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k now i read the full story .

now i understand everything . good work .

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but my concerns are on the first page of the story , every thing else is great . need to work more on that establishing story , cause i didnt know she was running away from her planet and i thought she was in Srepsev and she was from earth not an alien…[Read more]

I said less emotion not no emotion and I was talking about writing style and not the story itself .and yes sci-fi has emotion ,I didn’t deny that ,what I said was thriller has less emotion . Sci-fi doesn’t have that drama and iam not saying this story has drama ,Iam saying that the writing style looks like drama .slow phased instead of fast phased…[Read more]

Iam very interested in drawing mythical creature considering I have out of many diagrams I had drawn most of it will be dragons and Dino’s …

I can also take up some action poses

But no scenery cause I got bored with drawing architecture and nature

Some of my drawing examples below

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So here is my critic

1) although you draw pretty good face same cannot be said be said for body . You making the neck thin … Don’t do that , neck spreads out not in . It’s more like ‘ )( ‘ and not like ‘ / ‘

2) even though you draw well , shading is messed up … U need to know where to shade , where to be dark and where to highlight .…[Read more]

Iam not good at human face myself (one of the only things Iam worst at )so I can’t critic on how to draw human face , although I can critic on art .

Starting of you draw really good humans far better than me …. I always draw a lot clumsy and no ears (ears are the body part I most struggle with ) that’s why I choosed to draw comic character…[Read more]

I’ll be helping to improve the writing style as soon as Iam free and well … I hope Ill be free and well tomorrow …

You guys did a lot of hard work ,keep it up .

@j-a-penrose I think we should wish each other to get better soon 😉 (u didn’t tell me u were sick when I told you I was :/ )

K ,Iam back from the sick , although Iam not quite free yet …. So I read a few pages , I feel something is off … I’ll tell my concerns here .

1)the setting is off , when I read it I don’t feel like the story is set in space ,tbh I don’t know where the story is set , I only knew after a few pages it was in space …. I thought it was a…[Read more]

@itisastarrynight (ah that’s a big name ) no I didn’t copy that one ,it’s just freestyle…. If I had copied ,it would have been better than that . Although I used reference material to make my own pose … I wanted to draw by own instead of copying cause copying is easy and I think it takes less of my skill … So I am practicing drawing from my…[Read more]

And what I meant by creating new creature is not innovating one or mixing already existing creatures together … We create a new one … Not a phoniex or dragon … But we imagine how it looks (never imagined before ) and we give a name for it ,we design it …

Take the author of darcula for example ,he created vampire which is a popular thing…[Read more]

@cassie-hartfinh …. If you don’t mind can I  read ur first novel with 4th dimension breaking ….

Well to be fair my 4th dimension breaking story is in the critics collum . It’s not a great story but coincidence ,it was my first story too …. So if you don’t mind pls send me the story … I really like innovative type of stories ….

first off … welcome Elisha . you draw really good digital art , better than me .

i personally like vector art . i dont like seeing those pixels when i zoom in or scale up . thats why i use animate , for vector art and because iam an animator  . and thats why i dont like krita cause its raster and i see those pesky little pixels every time…[Read more]

@coggleton

No no no … It’s not a Superman story 😛 , I just told that as an example to how a author comment can be a humour or what is an author comment (the bracket thingy like this one )

And btw I don’t like superman so it’s definitely not a Superman story … It’s just an example …

So now to the original story ideas ….now that Google doc is not established yet .. let me give you my ideas …

So we need to create something original ,how about we create a all new fantasy/supernatural creature and tell the story about it … Like before tokien there were no elves or orcs … So we can create a world of our own and say little…[Read more]

Well I wasn’t there for two guild wars … Now that Iam back let’s do this ….

So bizarre humor … Does author note humor counts ? Breaking the fourth dimension …. Or let’s say we are inside a characters mind and watching his or her story and she says some joke to us readers …. Like interacting with us …. Let’s have the story interact…[Read more]

Yeah I could draw something in my free time after I finish drawing wolverine . No promises though …..

Don’t give me girl characters , I haven’t drawn a single girl character in my life so no experience in that …

I do digital art …. And drawing anything except humans is my specialty (not good at drawing face ) but trying now to get the…[Read more]

 now I know why I haven’t been active ….. I have a bad memory power that’s why I count on my Gmail notif …… The problem is I didn’t get any new post notif ,so I didn’t check it cause opening chrome , going to bookmarks then logging in takes time (oh…. every second counts for me as Iam in a media field or I’m just lazy ) that’s why I click…[Read more]

Who won the first guild war ?(send the winning story btw) I might have forgotten it or I didn’t get an update ….. Ah I have a bad memory power ….(one week later I read a book i wrote and I don’t even remember writing it down)

And what about that Chines dragon with no legs no wings but flys ……. Yep it does fly ….

So someone give me an update on where the world building is …. The status ….. I have forgotten everything … Long time …… I didn’t get any notif on email …. Might have forgotten to click that little check box …..

Ah , not many know it … There are two types of drawings when it comes to digital . Raster and vector . A raster is all ur photos and resolution . It’s basically painting pixels of a computer ,high hi the quality more pixels ,less quality less pixels . So if u zoom in u will see the pixels blending … In theory u can paint a picture as it is by…[Read more]