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calidris replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 4 months ago
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 4 months ago
Ophelia
Jade shot me something that appeared to be on the verge of a frown but caught herself.
“Have you done much with partners before?”
I shook my head, then changed my mind and nodded. I hadn’t done much but I had done something, and I supposed that’s what she was asking.
“I’ve been practicing a pas de deux recently,” I said, “But Malco…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 4 months ago
Nice drawings of Cal! The hair is really cool.
Thank you! 😀
that second picture is Cal to perfection! Her facial expression is just *chef’s kiss*
Thank you! It really captured her attitude XD
I think I can get us out of this one. When the dance is over I have an idea for a challenge, though. Everybody gets into a s…
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 4 months ago
Ophelia
“So, Ophelia, what do you think this dance should be? I think…I’d like it to be a dance of birds. Imitating them, ya know?” Jade said, gesturing with her arms as though they were wings.
I continued with my improvised barre warm-ups but nodded.
I forced my smile back.
“That sounds nice! The ballet we’re w…[Read more]
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 4 months ago
Abirami’s turn… (cheesy grin with slanted eyes)
Abirami
The door, if you could call it that anymore, was all but shredded as I pushed it open and entered the room that had previously been infested with Ku’s hive.
I marveled at the destruction that mere bugs could do. Just a few months ago, Ku’s hive had successfully committed what amounted to…[Read more]
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 4 months ago
Warning… some of this is me rambling, so skim over if you want… =)
This is SO AWESOME! lol. Funny how it’s possible to geek out over a character castle. hehe.
This seems like an incredible and wonderful dynamic! Lots of great character development potential there! Just reading that small bit, I want to know what…[Read more]
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Inkhorn replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 4 months ago
ENYDD
Where was everyone getting all their energy? I was exhausted. Finished. Worn out. On the verge of collapsing. And collapse I did. Well, sank to my knees if I want to be more accurate.
I hugged my legs to my chest in an effort to stop my shaking. How was everyone else so calm? You would think that being chased by infuriated, over-protective…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 4 months ago
Ophelia
Before Jade could reply, a man came up to us. He was the one who had just disappeared and come back with the green-skinned girl. Wasn’t that his sister?
“Excuse me,” he said with a quick bow, two fingers to my chest. People here were odd, but I did my best to follow suit by doing a quick reverence.
“I apologize, but I couldn’t help bu…[Read more]
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 4 months ago
hahahah! Awesome that you said that, cause I was thinking if Ehud is good with her green skin and isn’t put off by her bugs, Ku might just ask him to marry her. lol. joking only slightly there.
hahaha! I laughed so hard at Ehud’s reactions! I really like him!
Abirami
Ku’s hand clung to my arm with stars in her eyes. If I didn’t know…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 4 months ago
I’m not certain if that’s how Ophelia would react, so just let me know how I did. Change whatever you like 🙂
You did great! That’s really close for her! She’s definitely the ‘forgive and forget’ type person. Rather a bit too much… XD
I love how you portrayed her! It made me happy to read that she’s coming across as I want her to!…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 4 months ago
Enydd is being ridiculously stubborn with me, revealing she has a different side to her but refusing to show it to me. Because of her refusal to cooperate, her narrative may seem out of character at times.
LOLL, don’t you love when they get like that XD Well, it’s usually a sign of development!
That bit you wrote for…[Read more]
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Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 4 months ago
Alaric
“And just who do you think you are?” Jade said, hands on her hips. “Maybe you could learn to hold your own tongue, but I think your position is irrecoverable. Get yourself out of the glass if you can, princeling. I think you’ll find that your authority is nothing in this place.”
She spun on her heel and stalked off, leaving Alaric standin…[Read more]
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Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 4 months ago
Alaric
Back and forth, back and forth, over the same stones he always paced over. “…in the third year of his reign, the Southern Duchies produced a total of $17,000 quids, the largest recorded gross income to date.”
The light was getting bad. He squinted at the page. The servants would be in soon to light the chandeliers.
“In the same year,…[Read more]
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Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 4 months ago
Avin
The man looked away, and Avin relaxed. Rosemary and Jade were talking at him, and Avin was left to himself. Out of the corner of his eye he saw a sudden movement, and heard a sound a moment later. A sound like someone was humming a long distance away. Sight and sound met as a young woman ran against Lorcan and fell backwards, surprise…[Read more]
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Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 4 months ago
*waves back*
Uhhh…
@e-n-leonard just joined, with her characters Rosemary and Jade. Rosemary is a mad scientist who is pretty friendly, and Jade is a cynical ballerina
@rose-colored-fancy pulled Mejt and Co. and has put in Ophelia and Calliope (Cal for short. Ophelia is bubbly and energetic and Cal is cynical, but actually…[Read more]
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Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 4 months ago
Even if she does, the more we push Avin’s buttons the funner it will be. 🙂
Briggs-Meyer can be SO helpful. Sometimes not, but I really like to just see what they say and if it lines up with what I’m thinking about that character.
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Neasa replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 4 months ago
Oh believe me. My co-workers already think I‘m an oddball. Imagine having to explain to them that there’s a fictional assassin kicking my brain about while I‘m trying to work! AGH!
Agreed! We shall see what kind of a reluctant team those two will male heehee 😉
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 4 months ago
Whewww it’s going fast now!! I better drop in my girls before anything else happens. I’ll try to do it this afternoon! XD
Lovely to see Lorcan hasn’t changed a bit XD
YES! He just has that THING you know! That thing! That thing guys, you know what I mean!
Yeah? You know!
*awkward silence. crickets chirp*
YES he does…[Read more]
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Neasa replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 4 months ago
Eeee loved how you made Lorcan introduce himself! So sarcastic and emotionally detached – so accurate!
Oh you are so right this will be FUNNN! I’m so hyper just thinking about this heehee
AAAGH what the heck how is your chapter so goood! You described Lorcan perfectly! EEK! I could barely contain myself while r…[Read more]
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Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 4 months ago
@e-n-leonard you catch on fast. That was a great post! Jade Nightengale is a beautiful name–also, she is going to be fabulous in here. 🙂
@irishcelticredflowercrown Isn’t it funny how any time Lorcan comes close the whole room suddenly focuses it’s attention on him?
@anyone
Don’t remember if I mentioned that Avin has a few trigger subjects:…[Read more]
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