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Linyang Zhang started the topic November Critique Piece: Psychotic in the forum Peer Review 7 years, 5 months ago
Hi everyone, if you have the time, would you perhaps like to look at my November piece?
Content Warning: There will be blood.
This is actually one of the only pieces of writing that I’ve written that I actually like. I would like feedback on:
-Style. How’s my style?
-Characters. Are the characters developed?
-Setting. Can you see where it…[Read more]
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic CD Week 5: appearance and non-verbal communication {research} in the forum Erekdale Writing Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
Those are some really helpful articles. Thanks for posting them. Now I don’t really feel bad going into a lot of detail about character appearances.
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Character Building Role-Play in the forum Erekdale Writing Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
@sarah-narnathron Ah, besides my personal privacy? Well, you’ll have to come to find out… *grins*
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Character Building Role-Play in the forum Erekdale Writing Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
@sarah-narnathron Well, you got me there.
@catwing I’ll leave that to the experts, then.
@enu Oh yeah, underground can go anywhere, right? Or I could just offer you a personal invitation and you could walk through the front door.
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic November 2018 Accountability in the forum Events & Guild Maintenance 7 years, 5 months ago
Ah, I failed miserably, didn’t manage to compose or transcribe the other two pieces, nor record or upload…
-Write seven pages a day, no sleeping until done
-Homework
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Character Building Role-Play in the forum Erekdale Writing Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
@catwing I always wondered how you did that.
@sarah-narnathron *indignantly* I did not threaten, I simply was imposing possible punishments for trespassers.
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Character Building Role-Play in the forum Erekdale Writing Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
@catwing From Wonderland, I assume? Wonderful. I thoroughly enjoy madness.
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Character Building Role-Play in the forum Erekdale Writing Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
@sarah-inkdragon Yes, that would be fine.
*looks around* Where is everyone else?
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Character Building Role-Play in the forum Erekdale Writing Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
@sarah-inkdragon *snickers* chocolate? Of course I have chocolate. And for that comment, I permit you one pass to come visit without getting potentially killed. Never expires, until used.
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Character Building Role-Play in the forum Erekdale Writing Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
@sarah-inkdragon Lovely. I might just invite you one day, for your politeness.
@catwing Oh, my. Is that a….cat?
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Character Building Role-Play in the forum Erekdale Writing Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
Whoa. Smoke. Cool.
*peers through wall* This place looks…deserted. It must be safe for me, then.
Hello…general inhabitants. I am Devastate Lasting, Phantom of the Highest Order.
Do not expect friendliness, warmness, or anything else of that sort from me. I am a creature of the darkness, the one huddling in the corner of your nightmares,…[Read more]
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Building Erekdale 2.0 in the forum Events & Guild Maintenance 7 years, 5 months ago
@karthmin Okay, cool.
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic NaNoWriMo Word War in the forum Events & Guild Maintenance 7 years, 5 months ago
Count me in too!
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic CD Week 4: quirks {writing} in the forum Erekdale Writing Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
@sarah-inkdragon More like stubbornly unwilling to interfere. XD
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Building Erekdale 2.0 in the forum Events & Guild Maintenance 7 years, 5 months ago
@karthmin A quick question about the role-playing thing: are we doing it in first person or third person?
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic CD Week 4: quirks {writing} in the forum Erekdale Writing Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
@sarah-inkdragon I just realized that you have a character named Vyrn. I have an entire species called the Vyrn.
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic CD Week 4: quirks {writing} in the forum Erekdale Writing Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
@karthmin So for the digging deeper I thought of: a character is always chewing gum, but in reality, sometimes she is chewing up secret messages.
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic CD Week 4: quirks {writing} in the forum Erekdale Writing Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
@thetessinator Ooh I like these. I didn’t think really think of any habits to write about, but that would be fun. Also I liek how you wrote it all in story form.
Thank you for the feedback!
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic CD Week 4: quirks {writing} in the forum Erekdale Writing Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
Ookay. This sounds fun.
-Wearing a white baseball cap all the time. My character wears this to stand out, be recognizable, because without it, there’s nothing remarkable about him. Wearing it also helps him concentrate. His mom gave it to him, and at her funeral, he changed it to a black baseball cap.
-Wearing sunglasses and hiding in a jacket…[Read more]
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