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CarolineTheWriter replied to the topic Critique on my first chapter of my newest project, Crystal Thieves? in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 11 months ago
Hi Gracie!
Thank you! I’m glad you liked it! I don’t have many plans for Max at the moment, but I’ll try to keep that in mind anyway- thanks for the feedback!
Yes, I’m not worrying too much about the edits- I just would like to hear from people as I write so that I can get better :).
~Caroline
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CarolineTheWriter replied to the topic Critique on my first chapter of my newest project, Crystal Thieves? in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 11 months ago
Thanks again, Ella! 🙂
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CarolineTheWriter replied to the topic Critique on my first chapter of my newest project, Crystal Thieves? in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 11 months ago
@writergirl101 (me hoping this tag thing works)
Thanks so much, Ella! I’ll turn on suggestions on the file for you- here is an updated link, but you should be able to just refresh the original one as well https://docs.google.com/document/d/1CLGkxJoN4xpEgEAIID49i2UcKjIgBQRFy6gojpNcfQg/edit?usp=sharing
I’m so glad you liked it!
1. Ah, yeah, I…[Read more]
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CarolineTheWriter started the topic Critique on my first chapter of my newest project, Crystal Thieves? in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 11 months ago
Hi you guys!
I just joined the forum- so I’m still figuring things out, but I was wondering if I could get some feedback on the first chapter of my new novel? It’s Middle Grade (I think) and a fantasy story- I just need to know if I introduce the characters well, the pacing is alright, the first line, and if my writing/description gets weak at…[Read more]
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