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Emberynus The Dragonslayer

  • @lady-grace

    Hello! Nice to meet you! Is Yarrow new to the castle?

  • I have made my account work!
    Yes, I would love to do the fashion show with Yarrow. Or more, I’m going to have a… Fun time writing it and Yarrow is going to be thrilled XD

    Also, @abrielle hello, and welcome to the castle!

  • @abrielle

    Ooh, so maybe greatest fears are up next?

    @lady-grace @calidris

    I know you two wanted to do the fashion show, right? Though I think Grace’s account wasn’t working.

  • Rhianna

    The stairway felt interminably long, but Rhianna was determined not to stop. Being a Loki meant that she did not tire quickly. Still, her legs had begun to ache by the time she reached a landing and a door. Heart pounding with anticipation, Rhianna flung open the door and found herself blinking in bright sunlight. As her vision adjusted,…[Read more]

  • @miajoy88

    Hi! I’m Lydia, I’m currently seventeen. Do you have a current project? At the moment, I’m torn between a couple things; a sci-fi and a fantasy, both somewhere in the YA/children’s area. What’s your favorite part about writing? For me, I really love my characters. It’s so much fun playing around with them, watching how they interact, and…[Read more]

  • Abrielle started the topic Short story in the forum Sci-fi Writers 2 years, 9 months ago

    Hi guys! I recently finished a short story (though it is technically a little long for a ‘short story’). I was wondering, would anybody be willing to give me feedback on it? If your willing to read it but don’t have time for in-depth criticism, my big question is, is it worth turning into a full length novel?

    Well, here goes.

     

    Crow

    The…[Read more]

  • Hi guys! I recently finished a short story (though it is technically a little long for a ‘short story’). I was wondering, would anybody be willing to give me feedback on it? If your willing to read it but don’t have time for in-depth criticism, my big question is, is it worth turning into a full length novel?

    Well, here goes.

     

    Crow

    The…[Read more]

  • Also, sorry. I noticed we had a theme going for the fashion show and I totally ruined it. Apologies.

  • @Inkhorn

    No problem! I just got back from a summer camp, so I’ve not had a whole lot of time either. What all are you up to this summer?

    Also, Rhianna’s speech was great. It was spot on.

    @e-n-leonard

    Mara seems like fun. She and Rhianna should get along great (rather, they won’t, but it’ll be great anyways🙃).

     

    Denari
    “I don’t think the…[Read more]

  • RAE posted an update in the group Poets 2 years, 10 months ago

    Wild Mustang

    A grazing stallion.
    A breeze comes sweeping down from the mountain,
    Wading through the grass.
    “Be free! Beyond there are grasses and brooks.
    Be free!
    Let your hooves pound in the open meadows and let your shadow mingle with that of the tree,
    Beyond there is freedom. Be free…”
    It whispers over and over in his ears.
    A swe…[Read more]

  • I use Startpage.com for research just because it’s private.

     

    One note: when working with fantasy or sci-fi you can speed up the healing process via herbs like athelas in Lord of the Rings or via tech. You also have liberty to make up diceases like the Black Breath also from Lord of the Rings (though it’s more of an effect like stress which has…[Read more]

  • RAE posted an update in the group Sci-fi Writers 2 years, 10 months ago

    So I’ve got a problem, I like to plan out stories like crazy and many of them I will never write down but will just be added to my mind’s archives. One of theses stories will be the death of Grathmere, my hidden Antag for Guardian Angels and the following 3 books (What can I say? I wanted a complete story). The problem is, after he is defeated by…[Read more]

    • Hi RAE! I have returned. I shall now proceed to pepper you with suggestions good, bad, and downright awesome. (Teasing. I promise I don’t actually talk like this in real life.)
      Anyways, about Grathmere. There’s always the standard ‘badguy turns good, saves goodguy, and dies’ trope. However, I’m not sure that this trope would really make much of a…[Read more]

      • Grathmere is a hard character to read. He’s a Wondian Nameless Thing making a little harder for me to put on my Character Cloak. He has never tried to kill Leahae, and she didn’t even know he was such a monster until he was defeated for a while my Alpha and the other Assassin Clones. He has almost killed Alpha more than once, on purpose, but I…[Read more]

    • My mom thinks a prophet should show up at the final duel and preach forgiveness. Or all three should die.
      Anyways… So, did Grathmere accidently give Alpha the disease or was that on purpose? I get that Leahae is a sweet person and all, but if her brother kills Grathmere when she was just beginning to get to know him, it would probably cause…[Read more]

      • It’s a tough one. I like the prophet idea but getting one…hard. I also can’t see Alpha breaking down and crying, neither can I see Grathmere. All three…that would spiral into chaos for a Realn clan and a entire kingdom Leahae rules.

        On purpose. It does not last forever but when he’s under the effects, he’s helpless. It can. Last hours or…[Read more]

      • Alpha doesn’t really have to break down and cry. Neither does Grathmere. They just both need to decide that it’s not a good idea to kill each other right now. That doesn’t mean the relationship is going to be completely healed on the spot, but it can at least open the way for it to begin.
        Yeah, that last idea works. But if you don’t like it . . .…[Read more]

  • I haven’t done this sort of thing myself, but I know @calidris has done some stuff with a twenties style setting. Calidris, what sort of resources have you used?

  • @inkhorn @abrielle

    My character has been raring to go for this XD

    Mara

    Where are all these new people coming from? This place is so confusing. I’m honestly glad Frey got pulled away because he made that even worse.

    Then one of the new ones starts shouting about revolution, and I can’t help but giggle at her. Apparently the Nightingales are…[Read more]

  • @abrielle

    I apologize for not writing a post earlier. This summer is a bit more hectic than usual. 😅

    CONROY

    “Aha! The army has arrived!” screeched Rhianna with such force that Conroy nearly tumbled off the stage. He yelped, flailing his arms in attempt to regain his balance. He grasped the thick red curtains, pulling them around him to recreate…[Read more]

  • RAE posted an update in the group Sci-fi Writers 2 years, 10 months ago

    13th Birthday Sabotage
    RAE

    Nahim Nayhelm was today twenty-one. The Laxorian landscape of tall grasslands was filled with armored Realn as they prepared for the ensuing battle on the old ruin grounds of the city of Laxan. As Nahim’s hands glided through the checks of his weapons, he thought back through all the birthdays he had had o…[Read more]

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