’d say ‘aye’ to a poetry thread, but I don’t know if we’ll have a ton of poetry, and I don’t want to make too many threads, because other people are using the forum threads too, so I don’t know. If it’s necessary, sure.

*still crying, even though it’s been a while*

THAT WAS SO GOOD, @emberynus-the-dragonslayer and @urwen-starial!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*tries to dry tears*

Hyri: *hands me a piece of chocolate*

Lyndira: *gives me a fuzzy blanket to cry into*

Kayti: *hugs me*

Me: *sniffles* Guys, please don’t worry about me. It will make me sad when I hurt you in my…[Read more]

Hello, Writing Gremlin! It’s really awesome to meet you!

Does Banana Peacock Warrior know you use her computer? Because I don’t want to tag her and let her know you’re using it if you’re not allowed, because she might feel the need to take security measures.

All of my characters say hello (if they’re not dead, of course :(, in which case I don’t…[Read more]

Amin stood in one of the empty offices, getting ready for the mission to the Knot House. His -well, for lack of a better word- commander, Rin, had basically run into the rooms calling out to gather people, explaining that they had a lead to the rebels and would be going to a place called the Knot House at midnight.

So everyone was sort of in a…[Read more]

DONE WITH PART 3!!!!!!!!!! EXCEPT THAT I HAVEN’T REVISED IT!!!!!!

I’m just gonna post it though, so I can work on. . . *lowers voice so Amin won’t hear* the dramatic part.

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer and @urwen-starial

Wow, five super-awesome productive pages! Nice job!

*banging head on keyboard* I’m. Still. Stuck. On. Part. Three.

Care to help me, Amin?

Amin: Well, you’re the one who sent me to this world. And set up a bunch of misery for me. I thought you said when i met Sandrye he’d-

Me: Okay, that’s enough…[Read more]

Everyone here is so awesome! Thanks you so much for listening to my ideas (even if they don’t work) and being patient with me! <3

I’m really trying my best, and you guys are all being really great, and everyone’s so creative and your characters are as awesome as you are.

I’ll do my best to keep working and contributing, and I hope this keeps…[Read more]