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  • Kate Flournoy started the topic The World Turned Upside Down in the forum Critiques 7 years, 9 months ago

    Hey guys!

    So, in our thread where we were sharing what we’re writing, you heard about my short story (that became a novelette, basically) that I’m going to be using as a thank-you for people who sign up to my newsletter. It’s there already, but it needed rewriting.

    Well, I rewrote it, and now I’m looking for opinions and advice. This is the one I wrote because I wanted to twist the cliché of the mentor dying for the hero.

    Here it is, and here’s hoping this link works, because it’s the first time I’ve used that kind of link. 😛

    @daeus-lamb @noahlitle @gabbyj @literatureforthelight @msqueen8 @r-m-archer @r-j-karas

     

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