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  • Neasa replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago

    @e-n-leonard

    Eeee loved how you made Lorcan introduce himself! So sarcastic and emotionally detached – so accurate!

    @emily-waldorf

    Oh you are so right this will be FUNNN! I’m so hyper just thinking about this heehee

    AAAGH what the heck how is your chapter so goood! You described Lorcan perfectly! EEK! I could barely contain myself while reading it XD. Its just so him!! Thank you for that Emily😆

    But Avin only noticed the eyes. They held something else than a light like stars; behind them was the curtain Avin had used since he was a boy, a veil to spread over the pain, to keep people from hurting him again. The iron wall, impenetrable. Avin’s fists clenched involuntarily.

    THIS DESCRIPTION🤩😱 *chefs kiss*

     

    Isn’t it funny how any time Lorcan comes close the whole room suddenly focuses it’s attention on him?

    YES! He just has that THING you know! That thing! That thing guys, you know what I mean!

    Yeah? You know!

    *awkward silence. crickets chirp*

    Lorcan: *clears his throat* I think what Neasa here is <i>trying</i> to say is that I am irresistible because I am handsome and mysterious. And totally unstoppable.

    Me: *glares at him* You’re getting far too big for your boots you big bozo, you know that?

    Lorcan: *smiles* And what are <i>you</i> going to do about it? I ‘command attention’ remember? People love me on first sight. What are you going to do get rid of me?

    Me: I might just do that if you don’t lose some of that attitude!

    Lorcan: *smirks at me knowingly* you do realise I will be the fan favourite? I am going to be the sole reason people will care about your stories.

    Me: …… thats not true!

    Lorcan: Oh really? Then get rid of me. Chuck me in the bin.

    Me: ……. *<i>clears throat in an attempt to his my embarrassment</i>* Whatever! Just – shut up. Go back to – commanding attention.

    Lorcan: Oh believe me. <i>I will</i>.

    Me: *mutters under breath* This isn’t over you little <i>punk.</i>

     

     

     

     

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