Daeus Lamb

@daeus-lamb *cheers you on*

Your idea is pretty incredible. I would just caution that there should be significant evidence in the story to prove it’s conversion… not a suicide 😛

*jumps in* Oooo I’m in time for a guild war! 😀

*reads through all the comments*

@daeus-lamb Firstly, thank you for mentioning Believe Me. *thumbs up* That movie is cool.

Secondly, that would be a totally epic ending! I love it. 😀 As long as there is enough interaction and reaction in there to count as a conversion scene, if that makes sense.

@daeus-lamb do it! 😀 I couldn’t do it either.

@evelyn @daeus-lamb @r-m-archer @eden-anderson

Thanks for all your opinions! I’m considering giving it a trial to see how much I like it.

@Daeus-lamb you should. Speaking for myself I don’t think I could do it justice. 😛

@daeus-lamb

Wow… that’s gonna be great.

@daeus-lamb
I’d be happy to, but I feel like I would be depriving someone else because I already had the privilege of beta reading your course. 🙂 I want to give the others a chance to learn more.

@daeus-lamb

That is brilliant.

Wow! I like that idea a lot.👍

@cassandraia

Ooh, I like your thoughts too!

@daeus-lamb

Awesome. Done. I hope one of them works. 🙂

@daeus-lamb You might want to do Archer’s excerpt. I don’t have extended scenes written except in a fanfiction, and the other ones I have are short stories. Thanks though!

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Via email?

@daeus-lamb that sounds awesome! I think it would be way less cliche than a typical conversion scene. And I like the jumping off a bridge thing.

@daeus-lamb that… could be totally awesome.

@daeus-lamb Oooh! This is a cool introduction to something I don’t have a lot of experience/knowledge about. Most of my critiques involve my best friend doing Google Doc comments on my stories, which mostly helps me with clarity/realistic aspects. But I haven’t had much beta reading done on my work, nor have I ever had an alpha reader (I probably…[Read more]

HEY GUYS. IT’S ME. I WILL BE JOINING YOU.

*proceeds to act as though she didn’t just fall off the face of the earth for a while there*

I like @Daeus-lamb‘s idea about the commentators, but let’s see if we can hash out some plot/character details before we make any serious stylistic decisions.

What are some things NOT to do? What’s the biggest…[Read more]

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I’m having a surprisingly hard time finding an excerpt that’s around 1,500 words. I have one that’s almost 2k and one that’s a little over 1k, if one of those will work.

@daeus-lamb

*thumbs up*

*goes to find a longer scene*

@daeus-lamb I give up. XD

Oooh, this looks super interesting, but I think it will also be quite a challenge. I don’t yet have any ideas, but I vote for not having an altar call, and not reciting the sinner’s prayer. A one-on-one with meaningful, deeply motivated characters would be better.

I’ll pop in when I can for brainstorming, and hopefully have time to come in and…[Read more]

@daeus-lamb I’m open to this too, but like @r-m-archer, what are the specifics of getting it to you?