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So here is my critic

1) although you draw pretty good face same cannot be said be said for body . You making the neck thin … Don’t do that , neck spreads out not in . It’s more like ‘ )( ‘ and not like ‘ / ‘

2) even though you draw well , shading is messed up … U need to know where to shade , where to be dark and where to highlight . Practice a lot of shading . Although I don’t know to draw humans well I cheat the audience with shadows , shadows are one of my strongest art style . Very good shading leads to very good image even though drawing is bad. Although bad Shading can spoil a good image .

The problem with ur images are u r over shading it . The are lot of shadow below the eyes , or none in some images . You need to shade the nose , mouth and chin . U r forgetting those and u forgot to shade below the hair  . Just a little line of shading I enough ,you don’t need to color it that much . But if u want it that big then blend it . A.K.A use many different color of shade . basically practice it more or don’t do it .

3) I really like your 4th image ,I think that’s ur best .you did one of the toughest thing ,expression . Drawing it is one thing but giving expression to it is a whole different thing which is only possible in human drawings and you did , full points in that

4) you need to focus more on drawing hair ,different hair style and things like that … See some reference image and practice drawing different types of hair .

Piece of advice : don’t try to draw girl characters yet , master at drawing male characters and go to girl . Me ,I haven’t drawing a single girl character yet … Not until Iam confident and comfortable at drawing male characters … Ah 15years of drawing and still not a single girl character … :/

That’s all now … 🙂