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@calidris

Ok! I’ll maybe wait to see if some others respond… 🤷‍♀️ I’m new here so I don’t really know what I’m doing😂

Ok so first of all that’s very sad, but I also find it funny because annoying characters are so much fun to work with XD

Yeah, it is😔. At the end of book 1 (currently called Bonds: Purpose) he begins to realize God has a plan…[Read more]

@lady-grace Welcome!  I haven’t been active in here, and I’m not sure I have the time to juggle two castles at once, but I’m totally fine with it!  I’m not sure how active everyone else is, but I’m sure they’ll be fine with it too 🙂

Ok so first of all that’s very sad, but I also find it funny because annoying characters are so much fun to w…[Read more]

@inkhorn I’m glad to hear that!  Basil certainly isn’t my most lovable character, but I have such a soft spot for him.  He’s also got a VERY strong connection to Kit, so I’m looking forward to exploring that dynamic more in here!

Would you like to do an interaction between Val and Conroy?

@ethan-leonard  Welcome!  I’m curious about Emperor Sae…[Read more]

Yeah nobody’s really worked on this castle for a while but there is another role play castle that could definitely use some more characters and it’s fairly new so you don’t have to catch up on a lot: The Character Castle 2.5

@jared-williams

 

I’ve actually got a lot of flack for having the three kids there in that scene. I am thinking of rewriting that whole scene so either there are no kids, or perhaps keep the teenager and the kid but trim it down a lot… not sure. Any suggestions there would be greatly appreciated!

Trimming it down would help, I think.

but I thi…

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@inkhorn

Conroy sounds great! I’m sure he’ll be an interesting addition to the Castle.

@ethan-leonard

I wonder if Lord Castle will like Saevus or not…

@jared-williams

Jade gracefully glided over and stood with her back to me. Her hair smelled of lavender.

Just a little thing, but her hair probably doesn’t smell like that 😂. Honestl…[Read more]

Alrighty thank y’all!

Quick Warning-I tried to make this guy REALLY evil…so he will have some satanisitc traits.

Emperor Saevus looked around. He had no idea why he had suddenly been pulled off and away from his throne, and thrown in this place…whatever it was. But who cared. All he cared about was that he got his interests done, no except…[Read more]

@ethan-leonard

It’d be great to have a new character!

I’ll give you a quick rundown of my other character in the castle, Enydd.

Enydd is in her twenties and has a laidback personality that conflicts with the short spurts of anger that show up when she is under stress. She also is heavily burdened with guilt over a decision that cut her off from…[Read more]

Abirami

Ophelia turned, her face shining with exuberance.

“Did that make sense?” she asked.

Did it make sense?

I nodded.

Sure, I definitely saw what they did… now, could I do that? That was a different question altogether.

“Can you just try the lift again?” she asked, sliding her left foot toward me ever so slightly. “Maybe I can help.…[Read more]

@ethan-leonard

Bring him on! We have a good number of characters in here, but the castle certainly isn’t full 😉  right now, there is about three to four separate groups off conversating or doing their own thing and quite a few characters that are not doing much at the moment and are free to interact with… as well as free to interact with…[Read more]

@ethan-leonard

haha. thank you for your interest. It is nothing like the steamy love stories of modern ilk… if that’s what you are asking. It is a love story only in that this is a story of how the parents of my main character for a book series I am writing met… yeah, not confusing, eh… It was meant to be a short story of how my MC’s…[Read more]

@inkhorn

@mamaauthoress

@merieshenanigans

@emily-waldorf

@calidris

@rose-colored-fancy

Hello all!
If there is room, I’d like to drop in two of my characters.

Finnegan Bruinsdale (usually called Finn for short)
White-blond hair, blue eyes, 16 years old, and about 5’ 9”.
He’s the protagonist of my trilogy. Compassionate, feels complet…[Read more]

Is anyone still using this room? Because I have a villain I would like to drop in…

Hey Everyone!

Im new here, but would it be ok if I dropped a villain of mine in here? I’ve been working on this book and the main character is…eh, but the villain needs work…
If the room is full at the moment that’s ok, just asking.

Ethan L

And one more question: are you going to divide the book up into chapters?

Here are my thoughts concerning Aefflaed’s Weakness:

*Spoiler alert!*

Thank you for putting the pronunciation guide at the front!

It was very easy for me to slip into Aefflaed’s skin in the beginning. The prose there quickly made that connection. This connection continued throughout most of the book, and it was very easy for me to relate to h…[Read more]

Hello There!

I’d be more than happy to check it out, but…is it like the romance novels of today’s world? Or is it toned down…a lot…?

(yes, first sentence was typed in Obi Wan accent XD)

@jared-williams

I’m going to put my beta reading feedback in here so it’s not in the Character Castle.