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Noah Cochran replied to the topic Looking for Beta Readers for a 66k Fantasy Romance in the forum Romance Writers 4 years ago
so to summarize in simplistic fashion, curses derive their power from satan, while blessings derive their power from God…
Who uses the curses?
Who has the power to bless and how do they get it? (does God give that power to them? why?)
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Looking for Beta Readers for a 66k Fantasy Romance in the forum Romance Writers 4 years ago
it’s not meant to be ambivalent or ambiguous, it’s just that they are not known to the protagonist and thus aren’t delved into. The lore is complicated and would take a long time to explain while at the same time would not have anything to do with the novel I wrote, so to summarize in simplistic fashion, curses derive their power from satan,…[Read more]
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Noah Cochran replied to the topic Looking for Beta Readers for a 66k Fantasy Romance in the forum Romance Writers 4 years ago
and an intriguing way of separating it.
It is hard to make what I was saying clear in regard to the difference between fantasy and magic/supernatural. Perhaps this short guest blog post I wrote for Joelle (whom you know) will help make my beliefs clearer:…[Read more]
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Looking for Beta Readers for a 66k Fantasy Romance in the forum Romance Writers 4 years ago
That is an interesting question and an intriguing way of separating it.
Okay. So, essence is more of an ability that the people of the world have. So in my mind it’s not treated like supernatural or magic. It’s far from witchery and it is not seen as breaking the of the rules of nature. However, it actually touches upon racism because each race…[Read more]
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Noah Cochran replied to the topic Looking for Beta Readers for a 66k Fantasy Romance in the forum Romance Writers 4 years ago
That’s an interesting plot, Jared!
However, I do not read books with protagonist-related supernatural content (biblical reasons). Does your book contain supernatural/magical elements? (I do not consider fantasy abilities magic/supernatural unless they are called magic/supernatural or treated as such)
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Mr.Trip Williams started the topic Looking for Beta Readers for a 66k Fantasy Romance in the forum Romance Writers 4 years ago
I know it’s fantasy, so I understand if it’s not your cup-o-tea, but this is also my first attempt at a romance novel… so I would love to hear your thoughts on it, if you are willing.
https://worldofkaphar.weebly.com/aefflaeds-weakness.html
(pictures and descriptions in link)
Aefflaed’s Weakness: A Love Story
This touching story began a…[Read more]
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Erynne replied to the topic What would you like to see more of in romance? in the forum Romance Writers 4 years ago
I understand what you were saying now. We actually believe quite differently on that subject.
Oh…
Well, that’s alright, to each his own, as long as no hard feelings are involved 🙃
Anyways, keep up the good writing!
Thanks! I hope all is going well for you
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Noah Cochran replied to the topic What would you like to see more of in romance? in the forum Romance Writers 4 years ago
I also don’t think I’m understanding what you’re saying exactly, so who knows, I might actually agree
I understand what you’re saying now. We actually believe quite differently on that subject.
Anyways, keep up the good writing!
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Erynne replied to the topic What would you like to see more of in romance? in the forum Romance Writers 4 years ago
I also don’t think I’m understanding what you’re saying exactly, so who knows, I might actually agree XD
We can discuss Legos if you want, I understand that a little more than theology 😂
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Noah Cochran replied to the topic What would you like to see more of in romance? in the forum Romance Writers 4 years ago
If we agree to disagree that’s fine
Yep. 🙂
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Erynne replied to the topic What would you like to see more of in romance? in the forum Romance Writers 4 years ago
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😂 You’re good!I always thought I was saved, but when I went into a hard depression I eventually realized I wasn’t, and it scared me. I always in a way knew I wasn’t because I was always scared of dying and I always doubted, but I would just tell myself I was paranoid.
Similar thing happens to her,…[Read more]
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Noah Cochran replied to the topic What would you like to see more of in romance? in the forum Romance Writers 4 years ago
So she believes she’s saved and she comes off as a “Christian” to most, but she isn’t actually saved. Does that sound better, Professor?
What I was referencing was the possible theological/biblical inaccuracy of the statement. I assume you’re now saying that she thought that accepting Jesus saved her (Armenian belief) but that that was fal…[Read more]
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Erynne replied to the topic What would you like to see more of in romance? in the forum Romance Writers 4 years ago
That’s sounds pretty good
Ah good, I got Professor Cochran’s approval.
I’m not sure that’s how it works, but I won’t start my theology talk again. 🙂
Basically she thinks she’s saved because at one point she prayed a prayer and accepted Jesus into her heart 😉
So she believes she’s saved and she comes off as a “Christian” to most, b…[Read more]
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Noah Cochran replied to the topic What would you like to see more of in romance? in the forum Romance Writers 4 years ago
However, it is shown as a flaw.
That’s sounds pretty good.
Truth be told, she is not actually saved for about half the book, she’s just able to fool people, including herself.
I’m not sure that’s how it works, but I won’t start my theology talk again. 🙂
I did stay up incredibly late last night and wrote 3,000 words.
Great job! Keep that up!
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Erynne replied to the topic What would you like to see more of in romance? in the forum Romance Writers 4 years ago
‘proud to be single.’ I know this is a common thing people claim to be both in real life after a break up and in books, but in my opinion it is not at all a good thing.
Yep, I totally agree. It’s not a biblical perspective of things at all and a self-empowerment way to go.
However, it is shown as a flaw. Truth be told, she is not…[Read more]
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Erynne replied to the topic What would you like to see more of in romance? in the forum Romance Writers 4 years ago
I have roughly 10,000 words of this romance written so far. I thought you might like to hear what I came up with.
After a hard past, Marie got the wrong idea of what a relationship was. She got a clean slate when her best friend, Kat, opened her house up to her. Marie was happy for the first time in her adult life. She was in…[Read more]
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