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  • Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago

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    This one has not been proofread yet. I wrote it other day when I was getting frustrated about something. In the middle of my little snit, the words of the chorus came to my mind.  I typed them out, then as the minutes ticked by, more of the song filtered through my frustration. It wasn’t an instant fix, but it helped me get my mind off my problem and onto Him.

    Hope y’all (sorry I live in KY) enjoy this and, as always, feel free to comment critique and post poems of your own or even ask for some pointers.

     

    Patience Please

    Perfect Your patience in me
    Lord I know that you’re so patient with me
    If I’m to be patient with the people around me
    I need you to perfect Your patience in me

    This life rides up and down
    Sometimes a smile melts into a frown
    The plans ravel at the seams
    Somehow nothing works with you it seems

    Impatient and spinning wheels
    So sick of this world’s hoops and deals
    Irritated and blue all round
    Attitude is the key that I’ve found

    Patience is a virtue I lack
    I’ve got to get my life back on track

    Perfect Your patience in me
    Lord I know that you’re so patient with me
    If I’m to be patient with the people around me
    I need you to perfect Your patience in me

    When life doesn’t go my way
    Whose plan is my focus anyway?
    Do I worship only myself
    Just two choices are on my shelf

    Thinking of others or of me?
    Self serving first has a high fee.
    Lord, life is a gift from You
    Lord I should be patient in all that I do

    Perfect Your patience in me
    Lord I know that you’re so patient with me
    If I’m to be patient with the people around me
    I need you to perfect Your patience in me

    This life rides up and down
    Let’s turn a smile back from a frown
    When plans ravel at the seams
    Ravels can weave back into dreams

    I’ll think of them instead of me.
    Self serving first has a high fee.
    Lord, life is a gift from You
    Lord I should be patient in all that I do

    Perfect Your patience in me
    Lord I know that you’re so patient with me
    If I’m to be patient with the people around me
    I need you to perfect Your patience in me

     

    James 1:4-8 King James Version
    But let patience have her perfect work, that ye may be perfect and entire, wanting nothing.

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