-
Esmeralda Gramilton replied to the topic Unrealistic Character? in the forum Characters 6 years, 4 months ago
It’s really good, actually. I would suggest making Purtick at least pretend to be a little hesitant, so that he’s not quite so friendly right away, but it’s really good!
I love gremlins now. Except that they don’t like dragons, because I do. No offense meant.
-
Esmeralda Gramilton replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 6 years, 4 months ago
I would love some help! 🙂
(one of) the problem(s) is(are) that I need it to happen probably in the morning, after the meeting and all, and I didn’t want to skip ahead with the story too much because I could miss something important.
And I’m also just having trouble. I’ve never written from Callia’s POV before.
-
Esmeralda Gramilton replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 6 years, 4 months ago
I’m sorry everyone for my lack of contribution right now. I’ve been having a bit of trouble with Callia. I did get some art done, though! I’ll try to post it on our art thread in a bit.
-
Esmeralda Gramilton replied to the topic Character Story Art Thread in the forum Characters 6 years, 4 months ago
@kayla-skywriter Maybe the important stuff in the center of the city? (government building, radio tower, etc.)
-
Esmeralda Gramilton replied to the topic Character Story Art Thread in the forum Characters 6 years, 4 months ago
Um. . . good question. The knot house was by the Widow’s Window to the right of the library and everything, but I don’t know which section that was located in.
I’m not the best at mapping (though I love to draw maps, @urwen-starial fills them in), so I don’t know.
-
Esmeralda Gramilton replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 6 years, 4 months ago
But they would probably want to do something
-
Esmeralda Gramilton replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 6 years, 4 months ago
@kayla-skywriter, one or four or both, I think. Though I’m not sure about the Rooks killing everyone who’s trying to make a change. That would get messy.
-
Esmeralda Gramilton replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 6 years, 4 months ago
I only kill book characters. And you can add as many people as you can keep track of (though I’m limiting myself to five). So go ahead!
@kayla-skywriter Those are great ideas!
@emberynus (not gonna tag you again), My next part if going to be Callia’s I think. Since she’s a reporter for the Quill and we can start…[Read more]
-
Esmeralda Gramilton replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 6 years, 4 months ago
Nice, everyone!
-
Esmeralda Gramilton replied to the topic Character Story Art Thread in the forum Characters 6 years, 4 months ago
-
Esmeralda Gramilton replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 6 years, 4 months ago
Go ahead! 🙂
-
Esmeralda Gramilton replied to the topic Character Story Art Thread in the forum Characters 6 years, 4 months ago
Okay, i accidently posted this on the other thread, but here we go:
Maybe a quill in front of an inkwell to represent their writings, with a shadow of a bird to represent the stories they’re finding in the city (about the rebels and the government and all being birds), and then a rising sun to represent the dawn of a better city?
I don’t know.
-
Esmeralda Gramilton replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 6 years, 4 months ago
A quill? To sort of keep up the bird theme.
Maybe a quill in front of an inkwell to represent their writings, with a shadow of a bird to represent the stories they’re finding in the city (about the rebels and the government and all being birds), and then a sun to represent the dawn of a better city?
I don’t know.
-
Esmeralda Gramilton replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 6 years, 4 months ago
@urwen-starial Yes, I agree about the boundaries. But it will also be weird to have so many birds and not do a hummingbird or a cardinal or something, so we’ve kind set ourselves up. Open to ideas.
@emberynus-the-dragonslayer Hence the name ‘Gramilton’ in my name XD
-
Esmeralda Gramilton replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 6 years, 4 months ago
Great! I’ll get started on that, too, then.
btw I know that sentence looks weird but it’s grammatically correct
-
Esmeralda Gramilton replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 6 years, 4 months ago
No, the newspaper should be run by its own people. Oh, my character Callia is very curious and would really enjoy working there, if you all would be okay with that!
-
Esmeralda Gramilton replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 6 years, 4 months ago
I don’t think the amount I have in this story is a lot, it’s actually only about a tenth of my main/main side characters, maybe less.
But I do have to admit, five is enough here.
-
Esmeralda Gramilton replied to the topic Character Story Photography Thread in the forum Characters 6 years, 4 months ago
-
Esmeralda Gramilton replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 6 years, 4 months ago
I can’t add any more characters without the dream-thing getting way too weird.
And I’m not the best at naming organizations. (if you read my story you’ll notice this).
So I’m no help right now. Sorry.
I’ll keep working, though, and see if I can come up with anything.
-
Esmeralda Gramilton replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 6 years, 4 months ago
None of the characters I’ve introduced or plan to introduce would be good leaders. Of course, there are leaders in my story (like Mindysa Haru, love that girl), but definitely not Wes, Sandrye, Callia, or Amin, and definitely not Saydra.
So you guys figure that out.
I do think that Cade should be captured at some point, but not so early in, in…[Read more]
- Load More












