@beth20
Active 1 year, 7 months ago-
Beth replied to the topic Ninjanaria chapter one in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 6 months ago
Hey Eitan! I ‘rewrote’ my first chapter. Hoping it’s a little better than before! Tell me what you think about it.
Chapter One: Disappearing Act
It was late summer and the leaves swished contentedly in the soft breeze. Jered Martin stood outside his house listening to a frog croak in the nearby lake. His family had recently moved to…[Read more]
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Beth Darlene posted an update 6 years, 6 months ago
Hey,
Has anyone ever read
Between the Lines by Jodi Picoult?-
No, I’ve never read it. What’s it about? It sounds interesting though.
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Okay, I was just wondering if it was any good lol!
here’s a synopsis from Wikipedia. It sounds like it could be good but it also sounds like it could be horrible lol!
Delilah, a 15-year-old teenager, bookworm, and social outcast is obsessed with a fairy tale story about Prince Oliver called Between the Lines. No one is able to understand…[Read more]
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@beth20
I haven’t. I usually don’t read in English…-
Okay.
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No I haven’t read it… But I did look it up and read the synopsis. Is the author a Christian? If not, I would be a little leery reading a teen romance. Just my first reaction.
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Yeah, not sure if she is or not. You have a point haha!
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Ya, I agree with Claire. It does sound sorta cool (I mean, what isn’t cool about someone talking to a character from a story book?!?!), but it could also be sorta trashy if it isn’t by a Christian author and it’s a teen romance. Sometimes I’ve started books that seem totally fine, and before I finish reading the end of the first page I have to put…[Read more]
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@Olivia
Yeah I’ve read books written by non christian authors and they were good.
But I’ve never read any romance books. Not really my thing, but this books just looks fun! haha!
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@beth20
I know just because the author isn’t a Christian doesn’t mean they don’t write good books, but romances are very different. I agree that the book does look interesting, but ya, I’d just be careful.-
@olivia
Okay! I looked it up on Common sense media (a site like Plugged In, and it looked fine. I just don’t know how good it is. haha
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Okay, thanks!
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@beth20
Okay, cool. Even if it’s not super good, it sounds okay, so if it’s clean and I had a copy I’d give it a try. 🙂 But it’s up to you of course.
@eitan Okay, thanks.-
Yeah, thank you!
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Yup! 🙂
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Beth replied to the topic Hey Everyone in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 6 months ago
Okay yeah, Spokane is a pretty big city in Washington. Living in the mountains is neat! Here’s a pic taken from our back yard!
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Beth replied to the topic How do YOU begin a fantasy story? in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 6 months ago
I started my book with my main character. One day I said ‘Oh I should write a book!’ then I thought up my main character (Jered Martin) and just started with that. No plot or anything lol! A lot of times I’ll start my short stories with my characters also. Sometimes I’ll think of a feeling and go from there. 🙂
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Beth replied to the topic Favorite Fantasy Christian book? in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 6 months ago
LOVE both The Green Ember and Mistmantle Series!!!!!!!!!
Another favorite!!
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Beth replied to the topic Ninjanaria chapter one in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 6 months ago
Hmm… It isn’t wise to kill your right hand man, or even to threaten him with death. Aclabar is supposed to be wise, after all…
You do have a point there! lol
It’s my best advice for you – before writing, check if it’s God’s will. Don’t repeat my mistake.
Okay! Thank you, I will!
Search ”Jerry Jenkins” and enter his website, you should…[Read more]
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Beth replied to the topic Hey Everyone in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 6 months ago
I’m sorry that your mom had a miscarriage! I had a half-sister her name was Ashly, she died when she was three. I don’t remember her though, because it was before me and my siblings. But I know what you mean, about wondering who she would have turned out to be and how much different our lives would have been.
Yeah, we live kinda next to…[Read more]
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Beth replied to the topic Hey Everyone in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 6 months ago
Ohh yeah I played that one! It was pretty fun!
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Beth replied to the topic Hey Everyone in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 6 months ago
I have never seen Holes but I have seen Tangled. Yes Flynn Rider is dope lol!
My youngest brother is only 13 months older than me. Or as I figured out, one year, one month, one week, and one day exactly! Pretty fun to tell people. 🙂
Hahaha that’s funny!
Do you like having a big family? And you are the second to youngest?
Having a big…[Read more]
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Beth replied to the topic Hey Everyone in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 6 months ago
Okay! Well after you’ve played one watch the everything wrong part. Which one is that? The Salem one?
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Beth replied to the topic Hey Everyone in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 6 months ago
Um I really liked The Ghost of Thorton Hall, The Haunting of Castle Malloy and The Captive Curse!
There is a guy on YouTube who does walk-through of the games and everything wrong with them! He is really funny. Here’s a link
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Beth replied to the topic Hey Everyone in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 6 months ago
@Purple Turtle
Oh okay. Do you play Nancy Drew games? They are really fun. Especially the newer ones!
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Beth replied to the topic Ninjanaria chapter one in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 6 months ago
True! I might publish it, but I have to finish it first and stuff haha.
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Beth replied to the topic Ninjanaria chapter one in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 6 months ago
I don’t know why when I quoted you there’s a bunch of spaces and stuff lol! And why it isn’t blue or whatever.
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Beth replied to the topic Ninjanaria chapter one in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 6 months ago
First off thank you for responding and for you critique! What you said wasn’t offensive, that’s why I posted it on here! 🙂
First of all – break paragraphs. In a dialogue, every sentence should have it’s         own line.
I have noticed that, and have tried to keep that in mind in my later chapters. 🙂
Second – use punctuation…[Read more]
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Beth replied to the topic Hey Everyone in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 6 months ago
Um it’s an xbox 360 game only I think.
From wikipedia: Portal is a series of first-person puzzle-platform video games developed by Valve. Set in the Half-Life universe, the two main games in the series, Portal (2007) and Portal 2 (2011), center on a woman, Chell, forced to undergo a series of tests within the Aperture Science Enr…[Read more]
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Beth replied to the topic Hey Everyone in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 6 months ago
I didn’t like the movie all that much, but books are normally better than movies anyway! 🙂
I’ll have to read her book sometime! Sounds interesting.
Yeah guitar is fun! Cello sounds awesome also!!
I have six siblings my older four siblings moved out and my oldest sister is married with a baby so is my second oldest brother. My oldest…[Read more]
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Beth replied to the topic Hey Everyone in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 6 months ago
Oh yeah the first comments are going to be related to the article so scroll down till you get to my comment about rap! 🙂
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Beth replied to the topic Hey Everyone in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 6 months ago
That would be cool if the honey was really from dates! I have never heard of the salt cedar but it looks cool! Eucalyptus trees look neat also!
Yeah I was a little surprised about Judges lol! I want to read Revelations sometime, never have for some reason haha. It seems kind of confusing!
I belong to a site called World Teen, where I…[Read more]
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Beth replied to the topic Hey Everyone in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 6 months ago
Yeah Minecraft and Portal are pretty much the only video games I play, I’m not a big gamer lol!
And yeah my mom subscribed! It’s supposed to come out in May I think!
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